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Hi,
This is my first real post, so please excuse me if I don't make much sense and screw up the terminology.
I write in third person past tense, and I'm having a few problems with internal dialogue. I've read writing books that say it's fine to stay in third person for internal dialogue (Is that the right term?).
Lame example:
He swept up the sword and dashed down the hill. Could he reach them in time?
I know some writers also use first person for internal dialogue.
Another lame example:
He creaked open the tome and traced a finger down the page. As he reached the third paragraph his finger stopped. He knew that name. My father.
Okay, so my question is can I use both methods within a book, or do I have to stick with either one or the other? I'd prefer to use a combination because sometimes one just seems to work better than the other.
Thanks for any thoughts you can give me on this question.
This is my first real post, so please excuse me if I don't make much sense and screw up the terminology.
I write in third person past tense, and I'm having a few problems with internal dialogue. I've read writing books that say it's fine to stay in third person for internal dialogue (Is that the right term?).
Lame example:
He swept up the sword and dashed down the hill. Could he reach them in time?
I know some writers also use first person for internal dialogue.
Another lame example:
He creaked open the tome and traced a finger down the page. As he reached the third paragraph his finger stopped. He knew that name. My father.
Okay, so my question is can I use both methods within a book, or do I have to stick with either one or the other? I'd prefer to use a combination because sometimes one just seems to work better than the other.
Thanks for any thoughts you can give me on this question.