Writing Prompt One-Completion Date July 31

Maryn

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This is the writing prompt drawn from those submitted by the members of my RL erotica group.

Pity Fuck

Remember, the goal is to write something you might not ordinarily write. We don't require that it be long enough to qualify as a short story, although it can be. It can be polished, or fairly 'raw.' Any combination or sexual orientation, any activity, any number of players, is fine, with the caveat that if it violates the rules for posting here, it's not fine.

Do not post your efforts here. Post them at Share Your Work - Erotica using the subject line Prompt One.

(PM moderators ELMontague or veinglory, stating you are 21 or over, for the password, if you don't have it. Be aware that you must have 50 or more posts to start a thread at SYW. If you're coming up short, get busy critiquing the work of others and getting acquainted by participating at any other boards which interest you. Lots of fun goes on at Office Party, if you don't yet know that, including threads designed to get your post count up.)

My critique group gives itself two weeks to follow a prompt, so let's try something close to that here. Please have your pity fuck work posted no later than July 31st.

Maryn, hoping you all find this fun
 
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Mine's there, short and ...sweet? I am not good at dialogue.
 

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That was fast, sailor. Which is perfectly acceptable. These are simply meant to spur a story, large or small. Thanks!

Maryn, who'll go look at it
 

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Just added a part two. Seems like something's coming together. No idea where it's going to lead yet.
 

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Who knows, sailor, maybe you'll end up with a short story to market, where before you had nothing. That'd be pretty cool.

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That would be cool. Story seems to be writing itself at the moment.
 

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And... this one is closed. I'll just tell myself most of us were simply too busy to write to the prompt.

Should I do another one?

Maryn, who could
 

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Thanks Maryn. I don't know if I followed the theme totally but it got me working on something new. It's at 4.8k and counting. I appreciate the kick in the pants.

Thanks again.
 

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I think it is worth putting up prompts, and hope to get to one or two of them--
 

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I certainly appreciated the prompt, made me think of a few different things even though I didn't submit anything (finding time and focus is my biggest issue). Would certainly like to see more. Thank you.
 

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In that case, I'll post prompt two. I wasn't sure it was a springboard, or fun, or food for thought, or anything except for sailor.

Who's totally worth it, of course!
 

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Hi! I worked on something that was inspired by this prompt, but it didn't play by the rules. It went nowhere near the "Pity Fuck" element!

Anyway, I was hoping someone would come and look at it for me. My first post in Erotica SYW (it was the Horror forum's Halloween prompt.) actually turned out to be pretty awful, and since I wrote this one first, I'm trying to figure out if it was the Horror Erotica story that was a flop or if it's my ability to write Erotica in general that sucks.

I'd be grateful if someone would take a look at it and tell me what they think. Thanks! :D

http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=230676