Define your writing style

William Randall

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Okay so I’m not sure if other people will find this interesting or not, but I’ve always been very curious about writing style, and what it really means.

A while ago, I had the idiotic plan that I was going to break down pages of prose by famous authors and, in an attempt to define their style, I was going to categorize things like: average sentence length, frequency of adverbs, frequency of adjectives, sentence construction, use of figurative language, etc. I still think it would be interesting, but I think simply reading pages by those authors is just as beneficial, and it doesn’t require a calculator.

Anyway, what I’m curious about how you would define your own writing style. What specific things do you do that make your writing yours? They don’t have to be things that you do well, just things that you do.

I’ll go first:

  • I use the word “and” probably more than I should.
  • I like starting sentences with the word “but.”
  • I have a thing for appositive phrases—phrases that modify the previous noun—and sometimes I string two or even three in a row.
  • When introspecting, I often start three sentences in a row with the same word/s. The third sentence often has a slightly more complex construction than the first two.
  • I use fragments occasionally (often?) because I think they add voice.
  • I select my verbs carefully and try to avoid word echo, where a word is repeated soon after its initial use, but even so, my word choice feels limited. I could use a vocabulary boost overall.
  • I use figurative language, similes mostly, and I probably use them too much. Sometimes I’d rather say what it’s like than what it actually is, because I find the comparison more interesting.
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Have you taken the prose test? http://iwl.me/
It tells you which famous writer your style is most similar to. Before I had my style down, it was all over the place. But now that I've refined it a bit, I always score 'Chuck Palahniuk" on the site.

I write first person present in a very minimal style. I'm really fond of three word sentences. I like short and staccato. I also do a lot of lists with "and" instead of commas. The pacing is quick and since it's first person, it always has a really strong voice. I think voice is the most notable thing about my style. The novel with my agent has an illiterate junkie as a narrator, so her voice is very distinct. I also like creating ugly images. So I'll use unattractive words to describe things that aren't necessarily unattractive. I do very little telling, even with emotions. So a lot has to be inferred by the reader, I think. Because of that, world building can be my weak point.

I use fragments all the time. And I selectively echo. A lot of phrases will be repeated throughout, but they'll have a different meaning each time. A lot of it is self referential. Not as in meta-fiction, but you'll often find "companion" sentences or paragraphs.

Er, this felt really obnoxious to write haha
 
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Have you takes the prose test? http://iwl.me/
It tells you which famous writer your style is most similar to. Before I had my style down, it was all over the place. But now that I've refined it a bit, I always score 'Chuck Palahniuk" on the site.

Don't trust that site too much.

It's based more on word choice than anything.
 

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Don't trust that site too much.

It's based more on word choice than anything.

Haha, I don't know how you can "trust" a site about something so subjective. It's more for fun than anything else. I don't plan on including my results in letters to publishers :D

"And if you look at this link, you'll see I'm literally the next Kurt Vonnegut..."
 

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Haha, I don't know how you can "trust" a site about something so subjective. It's more for fun than anything else. I don't plan on including my results in letters to publishers :D

"And if you look at this link, you'll see I'm literally the next Kurt Vonnegut..."

I'm just saying as far as similarities go, it's less of a style thing so much as a diction thing.
 

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Bahahaha, that website tells me I write like Lovecraft.

Which is hilarious because I put in an entry from my horror Spec Fic project.

It probably means nothing, but I am still endlessly amused.
 

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I like that site because no matter who you get, it's a famous author and I think most people would consider them good. Haha like... "Who do you look like?" and all the available options are hot celebrities.

I usually get Lovecraft, anyway.

/derail

My writing style/tone/voice has recently been compared to the styles of Jasper Fford, Neil Gaiman and Terry Pratchett. I don't know if that's accurate, but that's what people say.

As for subjective appraisal of my style, I tend to write cinematically (my beginnings were in screenwriting and film analysis); so, I tend to break paragraphs where I imagine a cinematic cut would appear, or write long scenic paragraphs where an establishing shot or panoramic pan would appear in a movie.

I do not use internal monologues and tend to paraphrase character thoughts (He thought about bla bla bla vs Bla bla bla, he thought). I also usually do not write in first person because I just plain suck at it. I don't use sentence fragments but I do use a lot of subordination. I've also been told my sentence structures can be complex (but not necessarily complicated).

I used to write in a very anachronic way but I've stopped doing that recently since I think that should be more of a specific book element than part of an overall style... I think I do it well but it's something that should be targeted.

Hrrrrmmmmm
 

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I'm just saying as far as similarities go, it's less of a style thing so much as a diction thing.

Exactly. My prose is pretty consistent, but depending on the paragraph I enter, I get Meyer or Palahnuik or Salinger. It's based on word choice, not sentence structure.


As far as my writing goes, I'd say I'm a minimalist. I tend to use first person present with lots of choppy sentences interspersed with long sentences connected by "and". I don't add much detail and I'm a bit heavy on dialogue and navel gazing. I guess I'm good with voice.

I started with screenwriting and it shows, though screenplays don't necessarily have a "voice" and I'm not a fan of unfilmables or asides.

I've been told that I write like Courtney Summers, who kind of writes like Sara Zarr. That, I can appreciate. I want to become more descriptive, though, so I've been reading a lot John Green (eh, don't ask) and Kevin Canty. I'd like to vary my style.
 

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I got James Joyce and Chuck Palahniuk which is kind of funny because I don't care much for Joyce and can't stand Palahniuk. JJ was the test result for my third person past tense style and Palahniuk for my first person present tense style. They are a bit different, the latter being more minimalistic and fractured.

Now a more fitting comparison would be Laurell K. Hamilton. I'd been told I write a bit like her before I read any of her books, so it's a natural coincidence. Then I read her books and I knew why: there is a certain mix of action-ness and descriptiveness in both our styles. She likes one-liners, snappy dialogue, fights, lots of plot and asskickery, but at the same time, she likes to describe clothes and hair and weather and colors and use pretty metaphors bordering on purple--and so do I, while usually it's either one or the other. Either sparse bang bang kiss kiss--or character-driven & descriptive.

I never built it on purpose, though, it evolved on its own, going from extreme purple to a gunmetal violet shade. xd People also described it as "cinematic." I often start sentences with "but" or use "but" in the middle, so often that I have to edit it out, because I get stuff like "it was a castle, but it didn't look like one" or "his hair was dark, but not black." I'm extremely fond of contrast and contraposition, so it shows. I like mixing fragments with long sentences, and I use more similes than necessary. One more thing about my style is that it's not too diverse, it doesn't really change from story to story. On one hand, it's good because it makes my writing voice recognizable, on the other hand, it might also bore readers.

I want it to evolve into something more dynamic, with livelier dialogue and faster action, but without losing the descriptiveness.
 

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JJ was the test result for my third person past tense style and Palahniuk for my first person present tense style.

I used first person present and also got Palahniuk. I doubt that's coincidence.
 

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Most likely it isn't. First person + shorter sentences + present time = your Palahniuk is ready, sir.
 

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I write mostly dialogue and a lot of fragmented sentences. And I have the bad habit of substituting "said".

Also, I got Gertrude Stein on that test...Does anyone know who that is and why on earth did I get her?
 

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I know that but I'm rather interested in knowing what her words choices are.
 

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I know that but I'm rather interested in knowing what her words choices are.

Interested enough to google it?;) She's one of those people you should at least know by name. So the research won't hurt.
 

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I have honestly never heard about this woman.

But now with the googling, I think I understood why I got her. It's amusing.
 

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Well, I get someone different on I Write Like every time I put a different piece in, which is probably because of the way I write. I write to fit the character, you see, so every piece I write sounds different than the previous one.

My "consistent" writing style by nature is inconsistent. The diction use when I write my Mississippi-born protagonist in my 1920's historical fantasy is completely different from my post-apocalyptic London-resident protagonist in my 2045 sci-fi piece.

Even the sentence structure changes from story to story because its based on the way the particular character thinks. Sometimes it's in short, choppy sentences with little leeway for colorful description. Other times it's all careful detail and analysis.

So, basically, my writing style is ever-changing. It's never exactly the same (unless I'm writing the same character for a different piece).

Though, there are similarities. I have a penchant for sentence fragments, for example, because I find them far more believable in terms of character voice than consistently full sentences. I also have a habit of using one-word sentences in order to "sum up" the entire scene.

So, you may be able to tell that two of my pieces were both written by me without knowing, but it would be pretty hard to guess unless you could explicitly identify the way I write characters.