I just posted a question in Basic Writing Questions that might be appropriate here. I deleted the erotic details for posting in that section. Here's the link, but I've summarized the question below. http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?p=6056630#post6056630
My question is about creating a book out of a series of 22 erotic vignettes that together tell a story. Each vignette is more interesting that the overall story; they were originally written as stand-alone stories. As I wrote them, I realized they fit together, so I started writing pieces specifically to make the connections.
As for content, this is the story of a male threesome in a leather (BDSM) household. Two established partners, a dominant and a switch, bring a third into the relationship, a young submissive half the age of the dom. The new arrangement creates some conflicts, such as the “beta” dom (the switch) feeling uncomfortable being punished in the presence of the man who submits to him. (By "punished", I don't mean their regular play scenes, which they happily do together.) The "alpha" dom and the sub find they have a shared past and this knowledge threatens the relationship. Eventually, all three pairs deepen their relationships and move forward as a functioning threesome.
I'd have to force more plot into this to make it more like a conventional novel.
My question is about creating a book out of a series of 22 erotic vignettes that together tell a story. Each vignette is more interesting that the overall story; they were originally written as stand-alone stories. As I wrote them, I realized they fit together, so I started writing pieces specifically to make the connections.
As for content, this is the story of a male threesome in a leather (BDSM) household. Two established partners, a dominant and a switch, bring a third into the relationship, a young submissive half the age of the dom. The new arrangement creates some conflicts, such as the “beta” dom (the switch) feeling uncomfortable being punished in the presence of the man who submits to him. (By "punished", I don't mean their regular play scenes, which they happily do together.) The "alpha" dom and the sub find they have a shared past and this knowledge threatens the relationship. Eventually, all three pairs deepen their relationships and move forward as a functioning threesome.
I'd have to force more plot into this to make it more like a conventional novel.