So my character is at the top of a high cliff in one scene & has moved beyond it (is now at the bottom, in other words) by the next. It is standard enough that people of this world have to go up & down this cliff, that simply climbing it wouldn't make sense. I thought, what if I had a rope & pulley elevator that can be used to avoid climbing.
So, a) In a sword & sorcery type of fantasy, would the term "elevator" throw my readers for a loop? I don't want to write the scene w/ her going down the cliff 'cuz it's not that important, but considering the last person we saw there fell off the cliff & it was a big deal, I should mention that there's a way to get down.
b) Anybody else have this problem w/ today's terms you worry won't work for describing something in your novel, because they refence technology that's either too advanced (some fantasy) or too primitive (most sci-fi)?
So, a) In a sword & sorcery type of fantasy, would the term "elevator" throw my readers for a loop? I don't want to write the scene w/ her going down the cliff 'cuz it's not that important, but considering the last person we saw there fell off the cliff & it was a big deal, I should mention that there's a way to get down.
b) Anybody else have this problem w/ today's terms you worry won't work for describing something in your novel, because they refence technology that's either too advanced (some fantasy) or too primitive (most sci-fi)?