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Looking for Beta (High Fantasy)

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joeyc

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So, awhile ago I finished a book. I called it WINTER TIDES. I sent it out to agents and got nothing but rejections (and while I have a few outstanding queries, I'm not holding my breath.)

But I want to polish it up and sent it another go in another year or two, after I finish up my current project, because without a single bite the problem might be in the story itself. And I'm not entirely ready to let it go yet.

I'd be willing to read/critique someone's WIP in return.

But, anyway. WINTER TIDES is 104,000 words, a high fantasy on the high seas with pirates and sea monsters.

Anyway, what I need is help with logistics, specifics. The fine-tuned details, because that's pretty much the main problem I have right now.
 
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Hi, your taste in books seems similar to mine so your book might be something I'd be interested in reading and commenting on.

If you want to send me the first chapter I'll read it and then we can see how it goes on and whether we want to go further.

I have to say that I don't do formal grammar or punctuation, but I know a good story when I read one, so if that's what you are after then perhaps I can help you.

Also be aware that I will tell the truth as I see it. If I think it's terrible I'm going to say so. I'll try to say it nicely, but I'll still say it.

PM me if you are interested and we can discuss this further.
 

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I could give it a read as well, while I'm not the expert to ask when it comes to grammar or punctuation either, I could give some feedback on story, pace and such.
 
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