How many stories do you have to write to write a good one?

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Tonight I read through all the stories I have written this year, and they all suck. I am trying really hard, but feel like I just might be one of those people that just isn't good enough. I think I am on the verge of quitting short story writing. I feel like I am putting a lot of time into this and producing crap

I thought I would ask all of you what percentage of stories you write do you actually think are good? How many bad ones do I have to write before things click? Does anyone else struggle like this? Is it worth it? I really wish I was good, I'm just not.
 

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Sweetie, Do you like to write? If so, then write. Do you want to write better? If so, then do what you need to make that happen. No one can give you a magic equation that will tell you what you want to know. Everyone is different.

I don't speak for anyone else but myself: I struggle. But I am always researching, and pushing myself do to better. I write because I want to. It might take me years to get to where I want to be, but I have a goal. It's that goal that keeps me focused on what it is that I really want from all of this.

Don't be so hard on yourself.
 

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I can't imagine my crazy weird process would work for anyone else, but I've been everywhere from having a creative writing teacher emotionally screw me up from writing for years (which was hell) to feeling overconfident... With all the technical aspects that go into writing, at the end of the day you have to remember that it is a creative pursuit in the arts. It's tempermental (for most, anyway) and can really sink into your emotions.

I don't think there's a set quota for "good" vs. "bad" writing, but I do know the more you write the better you get. Even if you're writing mediocre stuff, in your own opinion. Sometimes you need to power through the crap, then tear it apart and use whatever bits you can salvage for the future- when you feel more confident about your output.

Every writer struggles- if this was easy everyone would have at least one book out by a major publisher and we'd be posting here using our yacht's wifi. Do you get those moments when you DO feel great about what you wrote? If so, does that feeling make up from the discouragement? Do you feel like you have a unique voice with something to say? Do you feel like your life would feel much emptier without writing? If so, *please* keep writing. Set small goals, write something small and goofy for yourself once in a while- anything, just keep it so you're reminded regularly that this is what you love and it's worth doing. Best of luck! You are nowhere near being alone on this. :)
 

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One my bad days...
I think all my stories are either rubbish or fatally flawed.
I think that the ones I have sold are flukes. (or even possibly mistakes, maybe they meant to accept a different one, but clicked mine by accident).
I think I can't write, will never be able to write, ought to delete everything and burn my laptop just in case something has been saved in the history somewhere.

On my good days...
I think some of my stories are OK.

On every day...
I carry on writing, carry on subbing, because what else would I be doing?

It's not for me to tell you what to do, but I do think that self doubts are part of the game.
I think we have to carry on anyway, if we want to get anywhere.
 

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You might think your writing sucks, but as long as people are buying them and reading them, you're doing okay. Separate your own feelings from those of the readers (the ones that matter most). You can still improve, but you'll find you suck a lot less than you first thought.
 

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Comets and Criminals doesn't count? :(
 

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There's no magic number that will make your writing better. I imagine you've probably heard it said that your writing should improve over time and all it takes is practice, and that's true, but if you're finding yourself consistently underwhelmed with your own work, then take a look at the individual elements that you might be weak on.

Do you struggle with pacing? Is the dialogue flat? Do you overuse adverbs and other descriptive language? Do you underuse it? Saying your stories are no good is a bit vague, but I bet they all have something in common that just isn't working. If you can figure out what, specifically, isn't working, that gives you the opportunity to fix it, and then you can apply what you've learned to everything you write from here on out.

Alternatively, you might just be having a despairing "All my writing is crap!" moment and it's really not as bad as you think. That kind of thing happens to most of us eventually, and it shouldn't last forever.

To answer your other question, I actually like all the stories I've written. But they're not perfect. I need to work on my pacing for one, I need to tone down the setting description on another, I need a clearer voice on a third--none of these things make them "bad." It just means they're not finished yet.
 

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Well, if you want a specific number, 10000 hours, I guess.

Getting people's reactions is a huge motivator (for me, at least), so if you're not selling anything, put some stuff up for free to get some feedback. If no one responds, keep trying new stuff and and putting it out there until someone does.

Just keep working. And working on stuff you're weak at, not just stuff you like writing. I liked this article (which is about sports, not writing, but I think it applies): http://money.cnn.com/magazines/fortune/fortune_archive/2006/10/30/8391794/. Get out there and give me 2000 words!
 

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Tonight I read through all the stories I have written this year, and they all suck. I am trying really hard, but feel like I just might be one of those people that just isn't good enough. I think I am on the verge of quitting short story writing. I feel like I am putting a lot of time into this and producing crap

I thought I would ask all of you what percentage of stories you write do you actually think are good? How many bad ones do I have to write before things click? Does anyone else struggle like this? Is it worth it? I really wish I was good, I'm just not.


I hope you are not the only person reading your stories. As the writer, your perspective on them is going to be skewed to say the least. What does your go-to reader think of them? If you dont have one, you should! Practice is fine, but practice without feedback and you won't improve, or you wont improve quickly at least.
 

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I hope you are not the only person reading your stories. As the writer, your perspective on them is going to be skewed to say the least. What does your go-to reader think of them? If you dont have one, you should! Practice is fine, but practice without feedback and you won't improve, or you wont improve quickly at least.

Outside of basic mechanics, I believe the only go-to reader worth having, and the only feedback that matters, comes from editors.
 

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Tonight I read through all the stories I have written this year, and they all suck. I am trying really hard, but feel like I just might be one of those people that just isn't good enough. I think I am on the verge of quitting short story writing. I feel like I am putting a lot of time into this and producing crap

I thought I would ask all of you what percentage of stories you write do you actually think are good? How many bad ones do I have to write before things click? Does anyone else struggle like this? Is it worth it? I really wish I was good, I'm just not.

For me, a story is good if someone buys it, and bad if no one ever does. Stories I think are my worst often sell like mad, and stories I think are my very best sometimes never sell anywhere. I don't care. All I can do is write them. It's up to editors to judge them.

As for how many it takes, it varies with each write. I sold the first story I ever wrote to a national mag. I can think of several other writers who did the same thing.

But some of the best writers out there took a long time to sell a story. William Saroyan received more than 4,000 rejections before selling his first. Erskine Caldwell didn't count his, but had a large suitcase full of rejections. . .enough, he said, to make a sizable bonfire after he received his first acceptance.

I know one writer who sold his first short story to a top magazine, but had to write a hundred more short stories before selling a second. He's now pretty darned famous.

It's all over the place.

But one thing holds true with almost every successful writer I've ever known. There is no secret. Discouragement is easy, and excuse abound, but if you follow a one sentence rule, and if you have even a drop of talent, you will eventually succeed.

I first heard this from a famous editor more than thirty years ago, but it still holds true today. Read much, write often, and follow Heinlein's Rules, all five of them, to the letter.

A simple as this advice sounds, maybe one writer in a hundred manages to follow it. Read this, and believe it: http://sfwriter.com/ow05.htm
 

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Outside of basic mechanics, I believe the only go-to reader worth having, and the only feedback that matters, comes from editors.

Why do you say so? Isnt that the whole point of the SYW forum?
 

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Could be 1 story. Could be never. But we still write because we cannot _not_ write. Keep writing and listen to those who try to help you.
 

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I feel like the most important for me is that I do the best that I'm capable of right now. That's really the best I can do. I think "sucks" and "doesn't suck" can be a little subjective. If i read stuff I wrote as a kid, I laugh at how bad it is. Whether it's bad for something a kid wrote just starting out is a different matter.

Standards can change sometimes. I've won some writing awards, but they weren't all that prestigious or competitive. It's still an accomplishment, but it's a stepping stone for me.

Work on being the best you can be for the goals you have right now. If you keep working, your "best" right now might not be what it is a few years from now.
 

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Tonight I read through all the stories I have written this year, and they all suck. I am trying really hard, but feel like I just might be one of those people that just isn't good enough. I think I am on the verge of quitting short story writing. I feel like I am putting a lot of time into this and producing crap

I thought I would ask all of you what percentage of stories you write do you actually think are good? How many bad ones do I have to write before things click? Does anyone else struggle like this? Is it worth it? I really wish I was good, I'm just not.

It's not about how many stories you write; it's about how long you've been writing. I started at fifteen and after five years I finally started thinking my writing was acceptable. And that was writing about six days a week for five or six hours every day.

What I would recommend is reviewing the SYW board. See what critters are telling others. Critique pieces yourself. I found critiquing another's work helped me with my own, and of course, reading in general can help.

What exactly are you struggling with? Do you feel you its the structure, your dialog, your description, your wording, your plot, your timing? Try to analyze where you're lacking and improve in there area. Do exercises. Read how others do it.

But as James said, a story isn't good until its bought. However, pride means a lot to an author. Keep writing until your happy with what you got. It may take years before you feel competent to even step inside the publishing industry. I've been writing for forever it seems and only now am I aiming hopefully publish one of my novels. For almost a year it just sat on my computer gathering dust because I didn't feel ready. Now I think it's getting there.
 

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Tonight I read through all the stories I have written this year, and they all suck. I am trying really hard, but feel like I just might be one of those people that just isn't good enough. I think I am on the verge of quitting short story writing. I feel like I am putting a lot of time into this and producing crap

I thought I would ask all of you what percentage of stories you write do you actually think are good? How many bad ones do I have to write before things click? Does anyone else struggle like this? Is it worth it? I really wish I was good, I'm just not.

What percent have you submitted to magazines, publishers, etc? What percent have you sold?

If you've sold even one, then you're on the right track. If you've never sold, but are still submitting and getting some good feedback, again, you're on the right track.

I sold the first story I wrote - but it was first rejected. (A few years later I resubmitted and it sold.) The second story I wrote I sold right away to the one and only magazine I sent it to.

How many did I write leading up to these two? None. Zero. I never thought of myself as a short story writer until I picked up a magazine and said to myself, I can do that. I had no betas. No one but me read either story before I mailed them out. I had no idea what POV was (okay, a vague idea), and knew nothing about the various rules (I prefer guidelines) one should follow before writing or submitting stories.

But I did read. All the time. And I did write, again, almost daily. I wrote huge epic fantasy novels, (which still remain in my writing trunk.) Now I write and sell most the stories I write, but some do get rejected.

The trick is write and read, write and read, and when you don't feeling like writing, read something. Read all sorts of stuff - fiction and nonfiction. Read books, short stories, magazines. As a kid I used to sit and read the back of a cereal box when I ate breakfast. (No books at the table at my house.)

And keep the faith. If you haven't submitted any of your stories, start doing so.
 

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Tonight I read through all the stories I have written this year, and they all suck. I am trying really hard, but feel like I just might be one of those people that just isn't good enough. I think I am on the verge of quitting short story writing. I feel like I am putting a lot of time into this and producing crap
Give up and you'll never succeed.
 

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A lot of good advice here. Mostly to keep trying, keep writing.

One thing I'd add though, is to try to improve by using critique sites and listening to the advice you get there. The first step is to become technically proficient. Not perfect, but at least passable.

Both professional editors and critiquers prefer stories with few grammatical errors. If the first few paragraphs have many mistakes, they don't bother with the rest. They don't necessarily insist on no mistakes, but not at least one in every sentence. Struggling through such writing wastes too much of their time, not to mention the cost of professional editing.

Logic errors are another way to turn readers off. Another way is to wing it without needed research. As an ex-GI and ex-cop, if I read a phrase such as "He loaded bullets into his gun", I'd drop that book immediately. Something a quick Google would easily correct. A student of history will notice mistakes in historical facts.

When I first started writing fiction I avoided research, thinking it wasted time. Later, I found researching was fun and enlightening. It's never wasted time, since you can use the same knowledge over and over.

Charlie
 

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As a teacher, I have been taught to be a 'reflective practitioner'. Actually, as I was being trained as a teacher I learned that what I had always been doing was being a 'reflective practitioner' but the point remains... I think writers are another form of reflective practitioner.

What does this mean? Well, it means that everytime you do something, whether it is successful or not, you evaluate it. You think: How could I have done that better? What was good about it? Why did it suceed/fail? Then, the next time you do something similar you seek to use that information to improve.

Then you do the whole evaluation process again and you never stop doing it. Even when you have sold a million copies. If you stop doing this you stagnate because the only way you can progress is not to do the same thing you did everytime before but to do something new and interesting which scares the hell out of you.

Getting others to read your stuff and give you feedback helps. There is no substitute for a good beta.
 

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every story I've ever written is really good. It makes me sad to realize that most will never be published (absent some discovery that I'm the new Bukowski so every thing I ever scratched is published). I do like some much more than others, but what is weird is the ones published have included stuff I thought near the bottom of my stories.

I do think it hard to answer these questions w/o knowing where you're at. When I first started I was in classes to get feedback. Much of the feedback was shit and to be ignored, but overall it helped. As I moved forward I got to ignoring much of the advice, looking only at the instructor as an example. But if you've been published you don't need to be in some class.

Where is OP at?
 

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Tonight I read through all the stories I have written this year, and they all suck. I am trying really hard, but feel like I just might be one of those people that just isn't good enough. I think I am on the verge of quitting short story writing. I feel like I am putting a lot of time into this and producing crap

I thought I would ask all of you what percentage of stories you write do you actually think are good? How many bad ones do I have to write before things click? Does anyone else struggle like this? Is it worth it? I really wish I was good, I'm just not.

If I've heard this once, I've heard a thousand times.

Most of which, are from myself.

I've come to learn you can't bash yourself, because if you do, everyone else will as well. I'm sure if I read one of your stories now, I would find at least one that doesn't "suck."

Don't worry about it, I'm not where I want to be, and I keep on writing. But I have submitted, and I do have two short stories ready to pubbed soon. Because I'm excellent writer? (*Runs out of writing room, laughing.) No, because I keep at it.
 

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Three hours a day for ten years.

Srsly, how long is a piece of string? Have you tried SYW?
 

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Why do you say so? Isnt that the whole point of the SYW forum?

Yes, that's the point. Doesn't mean it's a good point. For one thing, if you're writing as much and as often as you should, and submitting as often as you should, there isn't time to have every story critiqued, or even a small percentage of them. Saroyan and Caldwell were bot writing a story per day. Most successful writers I know got where they are by writing at least a story per week.

You can't write a story, send it to a critique group, make revisions, ask them if the revisions are right, make more revisions when they say this or that still needs changed, and get anywhere.

And what makes you think someone else who isn't an editor, or a professional write in your genre, has the first clue abut what makes a story publishable? They know what they like, and what they don't like. This matters not in the least.

Worse, just abut all the advice you receive will be fourth hand advice garnered from all the advice about what to do, and what not to do, that they've read, and most how-to advice you read online is bad. At best, most of the advice you receive won't be from an editorial point of view, but from a "this is how I would do it" point of view. It's the blind leading the blind.

I've sold a lot of stories, and I've been an editor, but outside of basic mechanics, I still can't tell any writer that a story is or isn't publishable for another editor. I can tell you whether or not I would buy a story, but I can't begin to tell you whether or not any other editor out there would buy it or reject it.

Feedback is good, if it's the right feedback from the right person, but I've seen ten writers harmed by critique groups for every writer I've seen helped. I've seen many, many, many good stories ruined because of "You're supposed to do it this way", or "This is how so and so does it", or "This is how I would do it". I've seen promising writers with good stories stopped dead by listening to critique groups.

Sadly, it's usually the writers who are harmed the most that swear they've been helped.

If you can find that one person who knows what makes a story publishable (And publishable is not the same thing as good or bad, he does it this way, or I'd do it that way.), a person who really knows what it means to write a publishable story, who doesn't try to change your style, and who can, themselves, write publishable stories in your genre, then by all means, latch on, if you feel the need.

But, look, if all this amateur critiquing really helped, why are slush piles filled to overflowing with completely unpublishable short stories, almost all of which have been run trough a critique group? Critique groups turn everything into same old, same old, produce story after story that all follow the same bad advice, and that all stink up slush piles.

You don't create new, original, unlike anything else stories by listen to critique groups.

Worse, new writers are told to listen to the majority. If nine people in a group say to change this, and one says leave it alone, new writers are told to make the change. The trouble with this is that odds are extremely high that nine out of ten in a critique group simply have no clue about what makes a story publishable. That one, lone voice just might.

New writers simply don't know good advice from bad, anymore than the critique group does.


If you feel you must have feedback other than what you get form editors at magazines, then pay for it, and get good advice. Go to a workshop or a seminar run by professional writers and editors in your genre.

Otherwise. write and submit, write and submit, write and submit. If your stories are anywhere near publishing standards, you will get feedback that matters. If they aren't anywhere near publishable standards, no critique group can make them so.

That one, remarkable, tough to find, critiquer who actually knows your genre, who can actually write well in your genre, can usually give you meaningful advice. Groups simply can't.
 
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