Real world geography messing up my duck names...

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In my WIP, people raise ducks rather than chickens for the meat and eggs. I wanted to name the specific breed of duck, but all the common breeds are named for real-world regions: Muscovy duck, Pekin duck, Swedish, Barbary, Rouen, etc.

What a pain! Since the book is in a second-world setting, these countries and cities wouldn't exist, so I can't use these names to reference what ducks they are. The ducks I most wanted to include are Muscovy, which have long claws on their feet. If I don't mention the breed, I wonder if describing the ducks as having red faces and claws would sound weird... (I wanted this particular breed because they thrive in cold temperatures, which fits my world setting) One of the characters in particular owns a big duck house, and the MC is a beastmaster, so the detail seemed worth mentioning since both characters would know and be interested enough to distinguish between duck breeds.

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Have you ever had this sort of problem in a SF/F story before where the best word for what you're trying to describe can't be used because it refers to real world geography?

What would you do in this duck situation? Just describe them without naming the breed? Give them a new world-specific breed name? Just call them "ducks" and hope the reader isn't put off by the red faces and claws?

(Or can anyone recommend a breed of domestic egg-laying ducks that doesn't have a region-specific name?)
 
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Mallard

Crested Duck

Tufted Duck

An Eider(also live where it's pretty cold IIRC)

Magpie Duck

Bufflehead

Mergansers

Pintails

Pochards

Shovellers

Wigeons?

(Whether any of these have been domesticated anywhere, I'm not sure but I don't see why they couldn't be for your purposes. Um, all ducks lay eggs?)
'invent fantasy name for Duck' Lesser Greater Hammerhead Duck.
 
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I don't mean to be the meanie but you are really over-thinking it. It's second world. Name them, describe them, carry on.

That which we call a rose...

Though, the important thing to consider is what traits would your folk have bred and developed in their ducks. Claws sounds good. Sharper teeth too maybe. (yes, ducks have 'teeth')
 

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I had it with some expressions and music genres first, how can a person listen to say "and all that jazz" if there's no jazz in this world? Also refering to especific cultures and their languages. Spanish is Vesperian, German is Volker and so on.

Then more specific things, how can you define Bohemian without certain Middle-European region or an issue that Pratchett had: Gypsies without an Egypt.

I kinda suspect this is why some people find it easier to write fantasy on pseudo-ancient or pseudo-medieval setting: less mix of languages and cultures to not fuzz about how to name a television set or a zeppelin (which is named after its inventor).

In my experience, which is not much to be honest, you can do three things:

1) Have a vague or descriptive name: Tolkien did it with pipeweed and Martin with naming crocodiles as lizard lions. I have been making a quick search on Wikipedia about the Muscovy Duck and its called in Spanish after attributes: The Mute Duck, after its sound, Musk Duck after its rather strong musk and Criole Duck, because of its color. Even in Argentina they have a saying according to Wikipedia: Criole Duck, each dung at each step. But I digress

2) Use an analogue or an alternative: A bit like the many names of the duck above, think of Pullman with His Dark Materials series: There's no electricity, but amberic energy. There's no Latin language but Roman language. Pratchett has "It all sounds Klatch to me" and Rowling had a couple "Hold your Hypogriphs" (which actually bothers me, since such expressions should have few sylabbes due to its automatic nature, but I am getting too much into linguistics now...)

3) Don't bother. Returning with Tolkien above, he did not bother with potatoes (taters?) which is a clear Amerindian expression and more than once we have seen characters playing chess with no mention or reference to India, having gypsies without Egypt, have Damascene sword without Damascus and vaguely-sounding Latin spells or Celtic runes without Romans or Celts to have come from. If done right, people can accept more things that you imagine.

Or as you said, simply leave the duck alone, after all, its a fantasy story and you could have regular ducks living wherever you want with any characteristics. It's like in Avatar: The Last Airbender, where at first it was odd to see pinguins with ferret faces or flying bisons, but then you accepted it and it was jarring to see, for example, a bear that was simply... a bear.
 

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There are also call ducks and silver appleyards.

I'd just give them fantasy duck breed names. Just like a secondary world isn't going to have morgans, Tennessee walkers, alter reals, etc. they're going to have their own names for different strains of livestock.

You could follow naming conventions, in that some livestock is named after the creator like morgan horses, plott hounds, silver appleyard ducks, etc. Some is geographic like you pointed out, and some are named for their physical characteristics like la fleche and silky chickens, bourbon red turkeys (most turkey breeds actually), and crested ducks.
 

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I'd just call them clawed duck or red-faced duck or winter duck or double-down duck if they are extra fluffy to resist cold... something descriptive.

I had a similar problem a while ago - I was trying to name a set of zodiac animals in a fantasy world and I didn't want to use any animal words that were latinate or french because everything was supposed to sound old english or saxon.
 

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I don't mean to be the meanie but you are really over-thinking it. It's second world. Name them, describe them, carry on.

In most fantasy stories, I'd completely agree. In this case, my POV character is a beastmaster who has a strong affinity for animals and would notice details like this. It would be out-of-character for her to generalize ducks into a single category. I want to use her observations to establish character and give an idea of what sort of things she notices, just like a POV thief character might describe a room by noticing all the valuables in a room and whether or not they're tied down.

Okay, yeah, and I'm procrastinating a little. >_>

Um, all ducks lay eggs?

Hey, I'm not THAT stupid. ;) I meant ducks that have high enough egg production that they'd be worth raising for that purpose. (Some breeds eat way more feed per egg and wouldn't be worth the cost to raise)

Thanks for the ideas, everyone! Very helpful.

ETA: For now, I'm using Max's suggestion and going with "mute duck."
 
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Have you thought of 'Donald'? That is a good name! :)

There are three ways of handling this. One is create a new name, the other is to do what Stephen King in the Gunslinger did and have alternate parallel worlds that are earth like (and have similar earth concepts, such as six shooter revolvers), and the last is make your reader aware that the words they are using have been translated into English equivalents (as I take it that your people do not speak Queens English yet you write in the stuff?). This point can be made by marking the made up duck breed/term with an '*' and adding a footnote stating the equivalent earth breed. Footnotes are very underutilized.

Good luck with your duck hunting.

PS. Add wood duck to your list, and red-face claw-foot duck.
 
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Ugh, hissy, creepy leatherhead ducks. Muscovy's are seriously nasty looking. They look like burn victims up on their gross, lumpy heads.

At least, that's the impression I have when looking at the breed and if you are looking for a name then you may want to consider how folks will see the breed in the context of your world. Here in our world we have turkey vultures, leatherback turtles and dodos. It's a little surprising that we don't have more vulgar names applied to livestock and domesticated animals.

On the plus side, here's a video of a Muscovy eating cheerios off a spoon: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XdAcqoX-CI
 

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Ugh, hissy, creepy leatherhead ducks. Muscovy's are seriously nasty looking. They look like burn victims up on their gross, lumpy heads.

At least, that's the impression I have when looking at the breed and if you are looking for a name then you may want to consider how folks will see the breed in the context of your world. Here in our world we have turkey vultures, leatherback turtles and dodos. It's a little surprising that we don't have more vulgar names applied to livestock and domesticated animals.

On the plus side, here's a video of a Muscovy eating cheerios off a spoon: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4XdAcqoX-CI

Oh yeah? I have a photo of our 9 week old muscovy drake swallowing a mouse whole (will pm it to those interested, kinda icky to put up publicly). Seeing that made me mighty grateful ducks are not pony size.

I like their lumpy heads. And they are quiet, another huge plus. They walk around smiling and wagging their tails. If I was going to rename them by appearance I'd probably call them wattled ducks or something like that. And they are wicked tough. My old hen beat the snot out of a red tailed hawk once, and her sire killed a german shepherd that broke into the bird yard and started killing his hens.
 

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It's a little surprising that we don't have more vulgar names applied to livestock and domesticated animals.
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It depends, English language had an advantage on Spanish that it managed to be rather homogenous classifying animals, for example, Spanish has 3 words for Capybara. (Capibara, chigüire, corpincho) and when it comes to vulgar or do names... jellyfish are called in Spanish either Medusa or Mean-Water, opposum are called in Venezuelan Spanish "Bare-butts" and so the different types are categorized as such (e.g. riverbank bare-butt, mountain woodland bare-butt, etc.), the Desert Cottontail bunny is called White Butt Bunny, in the Venezuelan country eels are called "Shakers", pythons are "Horse-eaters" and the bird Guan has become in Venezuelan Spanish something akin to "Curse" due to the idea that Guans would walk over the roofs of the house of soon to be fallen in disgrace and the Hoplas Malabaricus , a relative of the Wolf Fish, has become "Flip flop".

I have no doubt as well that there are dozens of names, if not hundred, to many types of animals when its hard to categorize them due to lack of knowledge...
 

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What would you do in this duck situation? Just describe them without naming the breed? Give them a new world-specific breed name? Just call them "ducks" and hope the reader isn't put off by the red faces and claws?

You're assuming the real world name would clarify things for readers, but for most people, that won't be true. Most people don't know their ducks. They'll be relying on your description, whether you used the real name or a fake name. The name isn't as important as the description.

So no, I've never worried about the name thing. But I did confuse a reader by assuming they understood the basics of goose behaviour. It's very easy as an animally person to think everyone knows, but they don't. If it's important, you have to find a way to explain it so someone who has never left the city can understand what you mean.
 

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if its a second world setting, just make up a breed- "them whitebills do be firery little gits," he said, rubbing the peck marks on his ankles.
 

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To merge this thread with another....

DIRE DUCKS
 

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I've heard ducks being called water chickens. This was by a person who didn't know a lot of English and didn't know the word duck.

Apparently, he had caught and eaten one then had to go to the ER for food poisoning. The doctor was trying to figure out what he ate.
 

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My old hen beat the snot out of a red tailed hawk once, and her sire killed a german shepherd that broke into the bird yard and started killing his hens.

Murderducks.

El pato diablo.

L'canard bain de sang.

However you say it, you've got some seriously fierce ducks there.
 

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Can you name them after regions in your fantasy world?

I rather like the idea of naming them by prominent physical attributes.
Like Red-faced bobbers. Or Crested long-toes.
 

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If ducks have taken the place of chickens, has somebody bred the males for fighting?

"Ah yes," murmured the professor, "a Klewang Island fighting mallard. Raised by the Duck-masters of Klongowat to be ferocious in the ducking pits. Huge sums were won and lost on battles to the death among the ducks. The Sultan of Jogmonard wagered half his realm and his favorite concubine on a battle between the Webbed Terror of Nagpang and the Broad-billed Death-dealer of Gungagunga."

"What was the outcome?"

"The sultan lost. His second favorite concubine fixed the match."
 

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Just create your own kind of duck named after a place in your world... or just use a real world duck and change its name
 
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