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tlbodine
12-21-2011, 10:37 AM
Enough offers taken - thanks :D

kguiver
12-27-2011, 11:29 AM
I like(:
But IMO, if I were to see this at a book store, I would probably skip over it. Just needs a little more gripping words and shortening enough that it's sharp and to the point.
But it's good, so keep it up(:
-hope this was helpful!