What To Do When Your MC Isn't Really Yours...

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Has this ever happened to anyone else? You get 80% done with the first draft of a WIP, only to realize your MC is eerily similar to another popular character? So much so that you feel compelled to scrap the entire thing because you feel like some kind of thief?

This happened to me last night. I closed out a chapter in my WIP and, when I was going back and charting the character's growth in my notebook, I started to realize that I've essentially created her in the image of a popular television character. They have the same hair color, same overbearing mother, same eating disorder...

The similarities are too striking for me to continue the WIP as is (even her name starts with the same letter!). This was entirely unintentional, but I want to fix it because I love the story I'm telling (it's a supernatural mystery, not a dramady like the television show the character she resembles is on -- point in my favor?). Any advice?

What do you do when your MC doesn't belong to you?
 

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Well that's definitely never happened to me lol. But there are a few popular series that began as fanfiction. Meaning the characters were obviously someone else's. They just changed enough to not get sued.

Of course that doesn't make you immune to the wrath of an insulted fandom. At least you're being honest about it. Sounds like you need a new MC and therefore a rewrite. ReWrite not reVise. Scrap it and start over.

Might help to take a well developed secondary character and swap them for the MC. this is going to be especially tedious if you wrote in first.
 
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I've been working on my WIP in one form or another since 2009. My MC bears a few similarities to the MC of a recent uber-popular series, but the thing is, I finished the first draft of the story before I even laid eyes on the series. The superficial similarities end there-- hell, mine isn't even the same genre technically. So I decided, the hell with it.... I'm keeping her :)
 

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Yeah, I did write it in first person, which is why I'm having so much trouble with the idea of scrapping it altogether. They're not the same genre and the path the characters take are very different, but I think the similarities are just too much to overcome without looking like I'm aping someone else's work. That's something I would never want to do, intentional or not.

I guess I'm going to have to spend the day combing through this and my notes, looking for things I can take away from her without making the entire character collapse. For instance, my MC is a major control freak. That's why she has the eating disorder she has, because it's a means of having control over something when she has control over nothing. And, I don't want to take that away from her because, in the end, when she essentially sacrifices all control, it has to mean something.
 

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Play with the character to see how much you can change her without taking away the most important aspects. Her name, change mother to father, change hair colour, add something to her that's nowhere near the other character... etc.

Obviously, without knowing which character it is and exactly how similar she is to yours, I can't say anything with complete certainty, but I know you're most likely fine. There are many characters with similar traits out there and no one had a hold over them. You're welcome to write your own interpretation of a control freak with an ED and an overbearing parent.
 

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I don't think it's problem really - sounds like two different stories (yours is a supernatural mystery while the TV show's not). Most people won't even connect the dots if the narrative is good and original. But I agree with Rina Evans - for your peace of mind, change out some things such as name, physical appearance etc.
 

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I'll be totally honest... a girl with an overbearing mother who also has an eating disorder is a really common convention of YA. Girl doesn't get on with her mother~ wants control of her life~ develops an eating disorder.

I've seen it done hundreds of times on television, it's a story arc that pops up in every television soap at least once, and I've seen it done many a time in YA literature too.

I think it's been done so much that nobody will be able to say "Oh, she's clearly copied this from bla bla."
 

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I really don't think it's going to be an issue. I find it hard to believe there are no two people on this planet without a few similarities. As long as it doesn't pose as a blatant rip-off, I would think you'd be fine. There aren't a lot of original ideas out there anymore (not that I'm saying it doesn't exist). However, people can take an idea that has been done before and give it its own spin. Perhaps give your character who has a few similarities to the TV show character a uniqueness that identifies her.
 

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Change enough about your character so you feel she's really yours. Control freaks can have other 'disorders,' too. Give her a nervous tic or she stutters, or she cuts herself. Or think up something new.

Change her hair color and her skin color. Change her eyes. Give her a limp or a prothesis. Have her go to a clinic on a regular basis but don't indicate too much what she's having treated. (Psoriasis? Kidney dialysis?) Or give her asthma and she overdoes the inhaler sometimes. (This is my own personal problem.)

Give her a stepmother, not a mother. Give her a brother in Iraq or a sister who ran away and no one's heard from her in eight years.

In other words, make her as unique as possible - but make her yours.
 

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Thanks for the suggestions. I think this might be a case of my self-destructive inner editor trying to make me so paranoid I give up. I've been doing a good job of fighting her, but sometimes she gets sneaky on me.

I've thought of a few things I can change without completely undermining the story. In fact, I think these things might wind up strengthening it. For instance, I took out her snarky housekeeper and replaced her with a guy friend who gets how neurotic she is and loves her anyway. And, her closeness with him will provide a point of contention with her boyfriend whenever things start going south, even though she is definitely not his type.

I'm really glad I posted this thread now.
 

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Thanks for the suggestions. I think this might be a case of my self-destructive inner editor trying to make me so paranoid I give up. I've been doing a good job of fighting her, but sometimes she gets sneaky on me.

It's normal to question your story. In fact, you should. It's just part of the process.

Good luck!