Would he say this?

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Tepelus

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I submitted a snippet in Historical SYW for the February challenge of loss, and a question was brought to my attention with a paragraph in the snippet. It has me thinking, with my character being an Orthodox, if what and how he speaks in this paragraph would be correct for the time period. This takes place in the late 15th Century, the MC is Romanian (Walachian), and he carries a small wood icon of the Virgin Mary with him nearly everywhere he goes. Here's the paragraph:

From the pouch strapped to his belt, Gheorghe pulled out his icon of the Holy Mother, kissed it, and said, “Please, Blessed Virgin, watch over him. Protect him. And release the chains that bind him still to this world so he can be with God in Heaven, and have forever peace. I know I have let my devotion wane, but please, do this not for me. Do this for him. He has always been a good person.” He kissed the icon again, and placed it upon the stool.
Would my character say Blessed Virgin, or would he refer Mary in a different way? Would he be praying to her directly, and not to God Himself? Would he say God in Heaven? These were some of the questions brought up in the thread. Here's the link to the thread in SYW if you want to get a better idea of what's going on:


http://www.absolutewrite.com/forums/showthread.php?t=203747


Also, would it be believable that my MC would carry around a little icon with him? I kind of like the idea of him doing so. But if it's not realistic that he would, I can take it out.


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15th Century Orthodox? I'd believe him carrying a icon/token/something-or-another, sure. I doubt that he would be praying to God as opposed to the Virgin Mary for any particular reason so I see no fault in picking the one over the other in this case. (That is, if the Orthodox pray to Saints in the first place, which I can't be sure of.)

Some of the language seems "updated" to have a 1400s feel. I'm no expert so don't quote me on it.
 

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Thanks for the reply. It's been a little while since I started this thread, and for so long no reply, that I just gave up checking on it until today. It's still a question I need answered, I may ask my ex's sister to see if she could help me out.
 

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In the 15th century, the cult of Mary was strong. Praying directly to her would be commonplace.

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I see no major fault with the passage. Like Chuckles said, might add more 15th C feel to the language itself but the passage is fine. Maybe try to find some original writings from this timeperiod and region on the net? Might find something, I dunno.
 

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drat...I have been away from the forum too long and have lost the hang of it! Can't get to the SYW forum. However, fwiw, though I am not Romanian, I am Orthodox. We call Mary the "Theotokos". Your character would likely address her as "Most Holy Theotokos" or "Mother of God". As for owning even a small icon, remember that these were hand painted by expert craftsmen, so your character would likely have to be wealthy enough to commission one-- otherwise you might have to explain where he got it. For a quick view of various Orthodox topics, check out orthodoxwiki.org.

There is no reason your character would not also pray directly to God, and perhaps to his own patron saint.
 
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