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Hey, guys. I've read in more than one place that editors tend to shy away from PB told in first person, although I have read quite a number of them, both new and old. Anyone know what the rationale is behind this?

Being that most young children are the most self-centered, selfiish little creatures on earth, I would think a book abounding in personal pronouns would be a big hit.
 

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I've heard this as well. Also when it comes to writing one I never seem to be able to come up with a scenario that I think a mass audience of kids would get.

Which ones have you actually read that are in the first person. I'd be interested to have a peek just to see how they pan out?
 

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Of course my brain goes blank when put on the spot.

However, Lauren Childs writes in first person. She has a couple of books narrated by a boy telling stories about his little sister, Nola. She also has a book, THAT PESKY RAT, which is told in first person from the rat's POV.

Mary Ann Hoberman's AND TO THINK THAT WE THOUGHT THAT WE WOULD NEVER BE FRIENDS is first person.

Jane Yolen's OWL MOON is first person.

There are tons more, even more recent publications than my truncated list, but I just can't think of them off the top of my head. Yet whenever I pick one up, either in the library or the store, I mentally note the rule that first person doesn't go over well with young children, and yet I keep running across them.
 
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interesting. i wonder what age first person is thought to be less effective for. i can imagine young kids- toddlers- finding it confusing. my two year old still refers to HIMSELF in the third person. -Cassidy
 

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"My two year old still refers to HIMSELF in the third person."

Wow! Now that's interesting.

Oh, and I just remembered. Mo Willems' pigeon books are also first person.
 
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My thoughts would be that the editors shy away from poorly written first person pbs. Heh, that may go without saying. It is similar to rhyming picture books. You look at the bookstores, read PW and see what is coming out, there are many, many. But, you will hear writers say editors don't want stories in rhyme. They don't want badly written rhyme. SO...the long and blathering point of this is, if you have a story that captivates the reader, has everything that the editor is looking for, the fact the it is written in first person shouldn't be an issue (imo). Owl Moon, of course, being a classic example of first person picture book being really, really well done. (imo again!)

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Cassidy said:
interesting. i wonder what age first person is thought to be less effective for. i can imagine young kids- toddlers- finding it confusing. my two year old still refers to HIMSELF in the third person. -Cassidy
I don't have kids, but I could see a small child getting confused, especially if they are being read to. 'I am so sad' - now is that the person in the story or the person reading the book?