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Hey everyone! I've finished a Sci-Fi YA novel with the working title of 'We The People'. It is roughly over 56,000 words. Anyone interested just leave a comment or PM me. I'm looking for honest feedback. Feel free to rip this baby apart. I want to make this the best it can be. I was submitting to agents, but then someone here told me I should hold back on that and get a Beta Reader first. So luckily I was caught in just the first round and before I started sending out queries to the entire list I've gathered of agents. I figure it's smarter to get it ripped apart now by people here who are only trying to help me, then later on by agents, publishers or even reviewers if I would get this book published before it was ready to be. (*Cough*Like what happened with PublishAmerica*Cough*)
Here's a slight peek into what the story is about. The government of Earth has discovered an abandoned but habitable planet that had buildings on it. They formed an agency upon their find and the agency took over the planet. They reconstructed and colonized it, with the intention of bringing over only worthy and rich people from Earth and then letting all the unworthy people die. The story begins when Aliens have returned and find their planet taken over by humans. It doesn't go over well. The story mainly follows Drusilla Pruet, Rinc Wilde and Gilbert Tilly who are all children of agents that either abandoned them or were killed. Young adults, the three of them plan to take down the agency and survive the Aliens.
Thanks so much for your consideration.
Here's a slight peek into what the story is about. The government of Earth has discovered an abandoned but habitable planet that had buildings on it. They formed an agency upon their find and the agency took over the planet. They reconstructed and colonized it, with the intention of bringing over only worthy and rich people from Earth and then letting all the unworthy people die. The story begins when Aliens have returned and find their planet taken over by humans. It doesn't go over well. The story mainly follows Drusilla Pruet, Rinc Wilde and Gilbert Tilly who are all children of agents that either abandoned them or were killed. Young adults, the three of them plan to take down the agency and survive the Aliens.
Thanks so much for your consideration.
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