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Hi. After 2 or 3 revisions and a change in POV, I'm looking for someone to read my novella and give me their honest, constructive opinion, as well as any suggestions to improve the story.
Shimmerspell Query/Blurb:
Jensen Meadows hands out tall tales like pervs hand out candy. Raised by big sister/con-artist Lauren, she recognizes the value of a perfectly executed lie. But when she dabbles in the family business, overhears a murder confession at school, and is abandoned by Lauren, she learns a few things:
1. Red Bull isn't the only way to get wings.
2. The Seelie Court does not take King Arthur's death lightly.
3. Shimmerspell, the power to move between realms, is lost.
4. And somehow, her beloved sister is tied to it all.
With the help of high school junior/light-elf Liam, she searches for truth in a sea of lies and begins to suspect that her own life may be the tallest tale of them all.
If you're interested, please send me a pm. Thank you!
ETA: I have all the beta readers I need. Thanks everyone!
Shimmerspell Query/Blurb:
Jensen Meadows hands out tall tales like pervs hand out candy. Raised by big sister/con-artist Lauren, she recognizes the value of a perfectly executed lie. But when she dabbles in the family business, overhears a murder confession at school, and is abandoned by Lauren, she learns a few things:
1. Red Bull isn't the only way to get wings.
2. The Seelie Court does not take King Arthur's death lightly.
3. Shimmerspell, the power to move between realms, is lost.
4. And somehow, her beloved sister is tied to it all.
With the help of high school junior/light-elf Liam, she searches for truth in a sea of lies and begins to suspect that her own life may be the tallest tale of them all.
If you're interested, please send me a pm. Thank you!
ETA: I have all the beta readers I need. Thanks everyone!
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