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I have two doctors talking to each other in several scenes. Does anyone know of any preferences when writing the action portions on whether the "Dr." has to be written before the last name each time they are mentioned? It just seems to be monotonous to make the reader read Dr. a hundred times.

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Whatever you use for the dialogue the first time is what you use everytime in order to prevent confusion. If there is more than one doctor I would just use the last name, but if you do it this way make sure it's the same throughout.

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It's entirely your choice. By all means title the doctors when they're introduced, and after this only have other characters use the title in dialogue, e.g.

DOCTOR MILES GRIFFIN, 30s, enters. Dashing good looks and a comforting bedside manner. The Nurses exchange approving glances.

GRIFFIN
Good morning!

NURSE #1
Good morning, Doctor Griffin.

Griffin checks the patient's notes.

GRIFFIN
Been feeling better, I see.

PATIENT
Yes, Doctor Griffin.

Griffin shines his flashlight in the patient's eyes.

GRIFFIN
Ah. Both working. Excellent.

DOCTOR ROGER HAMILTON, 50s, enters. A frosty curmugeon. He frowns at finding Griffin here.

NURSE #1
Er, good morning, Doctor Hamilton.

HAMILTON
There must be a mistake, Doctor
Griffin. I thought this was my
patient.

GRIFFIN
He was your patient, Doctor. Now
he's mine.

-Derek
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