Intro'n newbie ReFreeze AKA Cap'n Rahn

Greetings Programs!

I am new to the site and it is P.n.Elrod's fault I am here!

I'll go into details later, but I am here to have my scrawl picked over and inspected with a microscope so I may find flaws or figger out which part of an audience I may be missing.

I am a nit-pickin' attention-to-detail devil, so if any of you want in depth critiques, just ask! Since I have to post 50x before I can post my own works, I need the 'work'.

Now, I must render this caveat: I am not a 'grammar-saurus Rex' but I am pretty good about critiquing: Story rhythm and flow; Voice of Character; Continuity; Scientific accuracy within the framework of the story; Alternate word choices and much more.

But, the truth is in the tasting of the puddin', so put me to task and see what I can do!

I am a disabled Air Force Desert Shield and Desert Storm Veteran {Radio/Radar/SatCom Master Technician Sgt.} who has MANY projects on the fire, but has LOADS of time to contribute to this site.

You can be assured that I will give my truly honest perspective to any of your works. If you are looking to be 'patted on the head' - I am not yer guy!

And, when I can post my own works, I expect quid-pro-quo. WMAO, Being cut any slack damages the work in progress and I can only hope any author that asks for my perspective can keep my attitude in mind. I am a mean, mean man! ;}

So, gird yer loins and ask for me perspective! Oh and call me Cap'n Rahn, or just Rahn... I'll fill you in on the back-stories of that and the ReFreeze moniker soon!

Take it easy, folks and remember to Keep on havin' FUN!

Thank you both!

Instead of perusing your profiles, I'll ask: what type of writing do you both enjoy reading?; And writing?

Interesting... my profile pic is not showing. I had thought I scaled it down enough {150x146 19.4 KB}. I'll try one of my photoplasty efforts.

Hummm... let us see if that worked...

EDIT - nope!

EDIT pt II: Ah - got it sorted! I am used to only having to upload a single pic for both Profile and Avatar!

LOL, thankee Amber!

Thank ya for the warm welcome! I dearly love fresh real-caramel covered kettle-corn!

How about you?

Thanks Andreea! Love yer Avatar!

Hi-yo JamieHall - you got a BIIIG party goin' - that fer me?! Thank ye much!

TheHairyMob - that bouncer has Waaay too much energy - and I luv yer Avatar! Thanks greatly for the warm welcome!

Thanks bunches, IsisAnalysis. I am looking forward to getting to know all of you!

Thanks for the Welcome{s}!

I've been 'down' physically the past day or more and am backlogged. I accidently mildewed my self by opening a case of 'fragrant' vinyl fabric and my allergies kicked my behind!

My brain is on hold today as well. So, I ask: Is there a place where folks ask for comments/critiques? I would like to get started doing so for others.