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So many drafts I'm seeing double. Can anyone give a fresh viewpoint?

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jacel

Hello friends,

I've completed my fantasy manuscript and currently I'm editing it again to be the best possible product for marketing. But before I send it to the big publishers who require the entire manuscript, I could really use a fresh viewpoint.

I am looking for someone who can read as many chapters as possible and tell me if there are any glaring issues that need resolved. I feel confident my story is solid and I've worked on grammar, sentence structure and overall voice and flow.

I would be very grateful for anyone who could help me.
 
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Hi, Jacel.

I'm no pro, but if you want an extra set of eyeballs to run your manuscript through, I'll be happy to lend a hand. Just let me know how I can be of help.
 

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Hi Quill,

Thanks and I'll take you up on your offer! I'm excited to see what you think of my story, even if it's just you reading it and seeing what you like or don't like.

So how can we do this? I can send you chapter by chapter if that's easier or a chunk at a time...just let me know ;)

And again, thanks; it means a lot to me to have you do this.

(Is there anything I can do to help you?)

Jacel
 
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Tell you what, toss a chunk over today and I'll go through it this weekend and give you some feedback by Monday. I can't get here on weekends at the moment since my computer's sick. :Hammer:


Thanks for the offer of help. Can I have a rain check for that? Chocolates are well-received too. :tongue (Just kidding) My WIP is still in completion stage at the moment, so there's nothing much that can be done about it.

I think you'll find my email on my profile. If not, give me a poke and I'll send it to you via PM
 
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