Is this close enough to a zombie to be called one?

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Sorry this is long, I've tried to make it short as possible.

After research and reading modern zombie novels, I'm afraid I'll P.O. zombie enthusiasts with my "zombie" WIP because the monsters may not be zombie enough.

Like zombies they are undead, generally slow, generally gruesome, say "brains" (I know not a necessary trait and kind of goofy, but it is important in the plot), generally dumb, crave human flesh and brains in particular, are violent, and their appearance led to the apocalypse.

However, unlike many zombies, they do not rot, do not die when shot in the head (but it will stop them), have a heart beat but not respiration, can heal wounds and regenerate limbs, will eat other zombies and animals, most can look very human under the right circumstances, very few are fast, very few are smart, and the rarest have limited supernatural abilities (but not flying or anything too weird).

I know breaking with convention may make it difficult (or impossible) to find a publisher, but that isn't my main concern (I'm writing out of love of the craft and love of the story). As I said, I worry that if it is published it will drive away zombie fans because my critters are different.

Maybe I should call them something else?
 

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You are absolutely fine calling them zombies.

I wrote a non-traditional zombie novel (mine are viral zombies with special powers, not undead) and had no issues finding representation. In my book, they're referred to primarily as "infected" since the zombie-ism is viral in nature, but some people still call them "zombies," because that's what they act like.

The zombie mythos has a lot of room for reinvention and reinterpretation. Don't worry about it.
 

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Being a zombie enthusiast, I asked the same question of some of my peers when I started my Zombie WIP. The replies were generally the same as leahzero's. There's a lot of room to move inside of zombie lore.

In my opinion, as long as they have limited cognition/mobility and hunger for the flesh of the living, they're zombies. I like your version and would like to know more about them.
 

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Call 'em whatever you want, it's your story.

You could call 'em Smurfs and no one's going to know any different (though you might get into legal trouble what with the movie and all). The reader's still going to read "zombie".

King never called his cell-phone-induced crazies in "Cell" zombies, but it was pretty obvious what they were.
 

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I love that you're putting a new spin on zombie lore (as long as they don't 'sparkle').
I think vamps, werewolves, zombies, etc. have been rather over-done (done to death, haha!) and it's time to come-up with new monsters--or at least a new twist on the old monsters. It sounds great. Good luck!
 

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Actually putting a new spin on something familiar can be more attractive to a publisher, methinks.

And I wouldn't worry about the purists. It's like 28 Days Later: some people claim it's not a zombie flick, but I thought it was one of the best zombie movies in recent history.

If you're worried about it, though, why not call them something else? I recently read The Forest of Hands and Teeth and loved that Carrie Ryan came up with new names for them.
 

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Hi Other,

What you are describing fits quite naturally within the realms of the shuffling dead. Personally, I wouldn’t be too concerned that your creations don’t fit perfectly into the traditional definition of zombies. Publishers seem to be displaying a lot of flexibility lately and having a fresh take can be a positive feature.
 

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It doesn't really matter, IMO. The word 'Zombie' is more of a broad generalization of many different monsters. For example, the 'Zombie' you're comparing your creation to would be closer to the 'Romero' style zombie- Mindless, slow, primal in hunger for flesh and soulless. George A. Romero glorified these, and they're widely considered the norm these days.
To define your creation, more information would be needed. How do your zombies become zombies? The tried and true 'Virus'? Some sort of supernatural Possession (Demonic Zombies)? Do they die first, and then become zombies? Or do they go straight from living to undead?
The 'Viral' zombie is common because of its flexibility in these matters. Then you have the intelligent zombie, who has an actual purpose, motive, goal, etc. These are known as 'Revenants', fueled by vengeance or something (Think Freddy Krueger & Jason).
Anyways, your creation could definitely be a Zombie. Just because the Romero-style is the most well-known type doesn't mean it covers EVERY type. :)
 
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Don't let labels inhibit your creations. The mere fact that you can push the zombie envelope will only add dimension to the concept. Any rationale you can imagine (that will work within the parameters of your story plot) for resurrection is fair game. There will only be limits if you choose to accept them.

In our series, Old Blood, the handful of zombies are victims of necromancy - of course, not all the victims are human beings...
 

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I love that you're putting a new spin on zombie lore (as long as they don't 'sparkle').
I think vamps, werewolves, zombies, etc. have been rather over-done (done to death, haha!) and it's time to come-up with new monsters--or at least a new twist on the old monsters. It sounds great. Good luck!

I caught 'sparkle' half a second before scrolling away and could not help but laugh. Man, does everything need to 'sparkle' these days to attract attention? lol
 
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