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This is my first beta request, after talking to several other members of the website I felt it was time to try it out.
I have a science fiction fantasy story, it is about 70,000 words, and it is a comedic coming of death story... I think.
It maybe similar to a zombie or other end of the world disaster story, but instead of the undead or a giant monstrous abomination wreaking havoc, it is animals. All of the animals on the planet, with the exception of human beings, have gained superpowers and have not figured out how to use them properly. They thus unintentionally cause a lot of damage and death as they try and reach a new equilibrium.
Though I might be horribly wrong, I think I have a decent grasp on story. However, I feel I need serious work in the spelling, grammar and syntax department. In that respect, while I am more happy and willing to read your work in exchange, I can't promise bringing much to the table in terms of grammar.
I have a science fiction fantasy story, it is about 70,000 words, and it is a comedic coming of death story... I think.
It maybe similar to a zombie or other end of the world disaster story, but instead of the undead or a giant monstrous abomination wreaking havoc, it is animals. All of the animals on the planet, with the exception of human beings, have gained superpowers and have not figured out how to use them properly. They thus unintentionally cause a lot of damage and death as they try and reach a new equilibrium.
Though I might be horribly wrong, I think I have a decent grasp on story. However, I feel I need serious work in the spelling, grammar and syntax department. In that respect, while I am more happy and willing to read your work in exchange, I can't promise bringing much to the table in terms of grammar.
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