A couple of months ago I started a new blog to host what I had hoped would become a short serial written from the perspective of a habitual murderer. Unfortunately graduation and the unrelenting army of homework that precedes really got in the way.
Despite the stasis it put my updates in, this may have been for the better, because it's given me the opportunity to step back and think "wow, what a mediocre piece of crap."
I'd like to continue the story, as I need to actually finish something for once in my life, but I don't want to continue pushing out the same level of not-quite-good-enough-yet. Unfortunately my friends, even the ones who write, aren't exactly the best critics in the world. They seem to hold me up as some holy grail of literature, which I clearly am not, and I need somebody, or somebodies, to punch my stories in the face and rip out their teeth so I can craft a better sent of dentures.
I'm going to keep the first entry as it is, but I would really appreciate if someone out there wouldn't mind looking at my subsequent entries (not all at once, I want to approach them one at a time) and help me stop sucking.
The blog can be found here:
http://killersnotebook.blogspot.com/
If you want to make me cry at night, you can e-mail me, message me, post on the blog, or y'know, just reply in this thread, because I'm probably going to be checking on it every half hour anyways.
Despite the stasis it put my updates in, this may have been for the better, because it's given me the opportunity to step back and think "wow, what a mediocre piece of crap."
I'd like to continue the story, as I need to actually finish something for once in my life, but I don't want to continue pushing out the same level of not-quite-good-enough-yet. Unfortunately my friends, even the ones who write, aren't exactly the best critics in the world. They seem to hold me up as some holy grail of literature, which I clearly am not, and I need somebody, or somebodies, to punch my stories in the face and rip out their teeth so I can craft a better sent of dentures.
I'm going to keep the first entry as it is, but I would really appreciate if someone out there wouldn't mind looking at my subsequent entries (not all at once, I want to approach them one at a time) and help me stop sucking.
The blog can be found here:
http://killersnotebook.blogspot.com/
If you want to make me cry at night, you can e-mail me, message me, post on the blog, or y'know, just reply in this thread, because I'm probably going to be checking on it every half hour anyways.
