Who Wants to Be a Superhero?

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No, not a thread about that silly SciFi Channel "reality" series. Sorry to disappoint.

This morning I received my 18th agent rejection (which isn't a lot, in the grand scheme of things, and this isn't a thread about query discouragement). Something in the short note made me stop and pause, and now I'm befuddled.

She said she wasn't the right agent for the book, and that she hoped I found an agent who did work with fantasy.

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I stared at the sentence for a minute, because my story isn't fantasy. At least not in the Tolkien sense of fantasy. I checked the query I had sent. I called my book "urban fantasy," because nothing else seemed right. I wonder if that was a mistake.

Urban fantasy seems to dredge up images of magic, vampires, demons, and their ilk, in a contemporary setting. Paranormal, if you will. Now my novel has paranormal elements, but no magic, vampires, demons, or their ilk. The characters have extrasensory powers, but they are not magical or alien. They are a biological anomoly, like the X-gene in the X-Men universe.

Agents want to know the genre in a query, so I am now at a loss as to how to explain my novel. It could be considered science fiction, but even that dredges up images of space ships, aliens, future tech, and other planets. Again, none of that (although there is an android, but he's about as future tech as things get) exists in my novel.

I troll the SFF section of Borders about once a month, browsing the titles and looking for similar novels. The closest thing I've ever read to what I write is an X-Men tie-in novel called "Smoke and Mirrors," by Eluci Bes Shahar.

The powers my characters possess are all clairvoyant, telepathic or telekinetic based abilities (no one shoots beams out of their eyes or has blue fur). You know why their powers work, and how they came to possess them, and they have physical side effects to using them.

Should I state that my book will appeal to fans of X-Men (or even the new show Heroes)? I feel like saying "I've not seen anything similar in bookstores" will sound like a desperate plea (not to mention make me sound like an idiot if it turns out I'm wrong).

During the recent Crap-O-Meter, Miss Snark mentioned she will read anything dealing with superheroes, since they are hot right now. Is a new sub-genre emerging? Should I latch onto it with both hands?

Has anyone actually read this entire rant? :e2hammer:
 

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chaostitan said:
Should I state that my book will appeal to fans of X-Men (or even the new show Heroes)? I feel like saying "I've not seen anything similar in bookstores" will sound like a desperate plea (not to mention make me sound like an idiot if it turns out I'm wrong).

During the recent Crap-O-Meter, Miss Snark mentioned she will read anything dealing with superheroes, since they are hot right now. Is a new sub-genre emerging? Should I latch onto it with both hands?

Has anyone actually read this entire rant? :e2hammer:

Me. :) As I was reading, I was thinking, ooooo, the query letter should mention that new show, Heroes. So you're on the right track there, imho. That's what your story is like. A current day contemporary story where ordinary people have develope superhero powers. :)

Good luck with it. I watched the first episode of Heroes and enjoyed it, so I'm hoping it stays around a while. You might want to keep that in mind, though -- if they cancel it quickly, mentioning it in the query letter might NOT be such a good thing.

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Susan Gable said:
. You might want to keep that in mind, though -- if they cancel it quickly, mentioning it in the query letter might NOT be such a good thing.

Believe me, I've considered that, too. The premiere had impressive numbers, but so did a lot of new shows this year. If I do decide to mention it, it'll be after a few more weeks. TV audiences are fickle. ;)
 

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I think most agents probably consider urban fantasy as the dark, gritty stuff with wizards, vampires, werewolves and/or elves in a modern, urban enviornment. This seems like a hot genre right now, so when you say urban fantasy you are probably bringing that to mind.

I think a story with normal people developing powers could probably be defined as "Paranormal" ... I usually see Paranormal mixed with other things like "Romance", though. Do you have suspense or thriller elements? Could your book be defined as something like "Paranormal Suspense" (drawing allusions to authors like Koontz)?

It might even be considered Science Fiction, depending on the tone.
 

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Do you have suspense or thriller elements? Could your book be defined as something like "Paranormal Suspense" (drawing allusions to authors like Koontz)?

There are elements of suspense, but nowhere near what Koontz writes. The story is character driven, rather than plot driven (the kind of story that I prefer).

King's Firestarter is a close example, I think, although I can't say how close because I gave up on that one after about sixty pages. Or the first half of Dreamcatcher, before all the military peeps and aliens start showing up.

Hmm... Paranormal suspense with superhero tendencies? :D
 

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dragonjax said:
Last I heard, SMALLVILLE was doing damn well. Why not call it "superhero fiction"?

I'm leaning toward that, Jackie. Although I think my heroine would throw rocks at my head if I ever called her a superhero. ;) She prefers to think of herself as "talented."
 

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You know, they say it's the easiest thing in the world - to name your genre. After all, we're the creators of these stories, we're suppose to know what they are. But it's not that simple ! Especially when we know full well by saying Fantasy or Science Fiction, certain images are going to pop into people's heads that have nothing to do with what we've just written.

I think you might be on to something there calling it Superhero fiction. It's worth a try, anyway. And it might help to dispell the image that Fantasy gives (like dragons and wizards) or Science Fiction (space, aliens).

I agree TV audiences are fickle, at best, but I think the Superhero idea has been popular for a long while - and TV is just trying to hop onto that band wagon. If that show (didn't see it) gets canned, I wouldn't let that bother me, if I were you.

After all - we're so much better than the average Hollywood writer, aren't we? :D
 

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After all - we're so much better than the average Hollywood writer, aren't we? :D

Most definitely. :hooray:

I've rewritten the query to include the superhero aspect (and the fact that the heroine hates the comparison), and I think it's stronger for the changes. Cross your fingers for this next round of submissions.
 

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When I queried agents for Hell's Belles, I didn't mention the genre at all -- I let the agent decide what it was. Here's the query I used:

Dear Agent:

Jezebel’s not your average exotic dancer. For one thing, she’s a four-thousand-year-old succubus. For another, she’s on the run from Hell (which is a ***** to do in high heels). Hiding on the mortal coil as a human doesn’t protect her from muggers, lactose intolerance…or having feelings for Paul, a man haunted by his past. Demons are closing in, which is enough to make Jezebel shiver in her G-string. But it’s her love for Paul that’s going to have deadly consequences. (Humans, she laments, really should come with instruction manuals.)

Filled with humor, action, and warmth-inducing love scenes (Jezebel’s not a succubus anymore, but she’s not dead), Hell’s Belles will appeal to fans of Katie MacAlister and Laurell K. Hamilton. This 80,000-word novel has something for everyone: irreverence, wit, magic, sex, strippers, Good and Evil, a soundtrack, and a touch of controversy.

I’m the science fiction and fantasy editor for Wild Child Publishing. My published work appeared in Byzarium, Wild Child, Peridot Books, and Tenebres; my fiction has been accepted for upcoming issues of Farthing, From the Asylum, and Ruthie’s Club.

Tempted by Hell’s Belles? If so, contact me by e-mail at EMAIL, by postal mail via the enclosed S.A.S.E, or by phone at PHONE. Sample chapters, the complete manuscript, and a brief synopsis are available. (G-strings and Shields Against Evil not included.)


Best wishes,
 

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Chaos,
You have superheroes in a modern setting, correct? It IS fantasy, which covers a broad spectrum. You category IS urban fantasy. I have researched this for months because mine is similar in tone to yours, and mine is dark urban fantasy, according to a few agents. Anyway, go with fantasy agents. I go with agents who rep. sci-fi/fantasy/horror, so there's no room for error...lol.
 

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HorrorWriter said:
Chaos,
You have superheroes in a modern setting, correct? It IS fantasy, which covers a broad spectrum. You category IS urban fantasy.

They aren't superheroes in the traditional sense of the word, and my fear is that "urban fantasy" conjures up the wrong image. Argh, my poor brain.

The funny thing is, regardless of subgenre, the book would probably end up in the SF/F section, anyway. :tongue
 

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Are they "regular" people with preternatural talents? In a modern setting? My characters are not superheroes either. No spidey senses, but it is construed as urban fantasy, which is fantastic themes in a modern setting. When you are querying, you cannot make up a category, that's an automatic rejection. Just slap a label on it, and the agent can change it later if need be. I don't like to label my work, that's for someone else to do. Speaking from experience here. :Shrug:
 

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The characters have extrasensory powers...

I'm pretty sure you're supposed to call this a psychic thriller.

I don't know why I think that, but I do.

And don't worry about the genre label conjuring the wrong image. Your query letter will tell them what they need to know.
 

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chaostitan said:
:ROFL: From someone who labeled themself "HorrorWriter." :D

Thanks for the input.

Okay, smarty pants!:tongue My main focus IS horror, but I also write dramas, children's stories, thrillers, etc. People may not label my work as horror, even though I consider most of it to be. The point is, worry about the writing, not the label. If you label is wrong, your agent will correct it for you.
 

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Hi chaostitan,

Below is the letter that I send out to agents and publishers. But one thing to remember is; the book title is just as important as the story. A good title attracts attention.


THE IMMORTAL THIRTEENTH DISCIPLE.


This is the story of a young man called Kaine who meets Jesus Christ some 2000 years ago.


Jesus cures ‘the cripples and heals the sick, however, he gives Kaine the greatest of all gifts, that of immortality. With it, comes a quest to save the future of mankind from its own destruction.


Kaine spends over 2000 years travelling the world with each day bringing yet another adventure. These journeys lead him to the lost city of Atlantis which is suspended in a future time. Here he learns about the Atlantians themselves who left Earth seeking a new home after they accidentally caused the total destruction of the planet. They left behind four golden keys that will bring the Atlantis back to Earth.


This science fiction story, that staggers the imagination, unfolds the mystery of the people Kaine helps throughout his historic travels. People like: Leonardo da Vinci, Nostradamus, and H. G. Wells just to name a few. However, it’s not until he is given his final quest in the year 2079 that Kaine discover what Earth is all about, and who he really is.


The second book in the trilogy: ‘The Four Keys to Atlantis’ is another science fiction adventure story in which Kaine befriends a girl and together they search the world for the four golden keys of Atlantis. On their journey they stumble on lost treasures and find port-holes ‘that take them 10 million years into the past and 10000 years into its future, as well as a mystery trip through the Bermuda Triangle.


Book final book in the trilogy is about the events that happened in the Bermuda Triangle.
 
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