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Though I belong to two writing groups, neither one is a novel-writing group, so the feedback I get from them, though sometimes useful, does not relate to the novel's form. Posting snippets or even whole chapters, equally useful, does not address questions I have about organization. I have a finished work which I have written two different ways, in third person and in first person and with the ending first followed by a long back story and also as a straight-forward chronological progression. It has been beta read in both versions, but no one has read the two different ones (and how could I expect them to?) and these readers are not writers anyway.

What do writers do to decide what works best? Is it just a lonely decision or is there some method whereby I could get the benefit of some trustworthy person's opinion when I have questions like this? My beta readers have been fine at telling me what they liked and what didn't work for them, but they have no clues about other ways I might have written the story.
 

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The story should determine how it needs to be told. Maybe you need to put it away for a certain length of time, say 6 weeks or 6 months, then dig it out and read both. Seeing it with fresh eyes, so to speak, you might find the answer.
 

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If it makes sense, if it is the best possible format for the story, if you don't lose any of your readers, then it works.

If it drops any of the above it doesn't.
 
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