Looking for feedback in SYW - Learning to be safari guides 1,570 words

janwyl

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Hi all

A couple of days ago I posted a section of my WIP in Memoir / Autobiography SYW, but so far it's had zero replies and five views - and I suspect a couple of those views might be me.

Thing is - it may be of more interest to the crowd who hang out here. The overall book is a memoir-type book, but the section I posted is almost entirely about animals.

So before I go cup in hand to the SYW Starbucks, would any of you be interested in taking a look and giving me your thoughts? I'd really really appreciate it...

You can find it at http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=205117 (If you get asked for a password, it's vista. Thanks for the reminder Derek!)

Thanks very much!
Jon
 
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