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It rarely works to write scripts about your own life experiences.
Face it, for many of us that bad day in High School isn't really high drama or strong comedy.

HOWEVER, sometimes real events and experiences can be the basis for interesting moments in a script.

Time to share.

I'll go first.

Experience
When I was living out in Utah I fell madly in love with this guy.
One weekend he set up this overnight camping trip. It was supposed to be a group thing BUT only his roommate, myself, and him showed up.
In the morning his roommate took off for the the pool and I tagged along as my man went fishing. He walked through the river while I scrambled along the bank. For a while it was really romantic. Him standing in the river casting glances over at me sitting in a ray of sunshine on the bank.
Then- he moved further up the river. My path was blocked by a large rock.
He left me.
I finally managed to make it over the rock only to be faced with having to cross this large mud slide. I'd lost sight of him so I climbed up the slide to look around. At the top (about 30 feet up) I sat down, braced my feet on a rock, and rested. My guy came into view. I called to him, waving, and then....... the rock slowly pulled loose underneath me. About three seconds of mad scrambling occured as I tried to find a secure hand hold and then I went shooting down the slide on my butt, screaming.

Rob came crashing through the trees and charging up the bank to rescue me.
As he helped me to my feet I turned slightly and he burst out laughing. My entire backside from my derriere to my ankles was covered in thick red mud.

The application.
In one of my scripts the heroine is forced to climb a rock slide. As I had her starting out on this climb I thought the scene needed more.
Suddenly this experience of mine lept into my head and I knew how to do it.
She needed to slide. I knew just how to write that rock coming loose and the "Oh sh!t" reaction.
I used only a small part of the real experience, saving the rest for a rom-com, but it was just the right spark to create strong action and make a turning point in the script more meaningful.
 
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Funny scripter. I had similar experience when I was like 13 or 14. I was sooo embarrassed.

I apply a lot of my own experiences in my writing but here's the biggie. :)

My experience....

When I was I think 19 or 20, I was raising my daughter alone and needed help with the rent and my best friend's boyfriend needed a place to stay, so he became my room mate. (Felt like a great idea at the time). Well about three months down the line, he hadn't helped out squat, and I get a phone bill of a whopping $1200. Here he had been calling 1-900 numbers like there was no tomarrow. Needless to say I kicked him out and told him I would be keeping his furniture until he paid me back for every penny. One night when my sister and I were having dinner with our two little daughters he and my ex-best friend came knocking on the front door and I wouldn't allow them in. Her boyfriend than pushes his way into MY house and starts pushing me around (this guy was well over 6 ft and weighed a good 300 lbs). I tried to push him out of my house when he grew violent, he knocked me clear across the dining room floor and flipped my sister over the couch. Panicked, I called 9-1-1, in the middle of the call my ex-best friend hung up the phone. Finally I ran and grabbed a kitchen knife and chased him out of my house. About ten minutes later the police barge into my home, throw me down on the floor and hand cuff me in front of my kid. Here he stopped them in the street and told them I tried to kill him. When my sister tried to tell them what really happened she was told to keep her mouth shut or they would arrest her and take our kids to child services. I ended up in jail for about two hours before my mom came and bailed me out. The worst part wasn't the fact that I got arrested but that I felt my rights had been violated, I was being attacked in my own home and had every right to protect myself and my child.

The application...
when I was writing my thriller, my main character was wrongfully accused and arrested. I knew exactly how that felt and how the character should feel and react in the situation.

Steph
 

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I assume you're being sarcastic. You say life experience is usually not script worthy and uninteresting, then you go on to site a seriously lame and cliche one of your own. You should pitch that gold to the seventh heaven producers.
 

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Steph,

Geez. Did you ever do anything about it?
Did you get the chance to tell your side of the story?
My gosh. How awful.

However, it would seem like a great inspiration for thriller or action elements.

Rainy, well yes, some things you just can't distance yourself from no matter how hard you try. But other things that just happen often make great stories.
Change a few details here and there, punch up the key elements, change the names and you've got something with the ring of truth to it.
It may be easier to write because you know the feeling you want to capture.

Blank.
No, I'm not being sarcastic. Often when beginner writers start their first script it's about their life. Their story, or based on some really bad week, or year they had. Some experiences they feel changed their life.
Way too often the work carries this very dectectable note of need, or self therapy.

There is a big, HUGE difference between taking elements of a specifc event and building something new from that, and just rehashing things from your life.

What we are discussing is some kind of event that inspired a scene, or that you relied on to make the scene more believable. A stepping stone.
One of the many places from which we can draw inspiration.

Is a rock pulling loose and someone sliding down a cliff cliche? Eh, sure.
Many cliches work. People are used to them. People believe them because they have experienced them. Should we as writers strive to avoid them?
Sure, probably most of the time.
In my case there isn't any way around it. There ain't much else could happen to this chick on the cliff. The story dictates that she go down the slide with out meaning or wanting to. The most believable way for that to happen is for a hand hold to pull loose.

Lame? It was pretty funny when an exagerated version of what happened to me was done in Romancing the Stone.
 

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In film school and immediately afterward, it seemed like every one was writing their 'high school' script. Literally everyone had one. And very few of them were of any interest.

I don't use a lot of my own experiences, but I will use dialogue from real life. I remember I used to hang out with a bunch of screenwriters and anytime anyone said anything good someone would go 'can I use that!?'
 

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Steph - That's terrible.

It reminds me of the best advice a cop ever gave me. He explained that if I ever decided to bash somebody up, the first thing I should do when I'm finished is call 000 (or 911 in the USA) and call for help because my 'victim' tried to attack me.

Then anything my victim ever says is considered a counter-claim against my original complaint. The most likely result is that the cop will say to my 'victim' "Don't worry - he's agreed to drop the charges against you if you drop your counter-charges against him."

According to the Police, this is the best strategy to survive the legal system after fits of rage.

Keep it in mind ...

Mac
(PS: Blank - I think you misread the post. Scripter wasn't claiming that it was box-office gold. She was pointing out that it works well as an short event (say a minute or so) in ANOTHER story - perhaps during setting up characters in a coming of age story.)
 
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My own failed attempt to write a movie about a family story

Once I tried to expand an event into my father's life into a full movie. The event took place when he was a medic in the army.

While he was in the middle of a vaccination program (nothing fancy - just standard ones) it was realised that there was a top-secret military base in the far reaches of the country that had somehow not been included in the vaccination schedule.

After grumbling about the obscure location, he loaded up his ambulance with enough vaccinations for all 80 soldiers in this secret research facility and headed out for a two day trip across almost inaccessible mountain terrain to get there.

When he arrived, the place was deserted. Not a single human to be seen. Despite the fact that this was the current home for 80 soldiers, there was somehow a layer of dust that seemed to show that the place had been deserted for years.

When he got back and made some inquiries, he had a mysterious phone call which told him that he was never at the base, the base never existed and he could never tell anyone what he saw.

Anyone care to guess what happened next?

Mac
(PS: Hint. I tried to create a comedy from it, but it just came out as a lame version of 'Sergeant Bilko')
 
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These events are interesting but on their own don't tell nearly enough, I want to know what happened next! (Or is that the point? Is that the test of an interesting story?)

scripter, did the guy clean the mud off your butt, and did this lead to the sweet violins moment you'd hoped for?

Steph, did the cops finally listen to your story, track the guy down, and beat the crap out of him? Did you successfully sue for wrongful arrest, assault, etc.? Did you drive over him and reverse to make sure?

Mac, does your story end with, "We never saw him again"?

Need that next scene, people! Don't tease.

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Yeah sorry I got a bit hostile, Scripter1. It's just that your post is a bit confused. Dpaterso is bringing up good points, listen to him.
 

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What happened next....

I eventually got to tell my story, but not in court. Being a single mother at the time I couldn't really afford a good lawyer, and being young and stupid I really didn't know what I could do. I was appointed a public defender who got me off with basically a slap on the wrist and a dent in my record for attempting to use a deadly weapon or something, which would be wiped clean in a year if I didn't try "killing" anyone else. Now when I think back on it, I wish I had the sense enough to fight back, I could of sued the pants off the police department. I had three good things on my side, the 9-1-1 call, the guy who attacked me had a record a mile long, and he had no right to be there because his name wasn't on the lease. I did sue the guy for my phone bill, but all the court did was order him to pay, which didn't do me any good. The guy switched jobs every other month, and if I wanted the court to garnish his wages, I had to hire a private investigator to figure out where he worked.

It urks me thinking about it now, how they arrested me and allowed him to stand by and watch with a smirk on his face. Plus when they were shoving me in the back of the paddy wagon my landlord showed up. Talking about bad timing.

The worst thing about this is that he hurt my sister in the process of flipping her over the couch, messed up her neck. We couldn't file charges against him, because he filed charges against us.

So there's the rest of my story, not ideal for the whole of a screenplay, but enough to understand the emotions of a person wrongfully arrested. A feeling I will never forget for the rest of my life.

Steph
 

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We couldn't file charges against him, because he filed charges against us.
That's the kind of dubious legal advice the police gives victims, which is the whole point behind behind the 'always file charges against anyone you bash up' suggestion.

To continue my father's story, the source of the mystery didn't involve aliens or secret time travel experiments - it was much more mundane.

The paymaster had simply 'created' 80 fictious soldiers on paper and funnelled their salaries into his own bank-account. He then 'stationed' the soldiers on an old base that had been deserted for years.

It would have worked for a lot longer if he had remembered to fake vaccination records on their medical histories.

Hmm - it could almost work as an episode of 'Scooby Doo' ....

Mac.
 

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Steph, if only you'd known then what you know now...?

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My ending.

The mud on my rear end was too thick to simply brush off. (Actually it was red clay.) And, being a gentleman, he was too polite to attempt wiping it off.
Throwing me into the river was.... discussed, but deemed unsafe for him.

We put a towel down on the seat and he took me home. I changed clothes and then we went to a lake, where he did throw me in.

We dated for about two weeks and then he dropped me off one night, almost, almost kissed me and ...................

We never went out again.
He broke my heart.
 
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