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Dream Magic - open beta

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DawnHarshaw

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Hello,

I'm writing a fantasy novel titled "Dream Magic", and I'm fishing for some feedback. (5 chapters are online, with more to come.)

Dream Magic
http://www.dawnharshaw.com

A young boy battles goblins, learns magic and faces inner demons in a shared lucid dream.

Thank you!
 
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I would love to beta this for you. I read some of the first chapter, and it seems like a very fun story. Would you like a detailed edit, or are you looking for just an overall impression of each chapter? Something in the middle? Let me know :)
 

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Thank you! It's much appreciated!

I'd like as much detail as your time allows. :) I'm interested in your impressions after first reading, as well as comments on flow and grammar structure. I have some more questions here (http://www.dawnharshaw.com/BetaTesters.htm), but I'm happy for any kind of feedback. Thanks again!
 
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