Looking for beta reader for dark fantasy story, will reciprocate

[tlbodine]

Enough offers taken - thanks :D

[kguiver]

I like(:
But IMO, if I were to see this at a book store, I would probably skip over it. Just needs a little more gripping words and shortening enough that it's sharp and to the point.
But it's good, so keep it up(:
-hope this was helpful!