Well, she's not my friend just a partner in my Writing Class we have to look at each otjers work and since i don't have much experience in her Genre or in correcting others works i asked her if i could post it on here.
She uses sites like this and was fine about it.
I'm not sure what i thought of it tbh it's a Horror with a good idea i just felt the piece lack lots of things i just don't know what.
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Grammar is left out because it's an exercise wont be put in till later.
Thank You for reading
She uses sites like this and was fine about it.
I'm not sure what i thought of it tbh it's a Horror with a good idea i just felt the piece lack lots of things i just don't know what.
[excerpt deleted by admin]
Grammar is left out because it's an exercise wont be put in till later.
Thank You for reading
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