Publisher wants more but I don't currently have it

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I have just received a letter from the editor of a publishing house. She stated that she would be interested in seeing more stories involving my characters, as a possible grouping of stories into a single book. However, currently, I do not have any more stories with these 2 characters, although I can write more.
My question is- do I contact her now, tell her that I do not currently have any stories, but can produce some by X time frame- or should I go ahead and write first, and then contact her?
hmmm.... what should I do? Any advice is welcome and appreciated.

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I would contact her and tell her that you'd be happy to write more for her if she makes an offer. If you already planned to write more stories using those characters, then get going--but I wouldn't kill yourself to get a bunch of stories done for her with no commitment. Good luck!
 

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How do I word that exactly? (my lack of experience is showing) "Id be happy to work on more stories involving these two, but I'd really like a comitment on your part..."? Doesn't sound professional- my wording, that is, not the concept. This is the first non-form, non-rejection letter I've received, and this is also a pretty big house. I just want to make sure that my request is respectful and professional, while addressing my particular side of things. I don't mind creating the stories, but I also don't want to spit them out just for the sake of doing it. If this would be an assignment, then I would gladly do the work.

Thanks for your suggestion-

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Probably something like this would work fine:

Dear Editor [insert first name -- you're buddies now!],

Thank you so much for your interest in my story. I'm so pleased that you enjoyed the interaction between the characters and that you would like to see more of them. Certainly, I have several ideas for future adventures featuring them and could provide some thumbnail sketches of the plots if you're interested. Naturally, before I sit down to write the stories, I would like to see what you have in mind for the book. I'd appreciate knowing the length of stories you have in mind, proposed advance, and anticipated publication date. I want to be sure that I can fit the writing into my schedule in sufficient time for your production team.

Again, thanks so much for your interest! I look forward to hearing from you

This tells the editor that a) you have other plots; b) you are willing to write on proposal; c) but you'll only do so for money.

Now, a "thumbnail sketch" is a VERY short little thing (just a few paragraphs) that gives only the very BASIC details of an unwritten story.

Here's one that we did for our agent to shoot around to a few publishers:

DARK PARANORMAL

Hero - Different dimensional phoenix. He hunts other phoenixes who have escaped from his dimension into Earth our time. Possible name: Shane. Poses as arson expert hired by police department to profile arsonist who is burning apartment buildings. Actual story is that rogue phoenix is hunting humans for food. Phoenixes have to char their food before they can digest it. He starts out as old man, but realizes he isn’t strong enough to continue the hunt and so intentionally burns an abandoned warehouse to renew himself off-schedule. He is saved by heroine, who is an arson investigator that has been working with him as an old man.

Heroine - Current reality (possibly) arson investigator. Tough, smart and dedicated to finding this person who is burning up the city. She really likes the old expert, but he’s way TOO old for her – like her grandfather’s age. But she realizes he has been keeping information from her so she starts to follow him, just when he enters the building and sets it on fire. She wonders if the expert is actually the arsonist. She saves a man inside, not realizing he’s the same one as her expert.

Villain - not fleshed out yet.

Other dimension - humans are part of the food chain, but definitely not on the top rung. Hero finds the humans of our world refreshing, because the humans in his world are little better than apes. They have simple tools, but no art or architecture. Sort of like the humans on Planet of the Apes or Brave New World.

Resolution - they capture the rogue phoenix together, fall in love and the heroine decides that it’s time for the humans of his world to start to fight back against the phoenix. If the phoenix race comes to realize that the humans are sentient and willing to fight back, then maybe they’ll stop treating them as food and they can co-exist.

Good luck with your project! Hope you sell the stories! :)