Abbottabad by Mjr. James Abbott

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The last six lines make this worth reading, IMO.

Abbottabad
I remember the day when I first came here
And smelt the sweet Abbottabad air

The trees and ground covered with snow
Gave us indeed a brilliant show

To me the place seemed like a dream
And far ran a lonesome stream

The wind hissed as if welcoming us
The pine swayed creating a lot of fuss

And the tiny cuckoo sang it away
A song very melodious and gay

I adored the place from the first sight
And was happy that my coming here was right

And eight good years here passed very soon
And we leave you perhaps on a sunny noon

Oh Abbottabad we are leaving you now
To your natural beauty do I bow

Perhaps your winds sound will never reach my ear
My gift for you is a few sad tears

I bid you farewell with a heavy heart
Never from my mind will your memories thwart

"Abbottabad" is a poem by Major James Abbott who wrote the work about his experience of living in the area before leaving it. He was impressed by beauty of the area. The Pakistani city Abbottabad, which he founded (then capital of the Hazara District of British India), is named after him.[1] A plaque commemorating his poem is displayed at Lady Garden Park within the city.[2] The poem was referred to as "one of the worst poems ever written" by the Guardian newspaper.[3]
Etymology: The name of the city Abbottabad is a compound contain two words, Abbott and Abad. Abad means a place of living.
 
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Thanks for sharing this, but it isn't the right place for it, Mags - it should be in the main forum (since the discussion sub is gone) or maybe chapbook at a push.
 

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I think the Guardian got it right.
 

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This may not hold a record - I'm pretty sure I've seen poems that bad in slush! (Not many, fortunately.)