Help me please

rukshan1015 · Sep 13, 2011

Please help me to figure out grammar and syntax errors and to make it more organised and readable. Any help is highly appreciated.

Anyway I deleted it.

Fallen · Sep 13, 2011

It's not for a school/college assigment, is it, hun? Only I feel a touch uncomfortable re-writing assignments for grading.

Susan Coffin · Sep 14, 2011

Welcome, but....first post and you're asking for help on what appears to be a school assignment?

Haggis · Sep 14, 2011

Yeah, I'm a tad concerned too. I've pmd the op for clarification. We'll see what he/she has to say.

Calliopenjo · Sep 14, 2011

This doesn't look like something that would go in a book.

Help me please

rukshan1015

Fallen

Stood at the coalface

Susan Coffin

Tell it like it Is

Haggis

Evil, undead Chihuahua

Calliopenjo

Esteemed thinker