I recently wrote and subbed a short story (BONE THRESHER) focusing around a group of Paleontologists who discover a remarkably (almost) complete Dromaeasaur skeleton.
The skeleton is very degraded - and they suspect the degradation occurred before mineral deposits turned the bones to stone.
Turns out that the cause was contagious radiation. As a two-word statement, it might sound very intriguing; might sound entirely implausible.
As far as fiction is concerned, I feel I did the concept justice and made it as plausible as fiction tends to require science to be (think dead bodies walking).
But I am curious about people's take on this...
Some of these details as I tell them now are strongly hinted at, but not outright said. For example, in dialogue two characters talk about the fact that a human is more genetically similar to a goldfish than that goldfish is to a shark - despite the fact that those two animals are fish and we are mammals.
Not only that but the paleontologist cites how he finds the analogous structures between dinosaurs and humans to be "haunting".
Cancerous cells are formed from this radiation. These cancer cells are created in a way that happens to cause them to absorb calcium directly from the blood. Due to a negative feedback loop in our brains, the body sends signals to begin replenishing the blood-calcium levels. Because the cancer is taking the calcium from the blood so quickly, the body must dissolve its own bones to replenish the levels.
Quickly, this leads to brittle bone disease - which is the most apparent symptom of this illness. Meanwhile, this calcium isn't disappearing into thin air... instead the cancer cells are converting it into a radioactive isotope through some unknown biological/metabolic pathway. This causes the victim to gradually become more radioactive, and begin suffering from minor and then major radiation poisoning.
In addition, this radiation causes more cells to become cancerous - and causes the cells of nearby humans to become cancerous.
Thus, the radiation has effectively become infectious and contagious.
I used prions and their method of infection as a parallel description of how a non-living thing can be contagious.
So... what do you guys think? Did I do a good job of making it as plausible as possible within the realm of fiction? Also, what do you think of the idea of "contagious radiation" in general?
The skeleton is very degraded - and they suspect the degradation occurred before mineral deposits turned the bones to stone.
Turns out that the cause was contagious radiation. As a two-word statement, it might sound very intriguing; might sound entirely implausible.
As far as fiction is concerned, I feel I did the concept justice and made it as plausible as fiction tends to require science to be (think dead bodies walking).
But I am curious about people's take on this...
Some of these details as I tell them now are strongly hinted at, but not outright said. For example, in dialogue two characters talk about the fact that a human is more genetically similar to a goldfish than that goldfish is to a shark - despite the fact that those two animals are fish and we are mammals.
Not only that but the paleontologist cites how he finds the analogous structures between dinosaurs and humans to be "haunting".
Cancerous cells are formed from this radiation. These cancer cells are created in a way that happens to cause them to absorb calcium directly from the blood. Due to a negative feedback loop in our brains, the body sends signals to begin replenishing the blood-calcium levels. Because the cancer is taking the calcium from the blood so quickly, the body must dissolve its own bones to replenish the levels.
Quickly, this leads to brittle bone disease - which is the most apparent symptom of this illness. Meanwhile, this calcium isn't disappearing into thin air... instead the cancer cells are converting it into a radioactive isotope through some unknown biological/metabolic pathway. This causes the victim to gradually become more radioactive, and begin suffering from minor and then major radiation poisoning.
In addition, this radiation causes more cells to become cancerous - and causes the cells of nearby humans to become cancerous.
Thus, the radiation has effectively become infectious and contagious.
I used prions and their method of infection as a parallel description of how a non-living thing can be contagious.
So... what do you guys think? Did I do a good job of making it as plausible as possible within the realm of fiction? Also, what do you think of the idea of "contagious radiation" in general?
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