The story is complete and has been edited by me and by a third party editor as well as beta read by another author, my husband and my best friend.
I'm looking for an overall impression rather than a line by line. I'd like to get opinions of the story - what you liked or didn't like. Etc.
The story is heavy on plot, but there's a lot of romance included as well. Let me know if you're interested.
warnings/possible triggers: the story contains graphic sex descriptions, references to rape (but not described), lots of swearing and mentions of murders.
You can read an excerpt of part of chapter 1 here: http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=231972
I'm looking for an overall impression rather than a line by line. I'd like to get opinions of the story - what you liked or didn't like. Etc.
The story is heavy on plot, but there's a lot of romance included as well. Let me know if you're interested.
warnings/possible triggers: the story contains graphic sex descriptions, references to rape (but not described), lots of swearing and mentions of murders.
You can read an excerpt of part of chapter 1 here: http://absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=231972