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In my WIP, people raise ducks rather than chickens for the meat and eggs. I wanted to name the specific breed of duck, but all the common breeds are named for real-world regions: Muscovy duck, Pekin duck, Swedish, Barbary, Rouen, etc.
What a pain! Since the book is in a second-world setting, these countries and cities wouldn't exist, so I can't use these names to reference what ducks they are. The ducks I most wanted to include are Muscovy, which have long claws on their feet. If I don't mention the breed, I wonder if describing the ducks as having red faces and claws would sound weird... (I wanted this particular breed because they thrive in cold temperatures, which fits my world setting) One of the characters in particular owns a big duck house, and the MC is a beastmaster, so the detail seemed worth mentioning since both characters would know and be interested enough to distinguish between duck breeds.
Have you ever had this sort of problem in a SF/F story before where the best word for what you're trying to describe can't be used because it refers to real world geography?
What would you do in this duck situation? Just describe them without naming the breed? Give them a new world-specific breed name? Just call them "ducks" and hope the reader isn't put off by the red faces and claws?
(Or can anyone recommend a breed of domestic egg-laying ducks that doesn't have a region-specific name?)
What a pain! Since the book is in a second-world setting, these countries and cities wouldn't exist, so I can't use these names to reference what ducks they are. The ducks I most wanted to include are Muscovy, which have long claws on their feet. If I don't mention the breed, I wonder if describing the ducks as having red faces and claws would sound weird... (I wanted this particular breed because they thrive in cold temperatures, which fits my world setting) One of the characters in particular owns a big duck house, and the MC is a beastmaster, so the detail seemed worth mentioning since both characters would know and be interested enough to distinguish between duck breeds.
Have you ever had this sort of problem in a SF/F story before where the best word for what you're trying to describe can't be used because it refers to real world geography?
What would you do in this duck situation? Just describe them without naming the breed? Give them a new world-specific breed name? Just call them "ducks" and hope the reader isn't put off by the red faces and claws?
(Or can anyone recommend a breed of domestic egg-laying ducks that doesn't have a region-specific name?)
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