I've gone through the MS with a fine toothed comb, several times, so I'm ready for some feedback. I have one beta (which I greatly appreciate!), but I am hoping to get a couple more. Please let me know if you'd be interested. Ask any questions if you need more info.
Thank you!
ETA: Here's a blurb to give you an idea of what the story is about:
With so much to keep hidden, making friends is difficult for ten year old Emily. If not for Nicky, the boy next door, Emily would have nobody to trust or turn to when her parents are fighting. As Emily grows up, she depends on her best friend, and his Christian home becomes her safe haven. It is there she learns God is not just a word thrown out in anger.
As the line between friendship and something more begins to blur, Nicky prepares to leave for college, and Emily must accept that his dreams may not include her. With Nicky away at school, Emily tries to hold her life together. Desperate to escape for just a little while, she makes a decision that will turn her world upside down. Scared and ashamed, she keeps the truth from Nicky until she's left with no choice but to call him. He rushes home to be with her, but she'll have to place her trust in someone else before she can begin picking up the pieces of her shattered life.
Thank you!
ETA: Here's a blurb to give you an idea of what the story is about:
With so much to keep hidden, making friends is difficult for ten year old Emily. If not for Nicky, the boy next door, Emily would have nobody to trust or turn to when her parents are fighting. As Emily grows up, she depends on her best friend, and his Christian home becomes her safe haven. It is there she learns God is not just a word thrown out in anger.
As the line between friendship and something more begins to blur, Nicky prepares to leave for college, and Emily must accept that his dreams may not include her. With Nicky away at school, Emily tries to hold her life together. Desperate to escape for just a little while, she makes a decision that will turn her world upside down. Scared and ashamed, she keeps the truth from Nicky until she's left with no choice but to call him. He rushes home to be with her, but she'll have to place her trust in someone else before she can begin picking up the pieces of her shattered life.
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