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I have a story that I have been working on for a little over two years now, it is a sci-fi mystery. The problem I am having is, every time I read it I edit it from the main character telling the story to my telling of the story.
Which way is the proper? They both get the point across:
Mike Sloan walked into his office at the Willows County Sheriff's Office.
I walked into my office at the Willows County Sheriff's Office.
What would be easier for the reader without losing track?
Which way is the proper? They both get the point across:
Mike Sloan walked into his office at the Willows County Sheriff's Office.
I walked into my office at the Willows County Sheriff's Office.
What would be easier for the reader without losing track?