Mentor or critique partner

[Harris]

I'm looking for someone to look at a few chapters of a thriller I've written. I can return the favor but I'm not the best editor. I need someone experienced to help me see what I'm doing wrong. I am up for harsh opinions. Anyway, let me know if there are any takers. Just send me a PM.

Thanks.

[KTC]

I would be happy to look at it. I will send you a PM with my email address. I'm not looking for a critiquer at the moment, as I am in a very supportive critique group. But I'd love to help you out. PM on the way.

Kevin

[KTC]

You have a PM. (-;

[Harris]

Thank you. I've sent the prologue and 2 chapters using my Gmail account.

[KTC]

That's great. Thanks. I look forward to reading it!

[Harris]

I'm still looking for a read/critique partner. Warning, I think I scared the last one away. :)