Scary Stories for children

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I'm in the process of writing a collection of scary stories for children+ (7 & up). I am attempting to find the right level of "scary", and believe I've done a reasonably good job of find the tone and voice for the first draft, but I've had two readers voice hesitation towards one of the pieces.

The story in question ends with the MC, who is a little old lady, disappearing. The story is supposed to allude to her death, but the two readers who cried foul believe that the "death" of this character would be too emotionally heavy for children.

I recall reading scary stories when I was a kid, and I'd often times read absolutely terrible things which were meant for children - the story that comes to mind is the green ribbon.

Her head falls off.

What do you folks say? Is alluding to the death of a character too much for kids?
 

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As a kid some of my favorite books were R.L. Stein's Goosebumps. Its been years since I've read them, but I'm sure there was death in several forms in his books. I found a link below that has a small synopsis of the books in the series that may be worth a look through. Those books were an institution when I was a kid and are probably the best example of horror for children.

I don't personally think alluding to the death of a character is too much for kids, but I can see how some may think it is if the kids are very young and haven't really covered the topic with their parents yet.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goosebumps_(Original_series)#Books
 

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I remember Goosebumps being all the rage too. Although I didn't read them, I did read some other scary books that were aimed at my age book but literally gave my nightmares for weeks.

So I think the line of "too scary" depends more on the temperament of the kid.

Since it's a short story collection rather than a novel, why not just market the book towards an older audience rather than tone down the scary level, if you're concerned that it's too much for 7-year-olds?
 

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I recall reading scary stories when I was a kid, and I'd often times read absolutely terrible things which were meant for children - the story that comes to mind is the green ribbon.

Her head falls off.

What do you folks say? Is alluding to the death of a character too much for kids?

Nope.

Look at the death and cruelty in fairy tales meant for children. Look at the Disney movies meant for kids. There are a ton in which a mother or father (or sometimes a child) dies, or that absence is clear, at least.

I read scary stuff when I was a kid, and still do. Kids can take it, probably easier today than ever before unless they're sheltered, in which case they probably wouldn't be reading your book. :)

By the way, I remember that story! I also remember one in which a little girl always wore a ribbon. When she was made to take it off, her neck showed scars from a rope because she was dead, having hanged herself years before. That may not have been in a book for kids, but I was a kid when I read it. Probably helped make me the horror buff I am today. :)

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It's fine.

Look at Neil Gaiman's children's books as an example of current scary kidlit.
 

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I hope this doesn't sound too snarky...but...I have to wonder. If you've read ANY recently published kidlit AT ALL, you would already know the answer to this question. Because...um...have you heard of a fellow named Albus Dumbledore?

Characters are killed off all the time in middle grade books. And yes, the story of the girl with the green ribbon whose head falls off is still a classic. My first graders LOVE that story and fight over the book at the library. They're 6 years old.

Plus there is the marketing aspect that collections of short stories are extremely hard to sell unless you've already published a novel or some PBs.

So my advice is to drive yourself over to your local library ASAP and check out every scary kid's book the librarian can find for you. Do some intensive research, and you'll have a much better idea of what's acceptable for kids these days.
 

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Thank everyone for your input and responses!

It's been so long since I thought about Goosebumps! I actually have some of them in a box somewhere, maybe I'll bust a few out for old times sake.

I didn't feel as though the death was too heavy for kids - I was just surprised that there was any concern over it.

Neil Gaiman is a huge influence on the collection. Thanks again for all of your input, I'll be sure to share it with those who are interested once it is complete.
 

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If Gaiman's your influence, then you should already know there's a pretty high tolerance for "dark" in kids' books.

The Graveyard Book's opening line is about the knife that brutally murdered a toddler's family before the killer set out to find and murder the toddler, as well. Then said toddler toddles out of his diaper and into a cemetery.

Don't even get me started on Coraline and "Other Mother".

Yes. Scary books sell, even with deaths.
 

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Hiya Circus! Just go for it! I wrote a middle-grade fantasy which included lots of parts I thought way too gory for young brains...but you know what? Those were everyone's favourite parts! I learned right then that little people like yucky, dark, scary, and icky same as us old folk. Just do it. You can always tame down later.
 

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Haha - thanks jkbaby. I've done a test read for a couple younger kids, just a handful of stories, and they ate them up and asked for more!

It was pretty exciting seeing their responses as the stories would unfold, a very rewarding experience to say the least.