I'm having trouble deciding which type of story to write, and I'd like some advice.

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I have a conundrum. I have five ideas for a story, but all of them are drastically different. I can't choose which one, so which one do you guys like best?

None of these are Earth, they're different worlds, just with influences from real places and times.

(1)*The first one is set in an age equatable to the late 18th century (Colonial/Napoleonic Era.) And would mirror the Napoleonic Wars and the French revolution, but in a fantasy setting, with standard Dwarves, Elves, Orcs, Giants, ect.

(2)*The second is pseudo-medieval early 17th century--think the 30 Years' War--in the transition period between traditional medieval warfare and the advent of firearms. It would focus on the conflict between the dying old ways (magic, creatures) and the growth of widespread technology.

(3)*The third takes place in a full on 19th century world. It would be more Heroic Fantasy, though, with a major war as the background but not the focus. Think old Russian and East European folklore, witches, vampries, werewolves and the like.

(4)*The fourth is set in a time similar to the early 1900s, right before WWI. It would be like the second one, but the basis would be that the rivalry of Tech Vs. Magic has reached its pinnacle in a World War type scenario, with the races that favor the "old way" on one side and the races favoring technology on the other.

(5)*And the fifth is a straight Roman style world. It leans more towards the mythology side, instead of standard fantasy. It would focus on the growth and rise to power of a powerful empire.

Edit for clarification: There seems to be some confusion over what I'm asking, so I'll say this: I'm simply wondering which setting you find most interesting. Which one makes you go "Aw, cool! That sounds like fun!" I have plots, characters, ect. ect. ready to go for all five, but I'm trying to decide which one to start with. I want to know the most interesting to you, personally. I'm asking for your personal opinions. If you were to create a world, and could only choose from these 5, which would you pick. Not which has the best plot, or which one is a full story. Which setting sounds the most interesting. I thank you all sincerely for the input anyway, though, and the confusion is my fault for not wording my request properly.
 
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I'd say that there's a hint in your question.

Only a couple of your proposals have the beginnings of a plot included in the description.
 

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I never said any of these were the plots. These are the settings of the worlds that they're set in... I've tried to fully develop all five, to see if I end up liking them any more if I continued to elaborate on the world. I've gotten farther with some than I have with others, that's why some have more detail.

I never said anything about a plot, was just asking which one sounded more interesting.
 

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No need to be defensive. The point stands: It's hard to gauge which idea would make the best book when there's no plot outlined.
 

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No need to be defensive. The point stands: It's hard to gauge which idea would make the best book when there's no plot outlined.

I realize that, but I'm not asking for which one is the "best." Just which ones you guys find the most interesting, but nobody seems to want to answer the question. I was simply wondering which one piqued their interests most, that's all.
 

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Seriously, these are all interesting SETTINGS. You can easily develop plots within any one of them. Which one do you hope we'll select?

Thanks for the input :) I actually don't have a preference, I personally like all of them, and have a plot ready for all of them. I just can't write all 5 at the same time, though I plan to get to each eventually. I'm really just trying to decide where to start, that's why I was asking which one people found most interesting.
 

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...but nobody seems to want to answer the question.
Nobody's obligated to answer the question.

They all seem a bit nebulous, so I don't feel like I can offer a meaningful answer. I guess the second one sounds most interesting, but that impression may not mean much.
 

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Ideas are worth a dog fart in a strong north wind. Write A STORY. Don't give a shit about the "type" of story.

cx

You took the meaning right out of my mouth! Ideas are worthless. What matters most is how you plan to and write that final product, in this case a story.

In any case I see the posters point also. People, imo, are usually influenced in some form or another by an idea or type or story. However, people aren't going to read the story if it's written bad.

In any case, I think it's safe to say that a lot of us need more info.
 

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If you like all of them, do what I do when I'm stuck - write them down on little pieces of paper, toss them into a hat or a bowl or something, close your eyes and pick one. Keep doing that, picking locations, until you've picked them all.
 

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If you like all of them, do what I do when I'm stuck - write them down on little pieces of paper, toss them into a hat or a bowl or something, close your eyes and pick one. Keep doing that, picking locations, until you've picked them all.

:ROFL: I was going to suggest a d10.

That's how I do it when I am looking at several ideas and they all appeal to me equally.
 

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Ideas are worth a dog fart in a strong north wind. Write A STORY. Don't give a shit about the "type" of story.

cx

This. ^^

While the entertainment industry of Planet Dumbass (Earth) has managed to destroy the image of the old idea that story is everything, by producing absolute garbage with no story, which is wonderfully made fun of in Rubber (remember the catchphrase, "no reason"), story is all you have in writing. Even screenwriters have to have a pretense of a story even if the people who make it into a film destroy it.

Many times, ideas have no story to go with them and have just a vague notion of something happening. You need people doing things and going places and overcoming something or other and having some sort of reasons and such that are compliant with the psychology of them that you present. Go with whatever actually has a story to be written. Especially write stories that you've always known and figure someone else might want to hear.
 

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If I might throw in a slightly meta-consideration. All your ideas are focused on transitions from one kind of society to another. That's good, since transition is makes for interesting characters and stories. So a question that arises is how deep is the interest you have in each transition. The deeper the idea, the more solid the world you will make and the more real the story will seem to your readers.
 

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I actually like two best. The whole Dwarves etc thing leaves me tired. But so what? I'm one person.
 

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I'd prefer the first, but leave out standard dwarves, elves, orcs, and giants, but give me a lot of ects. :)

Seriously. I love fantasy. Stew up a new humanoid for me. I'd like that in any setting.
 

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What is your area of expertise? Do you know alot about how things worked in the Roman era, 17th century or 19th century? Write to your strengths. If all your strengths are equal (which is hard to believe) then pick 2, just make sure you know how firearms work and the level of technology needed to make them (not as simple as you think).
 

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The question is not which one we like best because most readers are going to have different taste. I would say that the best thing to do is write the one YOU like the best.

By the way, Medieval was before gun powder... Think more in the line of Arthurian Legends...
 

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My question is: Why does it have to be just one? Since the majority of them follow the theme of a pinnacle of the "old" struggling against the "new" the only thing really dividing them is a time period - and since it's a Fantasy work, that seems like it should be the least of your worries!
 

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By the way, Medieval was before gun powder... Think more in the line of Arthurian Legends...

Just for historical accuracy and not to be a jerk but....

Middle Ages ran from roughly the 5th to the 15th centuries.

China had gunpowder around the 9th century, it showed up in the Middle East in the 13th and Europe late 13th/Early 14th.

So depending on exactly when in the Middle Ages - and if the character using gunpowder had traveled to either China or the Middle East - the story is set, gunpowder could be in play at the time.
 

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I have a conundrum. I have five ideas for a story, but all of them are drastically different. I can't choose which one, so which one do you guys like best?

None of these are Earth, they're different worlds, just with influences from real places and times.

*The first one is set in an age equatable to the late 18th century (Colonial/Napoleonic Era.) And would mirror the Napoleonic Wars and the French revolution, but in a fantasy setting, with standard Dwarves, Elves, Orcs, Giants, ect.

*The second is pseudo-medieval early 17th century--think the 30 Years' War--in the transition period between traditional medieval warfare and the advent of firearms. It would focus on the conflict between the dying old ways (magic, creatures) and the growth of widespread technology.

*The third takes place in a full on 19th century world. It would be more Heroic Fantasy, though, with a major war as the background but not the focus. Think old Russian and East European folklore, witches, vampries, werewolves and the like.

*The fourth is set in a time similar to the early 1900s, right before WWI. It would be like the second one, but the basis would be that the rivalry of Tech Vs. Magic has reached its pinnacle in a World War type scenario, with the races that favor the "old way" on one side and the races favoring technology on the other.

*And the fifth is a straight Roman style world. It leans more towards the mythology side, instead of standard fantasy. It would focus on the growth and rise to power of a powerful empire.

Whenever I have multiple ideas that are not fully formed, I like trying to blend them together. Often I come up with some terrific story concepts that way.

I think your #1 and #2 could be mixed together very well. I'd like to see the advent of gunpowder in a world with giants and elves. (What would an elven blunderbuss look like? What about a giant's mortar?)

#3 and #4 could work together also, as they share the same time period. Although I think the 'vampires and werewolves in WWI' concept has been done before, maybe you can put a new twist on it.

Yes, I definitely think you can increase the depth of your settings by combining some of these concepts. But I agree with other posters who said that you have only a part of a story here. You have settings; you also need characters, and a conflict that drives them. Good luck!
 

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Just for historical accuracy and not to be a jerk but....

Middle Ages ran from roughly the 5th to the 15th centuries.

China had gunpowder around the 9th century, it showed up in the Middle East in the 13th and Europe late 13th/Early 14th.

So depending on exactly when in the Middle Ages - and if the character using gunpowder had traveled to either China or the Middle East - the story is set, gunpowder could be in play at the time.
I started to say the same thing, then realized the OP is writing an offworld fantasy so he/she doesn't have to be accurate with earthly history.

To quote:
None of these are Earth, they're different worlds, just with influences from real places and times.
 

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Since Ancient Roman/Greek and Medieval time periods are some of my favorite, I'd have to go with the settings that most resemble these. JMO.
 
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