I know that this thread has already been posted but I can't find it. I need some advice on POV. My novel, Rain, is written in first person POV but I am rewriting it now and came across a scene that seems to switch over to third person adapted POV and am not sure if I should leave it there. It is basically a case of the narrator, Emily experiencing the world through Maggie's POV. It would be simple to change it to conform with the first person POV but wonder how it looks to AW ers. If somebody would be nice enough to take the time to read the following paragraph and give an opinion, I'd be grateful.Please tell me if you think the following paragraph is a switch over from first person (Emily's POV.) Thanks
Maggie came across me as I leaned against the kitchen counter “What is it, kid? You look like you’re on the moon. How long have you been standing there like that?”
“Oh, I was just planning Chapter 8.”
Maggie came across me as I leaned against the kitchen counter “What is it, kid? You look like you’re on the moon. How long have you been standing there like that?”
“Oh, I was just planning Chapter 8.”