Hello everyone 
! I am currently working on a young adult fictional romance and would love a beta reader while I continue my journey. I'm new and am still working on making my writing better so just a word of precaution my dialogue might suck! I have about 6 chapters so far which are pretty short, 10k words total at the moment, 38 pages long.
-Description-
Evelyn has always been burdened by her lineage. Being a woman from the Bennett family line meant you were given great power but even that comes with a price. Her father abandoning her when she was young, the death of her older sister and now the love of her life leaves without a trace all because of what she is; a witch.
Trying to escape from the world that sees her as a threat, Evelyn takes refuge in the 1800's but finds that you can never escape your past and who you are born to be.
There's bound to be mistakes but I would love some feedback so far and suggestions.
! I am currently working on a young adult fictional romance and would love a beta reader while I continue my journey. I'm new and am still working on making my writing better so just a word of precaution my dialogue might suck! I have about 6 chapters so far which are pretty short, 10k words total at the moment, 38 pages long.-Description-
Evelyn has always been burdened by her lineage. Being a woman from the Bennett family line meant you were given great power but even that comes with a price. Her father abandoning her when she was young, the death of her older sister and now the love of her life leaves without a trace all because of what she is; a witch.
Trying to escape from the world that sees her as a threat, Evelyn takes refuge in the 1800's but finds that you can never escape your past and who you are born to be.
There's bound to be mistakes but I would love some feedback so far and suggestions.
