I'm out of here

[Fartin Mowler]

This site isn't very motivating. :rolleyes If anyone wants to send me crap to read or want's to read my crap then send me an email. crashmycarhard@hotmail.com :lol Smell you later :x

[Vigorish9]

you really should reinvent yourself as liquid plumber.

vig

[William Haskins]

translation: no one validates my sloppy ideas, and i wasn't about to make any effort to improve myself. if they're not smart enough to recognize my genius and fawn over me accordingly, i'll just go somewhere else.

[Noah1]

You'll be as missed as a herpes flare-up.

[scripter1]

There IS A GOD!!!!!!

[dpaterso]

scripter, why diss a potential client? Think of the satisfaction to be had in plucking an illiterate monkey from the jungle and showing it how to wear clothes and use a knife and fork and not pick its ass in genteel company.

If the experience didn't kill you, it sure as hell would have made you stronger.

-Derek
-----------------------My Web Page - naked women, bestial sex, and whopping big lies. (http://hometown.aol.co.uk/DPaterson57)

[scripter1]

Oh no no no no...... no.

Fartin revealed his character from the very beginning and I want nothing to do with him.
I take clients that express some desire to learn and want constructive criticism and have done some amount of learning on their own.

I'm an adviser not a miracle worker. :p

[kojled]

fm

if you leave who will use animated faces in their posts? good luck


zilla

[Fartin Mowler]

scripter, why diss a potential client? Think of the satisfaction to be had in plucking an illiterate monkey from the jungle and showing it how to wear clothes and use a knife and fork and not pick its ass in genteel company.

I frequent another site and by accident I clicked onto this site again and I was curious who might answer. I searched around before coming to this site and really couldn't find that many script writing forums. I think most of you guy's are funny . I honestly got bored waiting for someone to post something interesting. I'm writing something new and so far I think it's not bad...so if you want to critique it I would be honoured. fartinmowler.proboards42....1105981755 (http://fartinmowler.proboards42.com/index.cgi?board=general&action=display&num=1105981755)

[Noah1]

Wait...I thought you left?

If you leave, you're not supposed to come back.

So, be a good boy and leave again.

[William Haskins]

hysterical.

[scripter1]

No, pathetic.

[maestrowork]

I'm surprised people actually replied.


Moving on, there's nothing to see here.

[DoubleIT]

Uh. Do you even know proper script format?

[Fartin Mowler]

:lol thank for reading it. last night I had 66 views and this morning 78. I have a real job to feed my family to do, so I don't have time to waste posting "What if I wrote the best screen play and the world, what'st the proper format "if" it's good?" questions :rolleyes you guy's should just keep writing and I don't mean Dereks over prolific hodge podge.

[dpaterso]

I confess I couldn't stop myself from clicking on the link and having a look -- like rubbernecking a car crash. There's very little in the way of entertainment here, unfortunately. Writing sample and site both seem more like a cry for help than any serious attempt at anything, but as long as you're having fun, that's what counts. Me, I'll stick with my overprolific hodge podge, thanks.

-Derek
-----------------------My Web Page - naked women, bestial sex, and whopping big lies. (http://hometown.aol.co.uk/DPaterson57)

[Vigorish9]

fartin makes you look like hemmingway, derek.

vig

[dpaterso]

fartin makes you look like hemmingway, derek.

Coming from you, vig, as it does, that means, God... that means, it means a lot to me, you know? No sale, no deal, will ever be as satisfying to me as receiving that comment... today... from you... taking time out of your hectic schedule to weigh in... God I can't see the monitor, my eyes are welling with tears... you've touched me, man, deeply.

-Derek
-----------------------My Web Page - naked women, bestial sex, and whopping big lies. (http://hometown.aol.co.uk/DPaterson57)

[Vigorish9]

i'm glad you're pleased.

vig

[scripter1]

Everyone has a purpose.

Fartin's is to make D look better.
May he do it long and well.

[Fartin Mowler]

See again I'm not insulted because Derek, I am having fun. I would love to read a great script by you and If someone will go on his site and recommend one for me to read, than post it and I will. I won't mention it again.

[dpaterso]

I'm terrifically pleased to be the subject of your attention, Martin, it makes me feel as if I've got a real live fan, albeit a heavy breathing stalker lurking in the shadows kind of fan. My question to you was, what's your favorite film and have you read the script, as an introduction to how scripts are written, since everything you've spewed is just plain wrong, from format through execution, and damn near incomprehensible as a result. Since I'm the only one who's put up writing samples for all to see then yeah, I can understand as how it's tempting to target me, go ahead if it gives you a warm fuzzy. Some folks have liked the samples and gone out of their way to say so, some folks have kindly taken time to offer me great advice, and a handful of people over the years seem to have real problems with me and my writing, for no reason they've ever been able to articulate. All these reactions have pleased me in different ways. Thanks for yours.

-Derek
-----------------------My Web Page - naked women, bestial sex, and whopping big lies. (http://hometown.aol.co.uk/DPaterson57)

[Vigorish9]

f"or no reason they've ever been able to articulate" dp

are you on this planet? people have contributed a list to your problems that start in seattle and end in paris.

as the crow flies, so that helps a little

vig

[dpaterso]

Lucky me, I now have two heavy breathing stalker fans.

Neither appear to be particularly articulate. Both share severe literacy problems. Connections, connections...

-Derek
-----------------------My Web Page - naked women, bestial sex, and whopping big lies. (http://hometown.aol.co.uk/DPaterson57)

[Fartin Mowler]

I'm Fuzzy...

[William Haskins]

the ghost of fartin mowler lives on. he wants to leave so bad, but he just can't give up the attention.

[Fartin Mowler]

I'm enjoying reading Simon's comments. Sure it's fun to get a bit of attention and entertain on a site that seemed stagnant when I arrived. I have my own business and I'm working alone 90% of the time, giving me a lot of opportunity to think up story ideas. I thought it would be fun to find something that was fun to do that I could make people laugh.

[Vigorish9]

i'm sure the stagnation of the board, and it's present stage of vitality are do to the fact that there was a tsuanmi that swept from another board, tumbled into this quiet beach town and as time has passed some of his frends have come to visit

hi you guys - vig waves from his his new spot at the zoo. you guys doing good? i sure do miss you fellas. want to sit down and have smoothy?

vig

[Fartin Mowler]

gotta love that sarcasm...:lol The Loomis guy showed up today with a package that said "Nobel Prize" for a D Paterson. I figured "what the hell" and when I opened it up. There was a wierd folded object and a small piece of paper that said "instructions on how to blow up doll" not included :lol