I'm in the process of writing a collection of scary stories for children+ (7 & up). I am attempting to find the right level of "scary", and believe I've done a reasonably good job of find the tone and voice for the first draft, but I've had two readers voice hesitation towards one of the pieces.
The story in question ends with the MC, who is a little old lady, disappearing. The story is supposed to allude to her death, but the two readers who cried foul believe that the "death" of this character would be too emotionally heavy for children.
I recall reading scary stories when I was a kid, and I'd often times read absolutely terrible things which were meant for children - the story that comes to mind is the green ribbon.
Her head falls off.
What do you folks say? Is alluding to the death of a character too much for kids?
The story in question ends with the MC, who is a little old lady, disappearing. The story is supposed to allude to her death, but the two readers who cried foul believe that the "death" of this character would be too emotionally heavy for children.
I recall reading scary stories when I was a kid, and I'd often times read absolutely terrible things which were meant for children - the story that comes to mind is the green ribbon.
Her head falls off.
What do you folks say? Is alluding to the death of a character too much for kids?