View Full Version : Looking for beta reader for dark fantasy story, will reciprocate

12-21-2011, 11:37 AM
Enough offers taken - thanks :D

12-27-2011, 12:29 PM
I like(:
But IMO, if I were to see this at a book store, I would probably skip over it. Just needs a little more gripping words and shortening enough that it's sharp and to the point.
But it's good, so keep it up(:
-hope this was helpful!