Hey gang! I'm looking for willing beta readers for the first 10 pages of my YA paranormal with strong action-adventure elements. I'm slightly freaking out about my prologue (and among other things), as I know I can make it stronger, but I don't know how!
Here's a link to what my story is about. I put my query up in Query Hell:
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=207929
I could really use some advice/direction on what's working in these pages and what's making you want to strangle yourself rather than continue to read (I'm joking, it's really not that bad lol
...hopefully).
Thanks for checking out my cry for help!
Here's a link to what my story is about. I put my query up in Query Hell:
http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=207929
I could really use some advice/direction on what's working in these pages and what's making you want to strangle yourself rather than continue to read (I'm joking, it's really not that bad lol
...hopefully).Thanks for checking out my cry for help!
