November 2011 Western Prompt

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November 2011 Western Prompt

Well, it seems it is my turn to pick the prompt. So, our November challenge will feature this topic: making difficult decisions.
This can either be a complete short story or an excerpt from an existing work.
The deadline is November 30.
It must be in a Western setting.
The difficult decision for your character(s) can be doing the unpopular, yet morally correct thing. Or, you can turn that around. I suppose doing the morally correct thing could be considered a cliche, which leads us into the special part of the challenge. If you desire, consider including a reversal of a well-known cliché. (ex.: sheriff wears black instead of white)
I will not set a word limit for the challenge. Just remember this: the shorter the work, the more high-quality crits you will probably receive.
Please let me know about any questions or concerns you may have.

Monthly prompt guidelines:

- Any type of Western is admissible - classic, modern, revisionist - and elements of other genres are welcomed, but your piece must have the majority of its boot in the Western genre.

- Please label your entry in the following format.

- <Month> Prompt: <Title> (<Type of Piece> - <Word Count> - <Content Warning (if necessary))>

- For Example:

- October Prompt: The Pumpkin Cowboy (WIP Scene - 2000 Words - Adult Content)

- The approximate length of your piece should be defined in the prompt. But, if it isn't, please do not exceed 5000 words.

- Consider posting a short introduction to your piece if you feel it necessary. Also, consider telling those who will be critting you whether you are posting for fun or with a more professional intent.

- Please do not post first drafts and take the time to proofread and correct simple mistakes before posting.

- Please keep re-writes in the same thread as the original work and take the time to think about crits before posting another draft.

- Please try to crit everyone who takes part in the prompt.

- Once you're happy with your work, why not check out the excellent Markets for Westerns thread (which can be found in the equally excellent Western Genre Sub-Forum) to have a look-see about sending it out somewhere.
 
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I already gots some idea's a-percolating for this one. :)

It's a real nice open prompt with plenty of inbuilt tension and scope for development. I love the idea of the moral heart and that we're allowed to subvert it. Should be the type of thing to catch the eye of a wandering writer looking for something new to write.

Howsabout everyone else? Anyone got plans for this prompt yet? Or are you ahead of the game and put pen to paper or fingertips to keyboard already? :)
 

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I unfortunately (or fortunately) have a section from my novel that fits the difficult decision - actually more than one. The problem is understanding the difficult decision without knowing more of the story (and since it comes at about 90K, that's a lot of explaining.)

I may write something specifically for the reverse cliche. Not sure yet. What I really need to do is get some queries out. Puma
 

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I unfortunately (or fortunately) have a section from my novel that fits the difficult decision - actually more than one. The problem is understanding the difficult decision without knowing more of the story (and since it comes at about 90K, that's a lot of explaining.)

Be good to see a part of the WIP, but I understand that when your explanation of the piece is longer than the piece itself it could be problematic! :)

I may write something specifically for the reverse cliche. Not sure yet.

Looking forward to it either way. And, talking of looking forward to things ...

What I really need to do is get some queries out. Puma

Now we're talking! Query means a novel wrote -- and, hopefully, a western story at that! Congratulations. :)

At risk of going off November Prompt topic -- are you ready/happy with your query. Because if you're not, I'm a thinking that putting it up for the Squirrel et al to dissect might be good not only for the query, but the showing that the Western genre is being written and subbed as well.

Getting back on message -- anyone want to throw their hat into the ring and commit themselves to writing something for this prompt?

Go on, you know you want to. :)
 

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Because you mentioned the squirrels, Harry, I'm going to follow up on it. (Sorry for the thread derail everyone.)

I have three completed and unsold novels, one western, one contemporary/human interest/semi-psychological, and one hard science-fi thriller. I've posted queries in squirrel heaven before and have actually done better with queries that never saw a squirrel than ones that have. So, I steer clear of squirrel heaven.

I'm not saying there's no value in squirrel heaven, because there is. But I think it's of more value to read the threads, watch them as they develop, and understand why particular things are being suggested than necessarily posting work for the squirrels to pick apart. Critting in squirrel heaven has a lot of value for someone who wants to query. There are also some excellent websites to use for reference.

But, regardless of the state of the query, everything always comes down to the state of the market and what agents and publishers are interested in. I have multiple strikes against me because I haven't stuck with one genre (add a historical fiction to the list of novels above). As we all know, western is a hard sell - my western could almost move over into historical, except it's not 100% historically accurate; the contemporary/human interest would be of more interest to the over 50 group than the younger set, and despite the fact that statistics show the over 50's are buying more books than the younger set, the market is geared to youth; the hard science-fiction is the one that's sort of a mystery to me - it's real science, could happen - but, no zombies or ghouls or magic and I think that's the problem.

So, I'm thinking about starting on another round of queries, knowing that I've already used up my shot at some of the agents who might be interested in my stories. What I really kick myself about is that a couple years ago when I started querying, I looked at the response time for publishers as too long and thought it would be quicker to go the agent route. Wrong. So, once more into the fray - but I'm not ready to go the e-book route yet. Puma
 
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Mine is already plotted and some is written. It is a part of a larger work.

As for the not knowing what's going on part, I'm hoping a short summary of important details will clue everyone in enough to follow the story.

Puma, I would be interested in hearing more about the human interest story. Target age doesn't matter much to me.

No hijacking of thread is seen. Whatever helps you to write is a plus.
 

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Hey, bk - I want / need to clarify ... on the November prompt, we can post anytime in November. Is that correct? No waiting until the 30th? Let us know. I know regdog already posted for November and I was curious. Thanks. Puma
 

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Good call, BK. :)

I'm thinking that prompts entries should fall in, or at the end of the month they are set in. However, and I can't think why I would say this having an October prompt still to get writ and posted, I think that this should be a target and we shouldn't frown upon anyone who wants to come late to the party.

For instance, and this is no way anything to do with my tardy self, someone might browse one of the old prompts and want to give it a go a long time after the fact. Therefore, with the health of the genre in mind, I don't think we should castigate late or earlier entries no matter how late or early they are. :)
 

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I know, I always talk about historical, but in historical, responses to prompts / topics can be posted anytime within the month, i.e., for November anytime between the 1st and the 30th. If you think about it, it doesn't make sense to call it a November prompt and post in December.

But, to do this, the prompt topics need to be announced before the month begins, i.e., it would be good to have the December prompt topic announced by about November 15th. Puma
 

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You know I love it when you talk historical, Puma. :)

With regard to the naming, you are right on the money; however, I like the 'on the month' prompt start as it seems so, well, on the month. Of course, it may cause a rash of the previous months prompts to appear in the next month, but I think we are going for interest and to spur people to writing so we shouldn't be to harsh on the when and the where of it.

The idea, I think, is to have a regular thing in an easily accessible (on the month every month) place that people can not only get involved in but also see that a once stagnant genre is moving again. Stuff posted earlier or later, no matter of the prompt date, can only benefit us in this regard. :)

BTW, is it just me, or does the Western SYW have a whole page of threads from the actual year we are in? I do believe it does and I think all of us involved in making that happen deserve a big round of applause for it ...

... but wait, is there more to do?

Yes, I believe there is. Come over to the western prompt thread for more details. :)
 

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I've got my two posts up for the November topics. Both short this time. How about you-all? You posting for November? Puma
 
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I like your style, Puma. :)

I'm defo posting a November prompt, got a character and a story in mind. My aim is to finish my October prompt in the next ten days and get the November on up before the end of the month. At least, thats the plan! :)

Love that you put work up already and I will be on it for crit in the next two days. Though for now, well, its four in the A.M and so its Samuel Pepys for me. :)
 

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Possibly unbeknownst to her, Puma's gentle prodding convinced me to move the deadline to the end of November. It is now set for the 30th. I apologize for any inconvenience this has caused. If you insist, however, you may post on November 31. I'm sure no one will cyber-stone you. (That's not a drug reference.) :)
 

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I'll be there. :)

maybe only with my October prompt -- but I'll be there. :)