Kindest no ever...
Just got rejection #1 from agent #1
"You've done an extraordinary job putting this proposal together--absolutely no question about it. Your writing is fine, the story incredibly amazing. I have the feeling that the POV character should have been the paleontologist on the site instead of yourself, it would have made this a bit more interesting since it reads much like an article. Don't get me wrong, this is very, very subjective and I encourage you to place this elsewhere, it's very well done."
It goes on and on with more glowing comments and why he was sorry that his initial reaction to the first email query didn't carry over with the same enthusiasm. This one hurt, even though it was my first in 15 years. I have three other agents who want to see it, so I guess I'll pack it up and get it out there again. This POV thing really bothers me. I told them all in the query that this was written in MY POV, reporting on the facts and circumstances AFTER THE FACT. I'll file this critique and remember it if this summation comes up again.
Never give up, never surrender.
Triceratops