Introduction (My First Novel)

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Hello Everyone,

My name is Scott and I just joined the forum. I know that writing can sometimes be a very lonely experience, so hopefully, here I can communicate with others, and share some thoughts, as well as listen.

I have just finished my first novel, and, after one more quick read for any errors, I am ready to get it out there and get published. However, I am very uneducated as far as the business part of writing and publishing goes. That is where I need the most help. On a personal level, I work in a factory right now, and I would love to be able to leave it and pursue my dreams.

But, I do not write for money. This story has followed me since I was in my mid teens (I am now 26) and has not let go. Originally, I wrote it as a screenplay. Then, several years later, I started to "adapt" it into a novel. But through the novel writing process, I found more depth than I ever had with the screenplay (which I wrote when I was quite young). The story just has not let go of me. When I write (be it good or poor writing from a critical standpoint) it is with my heart. I truly love what I am writing about, and I have to say that it is a huge part of my life, whether one person reads it, or a hundred, or a million. It doesn't matter. The hard part is finding the time to work on it.

There has been setbacks. Very few instances of writer's block. The biggest setback was a computer malfunction shortly after I started work on the novel. Eighty or ninety pages into it, I ended up losing it. But, I started it up again, and saw it through, even though it took me nearly two years to do it. But, I saw it through, and I feel I am on my way to seeing it published. I just need a map to get there.

I look forward to hearing from all of you. I am a good listener, and I hope to be able to help in any way. I look forward to hearing about your experiences with writing, publishing, etc. as well.

I hope you all have a great night!
Take care!

Scott.
 

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Hi! I think you'll love it here. Everyone is so helpful, and there's tones of information, especially about the business side of writing. I believe there are even some editors who post here.

I know what it's like to have something just sort of follow you around until you write it down. For me, it was a character.

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Welcome. I am sure you will get a lot of good advice about submitting your first novel here.

But it's also time to start writing your second novel. ;)
 

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Tilda said:
Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I got the impression you've edited your work very little ...

Welcome, Scott.

I got the same impression as Tilda. Did you know that Hemingway rewrote the last chapter of A Farewell To Arms 39 times, trying to get it right?

Now that I've scared you, I recommend two books highly: Self-Editing for Fiction Writers by so-and-so and Brown, and Stein On Writing by Sol Stein, and I think his other book is How to Grow a Novel, but don't quote me on that.

There is also a Share Your Work forum on this Web site, if you want to post the first chapter and let some of us throw roses and darts at it.
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Hiya, Scott, and welcome.

It might be worth letting a few people here read a section of your novel. The points about editing are absolutely spot on, and I worry that you might have been 'too close' to the story.

I've seen some short fiction recently from someone whose work I admire, and it fell way short of the mark. I made comments such as "not one of your best" and "you've written better", and the writer in question admitted the stories were based very much on personal traumatic experiences. Although she felt they were coming from deep within her, and with so much meaning, they were not good stories.
 

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Hello,

Thanks to those of you who introduced yourselves and welcomed me to the group.

One question I wanted to ask everyone is exactly how each of you go about editing and revising? Not just the grammar, but the story itself? For me, the story never really leaves my mind. It plays itself over and over on the way to work, while I am working, while I am listening to music, while I am doing physical work (splitting wood, etc.) outside, and when I am drifting off to sleep. Somehow, there are always ideas swimming around inside my head. Some useful, some not so much. My revising is very sporatic. I may read one chapter and be satisfied with it, changing very little. I may look at another, and be constantly tweaking it, trying to perfect it, never totally satisfied. I may be at work, when a sentence, or a descriptive paragraph, or some useful information might come to me, and I manage to hold onto it until I get home. Then, I go to the place in my novel where I feel it belongs and I put it in there and see how it fits. Sometimes, I take notes in point form for ideas I have for later chapters in the novel. And yet, the strange and wonderful thing of it is, is that sometimes, the characters will actually reveal things about themselves to me on their own. Does that happen to you? It's a pretty amazing thing.

I look forward to reading any of your work that you wish to share, and hope that maybe some of you will take a peek at my work sometime. However, I need help posting my first chapter in the forum. I'm new, and still don't know my way around very well.

Take care, everyone, and have a great night!
 

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Wow, your editing/revising sounds so much like mine. :D I have pens and paper everywhere in the house so no matter where the perfect phrase strikes me, I'm ready. I keep a pad and pencil in my car too, and have another, smaller one that fits in my pocket. The best ideas always seem to hit out of nowhere, and the further I am from pen and paper, the better the idea.

When I can be organized about it, I like to print out a hard copy of my work and then go over it with a pencil. Small changes I make on the page, big changes I just make a notation and then write what I want to go there on a pad of lined paper. I'll go over my work once or twice, then change what I have to on the computer and type a new copy out. Sounds like a waste of paper, I know, but to me it looks totally different printed out than on the computer screen.

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Scott, where'd you get the idea that writing is a lonely pastime? Some of my best times have been hanging out with characters I've created.
 

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Hello Everyone,

Just wanted to let you know that I posted the first chapter of my novel in the Share Your Work section. It is called FALL and it is listed in the horror section.

I hope you like it. Please, let me know what you think.

Scott.
 
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