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K-Mark

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A few years back, I worte a novel. It was 335,000 words on 700+ single-spaced pages. Way too long for a first-time novel. I edited it down more and more, but still have a healthy word-count on my hands.

The basic premise is 10 twenty-somethings spend a week in a shore house together, each facing their own individual conflicts. Date-rape, gambleholic, alcoholic, scorned love, etc. Ten conflicts.

Since the novel is too long, I've been toying with the idea of breaking it down into individual novels. Each character gets his own novel, but all the novels have the same setting and some of the stories overlap. Scenes where other "supporitng" characters are there, but are main characters in thier own books.

I think I can make it mesh. I tried doing one book (two characters are brothers so I used both) and whittled it down to 120,000 words.

My question. Is there a market for this? Do I query it as a series? It is stand alone, but sometimes you'll see a character disappear into another room, let's say, and what happens in that other room si in another book now.

Just wanted some other angles or suggestions on this. I've toyed writing a TV series based on this book and it's going pretty well. I already finished the first episode (with help from the screenwriting forum), so I might go this route. Just wanted some fresh opinions.

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I think it sounds interesting. Of course it could be done very well or very badly. It could have a sort of Pulp Fiction vibe with the stories all interweaving. If you do it as well as Tarantino, then you could have a classic. Good Luck with it.
 

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I would query the first as a stand-alone. If there's interest, you could always explain there's more. I think 120,000 words is still a bit lengthy for mainstream fiction.
 

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It could work. But there's a lesson in there. The reason the original novel is too long is because you had too many characters and were telling too many stories. The two brothers book is the orginal novel written correctly.
 

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Could your market potentially be an older YA market? Based on what you've told us, it sounds like a possible YA to me.
 

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Wow. They are some pretty good suggestions. Puts some new thoughts in my head.

It never crossed my mind to go the YA direction. That's interesting. I'll be thinking about that.

James, you are right. The twins novel has become the hub. Lesson learned.

Begbie, I was thinking along those lines. One stand alone book, one stand alone query with maybe a brief mention of the others in the series.

Kilamangiro, thanks for your support, too
 
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