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I have a very newbie question here and would greatly appreciate the advice of more experienced writers.
I've had four requests for a partial within the past month. Agents #1 and #2 have since rejected me with similar feedback about my protagonist. So, I have made revisions with this in mind and I believe the manuscript is better now. The good news is, I was able to submit to Agent #4 the newly revised version. The bad news is, Agent #3 has the "old" version, which I fear may be rejected.
Agent #3 asked for two months and only one has passed, so my guess (and hope) is that she hasn't looked at my partial yet. I'm thinking of emailing her to offer her the "newly revised" verison in the event that she hasn't read the old one. I don't want to appear unprofessional or insecure, but I also don't want to blow my opportunity with her based on a not-as-good partial.
So, what should I do? Would offering a revised version before she looks at the partial be a major faux pas or perfectly normal?
I've had four requests for a partial within the past month. Agents #1 and #2 have since rejected me with similar feedback about my protagonist. So, I have made revisions with this in mind and I believe the manuscript is better now. The good news is, I was able to submit to Agent #4 the newly revised version. The bad news is, Agent #3 has the "old" version, which I fear may be rejected.
Agent #3 asked for two months and only one has passed, so my guess (and hope) is that she hasn't looked at my partial yet. I'm thinking of emailing her to offer her the "newly revised" verison in the event that she hasn't read the old one. I don't want to appear unprofessional or insecure, but I also don't want to blow my opportunity with her based on a not-as-good partial.
So, what should I do? Would offering a revised version before she looks at the partial be a major faux pas or perfectly normal?