Dpat, I just wanted to let you know that I was really enjoying your 20 page sample script Higher Than Usual. Got some good laughs in it.
I loved the office scenes. They were intense and funny. My favorite part was the I think it was Dexter coming down the hall with his pocket torn and sort of mangled, telling him they had him in the bathroom. The accountants stealing coffee from their machine!
The last part where he helps the girl in the car was a little lengthy though, dialogue didn't seem very real. But overall I really enjoyed the sample!
For anyone else that wants to check it out here is the link.
http://hometown.aol.co.uk/dpaterson57/s_higher.htm
I loved the office scenes. They were intense and funny. My favorite part was the I think it was Dexter coming down the hall with his pocket torn and sort of mangled, telling him they had him in the bathroom. The accountants stealing coffee from their machine!
The last part where he helps the girl in the car was a little lengthy though, dialogue didn't seem very real. But overall I really enjoyed the sample!
For anyone else that wants to check it out here is the link.
http://hometown.aol.co.uk/dpaterson57/s_higher.htm
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