elhelw984
11-18-2010, 05:42 AM
i am a comics writer. i have a new strong english comic story scribt. it is a long story that will be divided as series ( as naruto,bleach and one peice ) and it is action fantasy series. First chapter is here. so i need the co-operation of a good artist and publisher for this script and i gurantee that it will so popular ..Web publishers are welcomed too
that is the first chapter except some separate pages and panels i did not bring them here so the story can not be taken
thanx alot
-----------------------
the story name is : (( AMRO )) and it is the main character's name
---------------------
((AMRO))
Panel 1
long shot
A scene showing a huge solar planets in their spheres
Comment (Planet Zark, far from our planet by millions of light years, but has a great similarity to our planet Earth.)
It is located in a distant Galaxy, one of the galaxies in this vast universe.
Panel 2
medium shot
the picture focuses on the planet from a distance
Comment (Many great civilizations have lived on this planet.)
Panel 3
medium shot
The scene focuses on part of a very civilized city with luxurious buildings, a number of flying cars, clean roads and stylish people.
Comment (Throughout these civilizations, peace and security have prevailed in the planet under the rule of their fair emperors.)
Panel 4
medium shot
An extension to the previous scene with the same details.
Comment (Thus, the planet prospers and its people make an amazing progress.)
Panel 5
medium shot
Ten men led by the most powerful and obscure one, dressed in dark blue cloaks with high collars that hide their faces except for their eyes and part of noses and all picture in a bit darkness that covering their appearances details
Comment (Then," Power" Organization appeared which holds abilities that the history has never seen like before.)
Panel 6
close up shot
on the most evil eyes.
Comment (led by its leader, Alfred, the Organization has been able to occupy the entire planet)
Page 2
Panel 7
medium shot
Part of the city shows one or more buildings destroyed, bodies of dead people all around the place and a destroyed road.
Comment (And destroyed most of the planet, killed all of its leaders and millions of its people.)
Panel 8
Medium shot
The nine members of the organization kneel down in front of proud Alfred and all of them in dark without clear details of their appearances.
Comment (Here, the leader of the organization, Alfred, divides the planet into ten empires so each member of the organization had his own empire)
Panel 9
Medium shot
A scene in which Alfred in darkness stands by himself on the ruins with his cloak flutters in the air.
Comment (And Alfred becomes the general governor of the planet besides being the governor of the largest empire of them all.)
Panel 10
Medium shot
The scene shows some of the organization members and their soldiers torturing people and others kneel in front of them. (That highlights the injustice and violence of the organization)
Comment (But All of "Power" members were unjust and cruel in their ruling.)
Panel 11
Medium shot
The scene shows the bad conditions of the planet and the people who appear to be humiliated with poverty and injustice.
Comment (Consequently, the planet and its people’s conditions change to the worse under the rule of the Power Organization.)
Panel 12
Close up shot
A completely black picture with a small spotlight in the middle.
Comment (But darkness can never last forever.)
Page 3
Panel 13
Medium shot
The doctor is sitting behind his desk, gesturing to a lady in front of him to sit down. Her back is facing us. Beside the lady is a young man standing facing the doctor too
The doctor (please sit down madam)
Panel 14
Medium shot
Same picture, but the lady is sitting down and the the young man standing beside her
Panel 15
Close up shot
A small picture shows the anxiety on the lady face. She is in her forties.
The lady (please doctor, tell me exactly the condition of my son)
Panel 16
Close up shot
A close up on the doctor’s face speaking with sorrowful features, he lowered his head.
The doctor (I am so sorry madam, but our doubts are now confirmed.)
Panel 17
Close up shot
A close up on the lady’s face who is shocked.
Panel 18
Close up shot
A close up on the sad face of the doctor.
Doctor:
((Your son is suffering from an extremely rare brain malignant tumor))
Page 4
Panel 19
Close up shot
The picture shows the shocked lady and also her shocked son standing next to her. Her hand is on her mouth with huge sadness.
Panel 20
Close up shot
The picture shows the doctor with his fingers crossed on his desk.
The doctor (and am sorry to tell you that your son really in need of a special treatment which is not available in our hospital, you know the bad conditions that we suffer from and….)
The doctor stops suddenly
Panel 21
Close up shot
sfx
voice of crying
The picture shows the lady’s face, her hand on her mouth; her tears are running down her cheeks.
Panel 22
Close up shot
The picture shows a hand patting the lady’s shoulders kindly
Panel 23
Medium shot
The picture shows the son, deep sadness on his face, gently putting the palm of his hand on his crying mum’s shoulder.
The son (lower your voice mam, I am afraid my brother outside may hear you.)
Panel 24
Medium shot
A picture shows the doctor at his desk and the mother sitting in front of him, her son, putting his hand on her shoulder.
Doctor: (well done Ramy. It is so important now to make your brother feel better.)))
Page 5
Panel 25
Medium shot
The same picture, but here the mother rises from her chair and wiping her tears. Her son, Ramy, is looking at her with a worried face.
Panel 26
Close up shot
The picture shows the mother's back, she is standing at the door.
Mother: (Thank you, doctor)
Panel 27
Medium shot
The picture shows the mother as she opens the door of the room and going out and her son Ramy rushes to catch on her quicklyRamy: (Wait, mum)
Panel 28
Close up shot
The picture shows Ramy getting out of the door to catch his mother who has left. Ramy is at the door.
Ramy: (Thank you very much, doctor)
Panel 30
Medium shot
Sfx:
Lock door voice
The picture shows the doctor sitting at the desk fingers crossed, on his face signs of sadness.
The doctor whispers to himself: ((poor young man))
Panel 31
Close up shot
The picture shows the sad face of the doctor, Clasping his fingers under his chin
The doctor whispers to himself: (((I just hope his mother and brother can make him feel a bit better.. in his last days))
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 6
Panel 32
Close up shot
The scene shows the back of the mother's and her son Ramy's heads from behind, and the picture focuses from between their shoulders on a young man in front of them sitting in a wheelchair - slim and handsome with blue hair, on his face signs of sickness and weakness. He is looking to them with a worried face.
Panel 33
Close up shot
The picture shows the side face of the mother, she turns her sad face and eyes down away from her son's
Panel 34
Close up shot
The picture shows the young man who sits on the wheelchair, putting down his head, on his face a bitter smile full of sadness.
Panel 35
Close up shot
The picture shows the mother looks at the young man sitting on the chair and smile encouragingly but cannot hide her grief.
Panel 36
Medium shot
mother standing on a corner of the picture, Ramy fakes signs of joy and puts his both hands on the shoulders of the young man sitting on the wheelchair, who is still putting down his head in a bitter grief.
Ramy: ((O Amro , cheer up!! The doctor has told us that you will recover so soon and will be able to walk on your feet again in a few days... and that the illness will not ...)) he stops suddenly.
Page 7
Panel 37
Close up shot
The picture shows Amro who has touched Ramy's hand gently that is on his shoulder, he looks at Ramy ,with a smile full of love and sympathy
Amro ((I know, my brother ... I know…take it easy)
Panel 38
Medium shot
The picture shows a side view of Ramy , who stands straight - has put down his eyes to the ground, sadness on his face - and Amro, who was still smiling as he looks to his mother who is standing in the same place - he tries to joke
Amro : ((Come on, Mom let's go home ..Hospitals always make me hungry!
Panel 39
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of pushing the chair
Ramy shows joy on his face, holding the handles of the wheelchair of his brother and gently pushes forward... And mother behind walks slowly with a sad face. The ground is full of patients all over the place resting their backs on walls, they look poor and miserable (a sign of poverty and bad conditions of the planet)
Ramy: (wait till we go home to see what mum has prepared ...a stew that you love ... enjoy brother, that tasty love!
Panel 40
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of laughing
The same picture, Ramy and Amro laughing in a cheerful way and mother is still walking behind , her face down in sadness.
Panel 41
Close up shot
The picture shows the side face of the mother with her hair cover her eyes and tears running on her cheeks.-
Panel 42
Medium shot
Sfx:
Creak of a door opening
the picture shows the inside of a small and humble house. focus on the opened door and the mother who opens it and Amro appears behind her in his wheelchair, and Ramy pushing the wheelchair gently.
Page 8
Panel 43 (action to action)
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of the door closure
Scene inside the house shows the mother as she shuts the door. while Amro in his wheelchair turns his head to his brother with a smile saying:
Amro : ((Ramy .. take me to my room if you please .. I need to rest for a while))
Panel 44
Close up shot
Mother turns to Amr
Mother: ((Wouldn't you have something to eat ,Amro ?))
Panel 45
Medium shot
Amro turns to his mother
Amro : ((forgive me mum .. will eat when I get up .. I feel a bit tired))
Panel 46
Medium shot
the picture shows a small, humble room empty except for a bed, small wardrobe and a small single window next to the bed with a moon light enters and falls on bed .Ramy helps Amro to get up from the wheelchair and lay on the bed.
Panel 47
Close up shot
the picture focuses on the face and chest of Amr, lying on the bed
Amro : ((Thanks a lot , Ramy ))
Panel 48
Close up shot
Ramy smiles at his brother, a caring smile.
Page 9
Panel 49
Medium shot
Ramy going out of the room and Amro asleep on his bed.
Panel 50
Medium shot
the picture shows the dark room from above, completely dark but for the light of the moon, which falls on Amro's bed, he opens his eyes and looks up
Panel 51
Close up shot
the picture focuses the face and chest of Amr as he looks up, on his face features of deep sadness.
Amro talking to himself : ((forgive me mum))
Panel 52 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
The face of Amro
Amro to himself : ((I know I am going to die soon .. but that is not what make me sad ))
Panel 53 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
the picture shows part of Amro's face with flash back pictures on the background - as he retrieves memories - his mother's face appears, smiling a warm smile of love
Amro to himself
: ((What make me so sad that I could not support you in these hard days))
Page 10
Panel 54
Close up shot
Amro's hand takes out a small old photo from under his pillow.
Panel 55 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
The picture shows the photo that Amr looks at, which shows a strong well built, elegant man wearing a military uniform and showing strength and rigidity.
Amro to himself
: ((and especially after murdering my father , this military heroic commander, in the war of our global empire against Power's assaults))
Panel 56 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro's face which is now full of anger and hatred, at the same time retrieving more memories. Pictures of some people of vague shapes in the background. (Members of the "power" Organization)
Amro to himself : ((the mean "power" organization...how do I hate it ... It has destroyed my life and my entire planet))
Panel 57 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
Amro , who is holding the picture to his chest, closes his eyes
Amro to himself
: ((but it can never win till the end .. never))
Panel 58 (moment to moment)
a close up on Amro's face, who is embracing the image and the tears are running from his eyes
Amro to himself
: ((that is what my father taught me))
Panel 59
Medium shot
Sfx:
calm knocks on the door of the room
Room and Amro turn to the door, saying: yes?Panel 60 Close up shot
Ramy opens the door
Ramy : Amro .. your friend " Ramzy " came to visit you
Page 11
Panel 61
Medium shot
Amro stands on the bed, hide the image under his pillow and wipe his tears. and on the door of the room Ramy stands and Ramzy beside him. Ramzy is a handsome brown young with a kind face
Amro happily: Let him get in please, Ramy
Panel 62
Close up shot
Ramzy enters the room with cheerful face
Ramzy: How are you today my dear friend ?? I see you are much better now..
Panel 63
Close up shot
Amro lowers his sad eyes
Amro: am fine Ramzy... How are you and all of our friends?
Panel 64
Medium shot
Room with closed door and Ramzy sitting on the bed next to Amro
Ramzy: All fine. And sending you their best wishes and greetings
Panel 65
Close up shot
Ramzy puts his hand on the shoulder of Amro and spoke to him encouraging
Ramzy: Amro... We all know you will recover soon... because you are always strong
Panel 66
Close up shot
Amro reducing his eyes in grief and sadness
Amro: I hope so Ramzy.. I hope so
Panel 67
Close up shot
Ramzy smiled at encouraging
Page 12
Panel 68
Medium shot
Ramzy to Amro: I am leaving now..Take some rest and I will come to you later
Amro : OK my friend ..
Panel 69
Medium shot
Ramzy rising from the bed and heading to the door
Amro : Ramzy !
Panel 71
medium shot
Ramzy turns his face to Amro
Amro: Thanks alot for everything my dear friend
Panel 72
Close up shot
Ramzy smiled at encouraging good
Ramzy: Do not thank me Amro... You are more than a brother to me
Panel 73
Close up shot
Ramzy opens the door going out
Panel 74
Close up shot
Ramzy's Cheek with a tear running on it
Panel 75
Close up shot
Amro closes his eyes and sleeps
--------------------------------------------------
Page 13
Panel 76
Close up shot
Sfx:
Voices of strong knocking at the door
the picture shows Amro lying on his bed in his dark room suddenly opens his eyes to the sound of a strong knock
Panel 77
Close up shot
the picture shows Amr, getting up in his bed, with a worried look on his face. He crossed his eyebrow in concern looking at the door.
Voice of Ramy from outside: ((who is it? who is there?))
Panel 78
Close up shot
Sfx:
Sound of opening the door of the house
The picture focuses on the face of Amro
Amro to himself: ((Who could possibly knock on the door that way?))
Panel 79
Close up shot
Sfx:
The sound of spraying
The picture is focuses on Amro's eyes, which are now widened in shock
Ramy's voice from outside:
((Who are you? What do you want? We did not ..... Aaaaaaah))
Page 14
Panel 80
Medium shot
Sfx:
outside, Voice of a heavy object hit the ground
the picture shows crippled Amro, looking tense and nervous as he rushes trying to get up from his bed to the wheelchair which was not too near.
Mother crying outside: ((Raaamy .. son .. what did you do to him..?))
she stops suddenly.
Panel 81
Medium shot
Sfx:
The sound of something spraying again and another loud drop on the floor.
the same pictures shows Amro with more furious face trying to reach his wheelchair while shouting
((maaam.. .. Ramyy.....maaam))
Panel 82
Close up shot
Sfx:
Sound of breaking door into Amro's room roughly
the picture shows the door of the room wide open. Next to the door, a man dressed in strange astronauts-like clothes, completely black. they cover their heads with black helmet which look but elegant .. in his hand, he holds a black ball same size of an apple .. and behind this man stood two men dressed in the same clothes. Behind them on the ground the picture shows part of Ramy's body and his mother lying motionless.
Panel 83
Medium shot
the picture shows The same scene but a little farther. And the wheelchair crashes the strange man at the door violently
Panel 84
Close up shot
Sfx:
Voice of loud breathing
The picture shows Amro lying on bed breathless with stress and anger, just pushed the wheelchair towards the stranger.
Amro shouts angrily: ((you bastards ... What did you do to my mum and brother? I swear ...)) he stops suddenly
Page 15
Panel 85
Medium shot
Sfx:
The sound of spraying
The picture shows one of the strangers holding the strange black ball, pressing it and spraying something on Amro's face. Behind them appears the falling man and the third man giving him a hand to stand up again.
Amro screams in anger.
Panel 86
Close up shot
The picture shows Amro's face starting to lose consciousness and his eyes about to close, his hand in front of his head.
Amro (you bastard)
Panel 87
medium shot
The picture shows Amro's scope, blurred and decreased as he collapses. The scope tightens at the sight of his mum and brother who are lying on the ground.
Amr (mum, brother...)
Panel 88
A completely black picture as Amr loses consciousness.
------------------------------------------------------
Page 16
Panel 89
Close up shot
The picture represents Amro's view after recovering, completely black with blurred view at the center. The picture focuses on one of the attackers in his black clothes holding his arms in front of his chest without a helmet.
Amro says weakly (where am I?)
Panel 90
Close up shot
The picture shows Amro lying on a bed that looks like hospital beds. But it is more luxurious. Slowly opening his eyes, he covers them because of the strong lights
Amro( where am I? what happened?)
Panel 91
Close up shot
A close up on Amro's eyes, widened as he remembered.
Panel 92
Close up shot
the picture shows the man in black clothes standing, leaning on a table next to Amro's bed. His arms are folded across his chest. He looks handsome in a stylish pair of sunglasses covering his eyes.
The man in black clothes says
((Calm down, young man ... you will know everything soon))
Panel 93
Close up shot
Amro rises in his bed shouting in anger
((you bastards ... What did you do to my mother and brother?? I swear if you touch a single hair of them, I'll ...))
Panel 94
Close up shot
the picture shows the same scene with a closer view of the man in black
((They are fine ... Relax...))
Page 17
Panel 95
Close up shot
the same scene with a closer view of Amro, who shouts
((Where are they?? I want to ...))
Panel 96
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voices of a door opening
the automated door of the room opens
Panel 97
Medium shot
Amro turns quickly to the door, which opens. While that man in black clothes stands quickly and attentively upright.
Panel 98
Medium shot
the picture shows The door wide open. Three men appear, led by an elderly man with a white beard, wearing a white elegant gown. His features are of a serious, dignified and classy person. Next to him, a man wearing a military uniform (he is the ship's captain) next to them another man wearing the same black clothing worn by the attackers of Amr's house, but without a helmet too.
But they look strange as Their eyes have a strange blue colouring sclera instead of white with black central part
Panel 99
Close up shot
Amro, crossing his eyebrows in amazement and suspicion
Panel 100
Close up shot
the picture Focused on the strange eyes of the three men
Panel 101
Medium shot
the picture shows the three men crossing in front of Amro's bed without looking at him.
The ship's captain (talking his men without looking at Amr)
(Sarko, Myle, get him to the conference table)
---------------------------------------------------------
Page 18
Panel 102
Medium shot
the picture shows the room details, on the wall a large screen stretches across the whole wall... It shows a real picture of the vast space. There are, in front of the screen, some comfortable cozy seats around the elegant table. On the table, there is a small cube. The picture also shows the two men ,who were dressed in black, carrying Amro to seat him on one of those seats and opposite him the ship's captain and the man with a white beard sit.
Panel 103
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro's face full of anger and impatience.
Amro: ((I want to know what you did to my mother and my brother?? And why did you bring me here? Where are we, exactly?))
Panel 104
Close up shot
the picture shows the man with a white beard speaking: ((take it easy young man.. your mother and brother are in your house ... They are fine ... I had to drug them for some time until we can get you here quietly))
Panel 105
Medium shot
the picture shows the Commander of the ship next to the honorable man with the white beard. He is looking at his very modern watch.
Commander of the ship: ((I think they have regained consciousness by now))
Panel 106
Medium shot
Picture of the sitting room, Amro is sitting in front of the ship's captain and the other man with the white beard
Amro in anger : ((you have not answered all of my questions yet. Where are we? Why did you bring me here??))
Panel 107
Close up shot
the picture shows the Ship's captain, strictly speaking: ((you will know everything now))
Page 19
Panel 108
Close up shot
the picture shows the man with a white beard talking seriously: ((At the beginning I would like to introduce us... I am Vice "Sellar" , one of the Vice Governing Council of our Empire))
Panel 109
Close up shot
the picture Focused on the ship's captain
Gross: ((This is the commander Hashimr Zi .. commander of this space ship))
Panel 110
Close up shot
Amro 's eyes widen in a surprise and crosses his eyebrows
Amro: ((the Governing Council? You are affiliated with the "power" organization?))
Panel 111
Close up shot
Commander Hashimr smiles: ((No, We do not follow Power Organization. We came from the great empire of Moro))
Panel 112
Close up shot
Amro looks confused.
Amro: ((I have never heard of it. Also the whole planet is under the control of this damned organization))
Panel 113
Close up shot
Gross: ((We're not from your Planet in the first place .. we came from Moro Empire in Huyak planet))
Panel 114
Close up shot
Amro looks shocked and surprised.
Page 20
Panel 115
Close up shot
Gross: ((you will understand everything now ... Hashimr))
Panel 116
Close up shot
Hashimr: ((yes, sir))
Panel 117
Medium shot
the picture shows Amro in front of Gross and next to Hashimr. Hashmir presses the top of the small cube which is on the table in front of him.
Panel 118
Close up shot
The cube uncovers a circular hole on its surface out of which comes light that has a shape of an inverted pyramid.
Panel 119
Medium shot
the picture shows a straight metal face which appears in the middle of the pyramidal light.(a high tech computer)
Amro widens his eyes in disbelief of this highly developed technology. Hashimr is relaxed in his seat resting one leg on the other while Gross is sitting attentively crossing his fingers under his chin.
Metallic computer voice: Hello, captain Hashmir
Panel 120
Close up shot
Hashimr in his relaxed manners: (("ALPHA" Operation))
Page 21
Panel 121
Medium shot
the metal face disappears, then the screen shows the picture of a planet in its solar system.
Computer: ((... Huyak planet, that planet which is governed by the most powerful well-known empires, The Moro Empire and Sifry Empire))
Panel 122
Close up shot
the pyramidal light shows a picture split into two. The first of a respectable old man with a white beard who looks like Gross but older and greater. His garment is of a white color carefully embroidered. The other picture shows another man similar in respect, age and greatness but His garment is grey..and both have eyes are of a blue color just like Gross and Hashimr.
The computer talks((Both Emperors, Rolen, the emperor of Moro Empire, and Seden, the emperor of Sifry Empire, have always sought spreading peace and friendship between both empires. That is why the entire planet experienced its brightest era.))
Panel 123
Close up shot
the picture showed on the pyramidal light changes. Now the light shows a picture of a young handsome evil man dressed in a luxurious gown. He looks intelligent and cruel.
The computer talks(( until Emperor Serbo came to power, after the death of his dad, Emperor Seden, the ex. emperor of Sifry Empire))
Panel 124
Medium shot
Amro crosses his eyebrows attentive and surprised.
Panel 125
Medium shot
Sfx:
Sound of bombs, rockets, war.
Highly sophisticated military equipments are launching attacks on cities. Amro looks annoyed condemning the scenes. Gross and Hashmir are looking at him.
Computer: ((Emperor Serbo has ordered his armies to invade the empire of Moro seeking more land, resources and power))
Panel 126
Medium shot
the light shows similar military equipment defending themselves against the attacks of Serbo's army.
Computer: ((Emperor Rolen had nothing to do but sending his valiant armies to stop these brutal attacks. And They were able to defend their Empire and break the invaders.))
Page 22
Panel 127
Medium shot
the light now shows wounded and dead people and the ruins of cities.
Computer: ((The war continued for many long months .. and the whole planet became in an appalling state))
Panel 128
Close up shot
the light shows a picture of a handsome young man showing signs of intelligence and cruelty.
Computer: ((Until the sadist senior scientist of Sifry Empire (Dr. Baron) has announced his new theory: the "Theory of the Gates", then his invention which is entirely based upon it))
Panel 135
Close up shot
Amro 's eyes widen in surprise and shock.
Amro to himself: ((Power organization!!?))
Panel 136
Close up shot
the light shows a dark vague picture for the members of the Organization of Power led by one.
Computer: ((Hence, appeared the terrible Organization of Power, named after that device.))
Panel 137
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro with anger and hatred on his face.
Page 24
Panel 139
Close up shot
the computer light shows some of the members of the Power organization standing on the ruins.
Computer: ((and by the help of the Power organization, Sifry empire had the upper hand in its war against the Moro Empire. But on the other hand, most of the planet became destroyed))
Panel 140
Medium shot
Computer displays a complete picture of the planet Huyak, with smoke and destruction showed and severe damage.
Computer: ((mass destruction on the planet Huyak threatens everybody on it .. and here comes the proposal of the sadistic scientist Baron to search for another planet to occupy in order to destroy the entire planet of Huyak and win the war in one shoot))
Panel 141
Close up shot
Computer displays a photo of the beautiful planet of Zark
Computer: ((Here, their choice was planet Zark, which the long years of peace and security have managed to keep its resources. Thus The Power Organization was sent to pave the way for them to move to it.))
Panel 142
Medium shot
Computer displays a photo of a huge spacecraft up to which many civilians are ascending, carrying their belongings while soldiers are standing at the doors.
Computer: ((the last preparations for their departure are begun. And unless we are doing our best to delaying them by our attacks, that would not take them more than few weeks))
Panel 143
Medium shot
the metal face appears again in the pyramidal light. the scene shows the sitting room and Amro looks frustrated while Gross and Hamshir are looking at him in silence.
Panel 144
Close up shot
Amro: ((it is now clear, gentlemen. However, till now I did not understand my role in all of this))
Page 25
Panel 145
Close up shot
Hashimr relaxed: ((We've managed by one of our spies to get the Power device.. .. Not only that, but we also got the combination of (Baron)'s drug.))
Panel 146
Close up shot
Amro's face shows wondering
Amro: ((baron's drug??!))
Panel 147
Medium shot
Amro, Hashimr and Gross are sitting together
Hashimr: ((Baron, from his own experiments on the power organization members, has discovered that if he extract some blood of any one of them and inject it with some other certain additions
in an ordinary person, Consequently, there will be a special type of connection between the injected person and the blood donor.))
Panel 148
Close up shot
Amro is wondering
Amro: ((and that means?))
Panel 150
Close up shot
Amro seems confused
Hashimr: ((on the other, those five people will be useful for him in opening more gates too ))
Page 26
Panel 151
Medium shot
the picture shows Gross, Hashimr and Amro
Gross: ((You will understand this point later))
Panel 152
Close up shot
Amro: ((where would that lead us anyway?? Did not the report mention that the device has now expired?
Panel 153
Close up shot
Gross, sitting firmly: ((We also have great scientists. They have carried out many developments that may get the device to work again))
Panel 154
Close up shot
Amro wondering: ((may?))
Panel 155
Medium shot
Gross and beside Hashimr
Gross: ((We have not had enough time to test the device and be sure yet))
Panel 156
Close up shot
Amro: ((and you want to experiment the device on me so I may be able to fight back the Power Organization and save your planet from destruction .. do not you?))
Panel 157
Close up shot
Gross: ((and save your Planet against occupation and destruction as well))
Page 27
Panel 158
Close up shot
Amro hesitantly says: ((Is ... Is that means that I have that rare malignant tumor in the brain??))
Panel 159
Close up shot
Hashimr: ((you are in the final stages of this illness as well. Did not you know this??))
Panel 160
Close up shot
Amro puts down his head and smiles sadly.
Amro, to himself: ((mother and Ramy did not tell me that..))
Panel 161
Medium shot
Gross, Hashimr and Amro in and their sittings
Amro: ((but I am paralyzed now .. I can not even move))Panel 162
Close up shot
Gross: ((Once the experience succeed, your brain will have the ability to control that tumor completely and you will be able to move))
Page 28
Panel 163
Close up shot
Gross: ((the problem is that we do not have a lot of time ... because the armies of the Sifry Empire are fiercely perusing us to get the device back. That is because Baron has not finished testing it yet.))
Panel 164
Close up shot
Hashimr firmly: ((so we want to know your decision now ...Will you go through the experiment or will you return home?? And the decision is yours, knowing that we cannot guarantee the results of this experiment and all possibilities are ...))
Panel 165
Close up shot
Amro decisively: ((I agree, of course))
Panel 166
Medium shot
Gross and Hashimr looking at each other in wondering
Panel 167
Medium shot
Amro speaks, in front of Gross and Hashimr
Amro: ((if there is a chance, even one in a million, to be able to take revenge on that damned organization and set my planet free, it does not need any kind of thinking.))
Panel 168
Medium shot
Gross is standing and Hashimr is rising from a chair and Amro is looking at them.
Gross: ((So let us do it, we have no time to lose))
Page 29
Panel 169
Medium shot
the picture shows another small hall. One of its walls has a large screen above a lot of buttons. Next to the screen, there is a bed coming out of the wall. There is a helmet with a small screen, attached to many wires that connect to the wall itself above the bed beside the screen. Sarko and Myle help Amro to lie on the bed, Hashimr and Gross are standing next to him, in attention. At the helmet stands a handsome man in his middle age, his face shows goodness and concern. He is wearing white overcoat (as a doctor ) and a pair of elegant glasses.
Panel 170
Medium shot
Hashimr talking to Amro, pointing by his hand to the man in the white coat: ((Amro, let me introduce you to the prime responsible for modifying device Power, Dr. Hayer and He will tell you the details of the experiment you will go through.))
Panel 171
Close up shot
Amro, who is lying on the bed: ((it is my honor))
Panel 172
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer , without speaking, looks at Amro in deep sorrow and sadness.
Panel 173
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer, Amro on the bed and Gross and Hashimr standing.
Dr.Hayer talking to Amro: ((you should know first, son, we have not tested the device yet, and we don't know exactly what may ....))
Panel 174
Close up shot
Hashimr firmly: ((we have already told him so, Dr. Hayer ... we shall proceed to the details of the experiment directly, we have no time to lose))
Panel 175
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer looks at Hashimr with an angry, challenging look.
Page 30
Panel 176
Amro looks astonished.
Panel 177
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer looks away from Hashimr
Dr. Hayer: ((you will wear this helmet on your head .. and then you will be totally anesthetized))
Panel 178
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer points to a large button below the big screen
Dr. Hayer: ((the experiment will start as soon as I click on this button))
Panel 179
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer: ((the experiment itself will not take more than half an hour .. you will Wake up from anesthesia after some time to know the exact results of the experiment))
Panel 180
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer talking to Amro: ((with the device, we will be planting a highly-intelligent program in your brain that will help you a lot, if the test succeeds, in opening the power gates.))
Page 31
Panel 181
Close up shot
Hayer's face: ((many things we can not know certainly till you go through the experiment. Then if the experiment success ,we will put you in a hard training ,if we can)
Panel 182
Close up shot
Amro wondering: ((if you can?))
Panel 183
Close up shot
Gross: ((Sifry Empire is fiercely chasing us as we have told you .. so we may have to interrupt your training period and send you back to your Planet if things get worse .. and then it will all up to you ))
Panel 184
Close up shot
Hashimr leaning on the bed, on which Amro is lying and looking away from him, whispering: ((that is if the experiment success in the first place.))
Panel 185
Medium shot
Silence dominated the room and all of them are still
Panel 186
Close up shot
Amro and his features reflect resolve and determination: ((Let's start .. we have no time to waste.))
Page 32
Panel 187
Medium shot
Hashimr, Hayer and Gross are standing attentively looking at Amro
Gross: ((You are right .. Go ahead, Dr. Hayer))
Panel 188
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer holds a helmet and fixes it on Amro's head.
Panel 189
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer at the big screen, which is covering the wall, pressing some buttons under it. on the screen appears an image of Amro's brain and the large tumor which has a darker color.
Panel 190
Close up shot
the picture Focuses on the tumor
Panel 191
Close up shot
the picture shows Dr. Hayer who held his eyebrows in concentration.
Panel 192
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer picks up a small circular patch from his pocket. It looks like wound patches and raises it in front of his face
Hayer: ((as soon as I fix this patch on your forehead. You will immediately be in a complete anesthesia. And then we will begin our experiment. Are you ready?))
Page 33
Panel 193
Close up shot
Amro in a deciding tone, Lying on the bed and a helmet on his head: ((yes))
Panel 194
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer's hesitant sad face.
Panel 195
Medium shot
Gross, Hashimr and Hayer surrounding Amro's bed.
Gross: ((Come on Doctor .. we do not have time))
Panel 196
Close up shot
Amro's Face and Hayer's hand placing the patch on his forehead gently.
Panel 197
Close up shot
Amro closes his eyes weakly while Hayer withdraws his hand.
Panel 198
Medium shot
Hayer looks at Gross and Hashmir who strictly looks back at him.
Panel 199
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer lowers his head and eyes in sadness
Page 34
Panel 200
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer's hand presses the red button at the bottom of the big screen
Panel 201
Close up shot
the Screen at the top of the Amro's helmet is now flashing brightly.
Panel 201
Medium shot
Amro's body is shaking strongly while he is anesthetized , and the helmet screen's light is flashing more brightly. Innumerable data is flowing on the screen that covers the wall. Gross and Hashmir are nervously watching Amro. Hayer continues pressing buttons.
Panel 202
Medium shot
red alarm light is flashing inside the room. Gross, Hashimr and Hayer , in panic, are all looking up at the ceiling where the alarm amplifiers go. Amro is still shaking on the bed undergoing the experiment.
Panel 203
Close up shot
the picture focuses on Hashimr looking at the Amplifiers and screaming seriously: ((what happens?!))
Panel 204
Close up shot
The big screen on the wall shows many military spacecraft surrounding the ship
Voice over loudspeaker: ((sir .. spacecraft with Empire Sifry flag are surrounding us everywhere.))
Page 35
Panel 205
Close up shot
Three small panels show the faces of: Gross (a front picture ) and Hashimr (while looking up at the amplifiers) and Hayer (a side profile) their eyes are widely open in horror.
Panel 206
Close up shot
Gross's appalled face, he says: (how? How did they find us?)
Panel 206
Medium shot
as panel 202 but now Gross is leaning to the wall falling apart. Hayer is looking at Amro with the shock on his face. Hashimr is talking to the Amplifiers: ((carry out the escape plan immediately))
Panel 207
Medium shot
Sfx:
Sound of an explosion
The same panel , but here the ship is shaking. Gross, Hashimr and Hayer are lurching.
Voice over amplifier: ((we cannot, sir .. we are completely surrounded))
Panel 208
Medium shot
The same panel but here Hashimr is running towards the door
Hashimr: ((I'm coming immediately to the control room))
Panel 209
Close up shot
Gross, kneeling on his knees and his hands, in defeat and sadness
Gross: ((we have lost everything .. We have lost the last hope))
Panel 210
Close up shot
Hayer's appalled shocked face
Page 36
Panel 211
Close up shot
Hayer's face is now decisive.
Panel 212
Medium shot
Hayer runs towards the buttons and press them fast. On the screen, an image of innumerable data, while Gross is looking at him in wonder.
Panel 213
Close up shot
Gross: ((What are you doing? It's over))
Panel 214
Medium shot
Hayer turns and runs quickly towards Amro, whose body began to relax and the light on the helmet's screen began to fade and the big screen on the wall is still full of data
Hayer yells: ((I'll try to save him))
Panel 215
Close up shot
Hayer's face as he screaming: ((he is the last hope we have))
Panel 216
Close up shot
Amro's face, and a light shines in the entire picture
-------------------
Page 37
Panel 217
Close up shot
Amro's face that suddenly opens his eyes. He was lying on his bed at home
Panel 218
Medium shot
Amro sits up on the bed and looks through the window to the night and the moon. On his face appear questioning and wondering looks. beside the bed was his wheelchair
Panel 219
Close up shot
Amro held his eyebrows in wonder
Amro, to himself: ((A dream?!))
Panel 220
Close up shot
Amro looks at his feet
Panel 221
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro's feet. (he is trying to move it , but it doesn't)
Panel 222
Close up shot
he sets his head back on the pillow and closes his eyes, holding his head with his hand in confusion
Amro: ((What a strange dream))
Page 38
Panel 223
Close up shot
Sfx:
the sounds of harsh knocks (outside the room on the home main door)
Amro turns towards his room closed door, he held his eyebrows in astonishment and concern
Panel 224
Medium shot
Picture showing the closed door of the room and Amro gets up on the bed
Ramy's confused and frightened voice from behind the door: ((who is it? Who is at the door?))
Husky voice answers: ((police ... Open the door))
Panel 225
Close up shot
Amro's eyes widen in panic and nervousness
Panel 226
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of the knocks grows louder
The same Picture as panel 224
Ramy whispers: ((mum, hide in Amro's room ... Hurry Up))
Panel 227
Close up shot
Mother opens the door of Amro's room and entering without looking at Amro's bed.
Panel 228
Close up shot
the mother stands at the closed door looking at Amro and her face reflects astonishment
Amro: ((mom?))
Panel 229
Close up shot
the mother's tears are shed in joy and deep affection
Mother: ((Amro ... you are back my son!!))
Page 39
Panel 230
Close up shot
Ramy from outside the room: ((Well ...I'll get the door now))
Amro talks to himself in a surprise: ((back?!))
Amro to his mother: ((What is going on mom?))
Panel 231
Medium shot
Mother is embracing Amro , crying, and Amro looks astonished
Panel 232
Close up shot
Mother with her tears running down her cheeks: ((three full days, Amro ... Where have you been, son?? I was about to die of worries))
Panel 233
Close up shot
Amro whispers to himself in a surprise: ((three days?!))
Panel 234
Medium shot
a picture of the door, which is opened by force, Ramy pushed through it to fall under Amro's bed. A string of blood spilled on his lips. At the door, two evil and huge policemen appear. They are armed with two modern big rifles.
One of the policemen: ((Why were you late getting the door, you idiot?))
Panel 235
Close up shot
Amro shows anger on his face and in his eyes
Page 40
Panel 236
Close up shot
Ramy, who was on the ground, looks up to Amro, he says weakly: ((Amro .. you are back my brother at last!))
Panel 236
Close up shot
Two police officers entering the room and one of them says: ((will teach you a hard lesson for that))
Panel 237
Close up shot
Amro screams in anger: ((What do we want? We didn't do anything wrong ))
Panel 238
Close up shot
Mother holds Ramy who is placed on the ground and cries: ((please do not harm my sons.))
Panel 239
Close up shot
the two policemen smile at each other ironically.
One of the policemen: you didn't do anything wrong???
Panel 240
Close up shot
One of the officers: Do you ever dare do wrong, you bugs?? .. This is a usual inspection.
Page 41
Panel 241
Medium shot
one of the policemen harshly pushing the mother next to Amro on the bed. Ramy tries to get up.
Ramy: please do not hurt my mother and brother.
Panel 242
Close up shot
Police, by his strong hand, raises Ramy high from his shirt collar and Ramy appears frail and weak
Police: ((shut up you moron .. No one tells us what to do))
Panel 243
Medium shot
Policeman throws Ramy harshly to hit the wall
Panel 243
Close up shot
Ramy falls unconscious
Panel 244
Close up shot
Amro screams strongly in anger: ((you bastards))
Panel 245
Close up shot
The policeman turned to Amro and says sarcastically: ((What's this? Who is that brave who wants to die now?))
Page 42
Panel 246
Medium shot
Mother falls down on her knees at the policeman's feet begging him: ((Please forgive him ... Please do not harm him ... He is paralyzed))
Panel 247
Close up shotPolice hold mother by the hair in a cruel way. On the mother's face appears Pain.
Police: ((paralyzed?! And speak in such insolence! You did not bring him up right!))
Panel 248
Close up shot
Police slapped mother firmly. He throws her to the ground under the other policeman's feet.
Panel 249
Close up shot
The policeman who hit the mother turned to Amro said: ((Now to see this little punk….))
Panel 250
Close up shot
Police stops his words suddenly and his eyes widens in amazement.
Page 43
Panel 251
Close up shot
The other officer holds the mother by her neck and gets her up. Mother in suffocating pain trying to remove the officer's hand hopelessly
The officer: ((so you must be punished for your son's misbehavior))
Panel 252
Close up shot
Police raises the rifle determining to hit the mother in the head with the end of the rifle.
Panel 253
Close up shot
Mother in suffocating pain trying to remove the officer's hand hopelessly
Panel 254
Close up shot
a strong hand with one electric current around holds the policeman's hand in the air before it reaches the mother.
Panel 255
Close up shot
Police looks at him with a surprise.
Page 44
Panel 256
Medium shot
Amro stands on his feet holding strongly the policeman's hand and holding, with the other hand, the neck of the other police officer who tries to free his neck in vain. The picture shows limited electric currents around Amro's body. His eyes are lit brightly. His blue hair is now a bit longer to reach his shoulders .and his body appearance is a bit stronger . Amro appears angry and very aggressive... And on his forehead appeared the mark of the gates brightly red.
<img height="64" width="65">
Panel 257
Close up shot
Sfx:
Sound of bones breaking
Amro's hand pressing the policeman arm hardly. He breaks it and the rifle drops down from his hand.
Panel 258
Close up shot
Policeman screams in pain
Panel 259
Close up shot
Amro's face, screaming in anger and gates marks on his forehead, shines more and more brightly.
Panel 260
Medium shot
the picture shows Amro from the back standing alone in a dark room, in front of a far huge closed gate.
Hayer's voice echoes inside the room: ((Welcome Amro))
that is the first chapter except some separate pages and panels i did not bring them here so the story can not be taken
thanx alot
-----------------------
the story name is : (( AMRO )) and it is the main character's name
---------------------
((AMRO))
Panel 1
long shot
A scene showing a huge solar planets in their spheres
Comment (Planet Zark, far from our planet by millions of light years, but has a great similarity to our planet Earth.)
It is located in a distant Galaxy, one of the galaxies in this vast universe.
Panel 2
medium shot
the picture focuses on the planet from a distance
Comment (Many great civilizations have lived on this planet.)
Panel 3
medium shot
The scene focuses on part of a very civilized city with luxurious buildings, a number of flying cars, clean roads and stylish people.
Comment (Throughout these civilizations, peace and security have prevailed in the planet under the rule of their fair emperors.)
Panel 4
medium shot
An extension to the previous scene with the same details.
Comment (Thus, the planet prospers and its people make an amazing progress.)
Panel 5
medium shot
Ten men led by the most powerful and obscure one, dressed in dark blue cloaks with high collars that hide their faces except for their eyes and part of noses and all picture in a bit darkness that covering their appearances details
Comment (Then," Power" Organization appeared which holds abilities that the history has never seen like before.)
Panel 6
close up shot
on the most evil eyes.
Comment (led by its leader, Alfred, the Organization has been able to occupy the entire planet)
Page 2
Panel 7
medium shot
Part of the city shows one or more buildings destroyed, bodies of dead people all around the place and a destroyed road.
Comment (And destroyed most of the planet, killed all of its leaders and millions of its people.)
Panel 8
Medium shot
The nine members of the organization kneel down in front of proud Alfred and all of them in dark without clear details of their appearances.
Comment (Here, the leader of the organization, Alfred, divides the planet into ten empires so each member of the organization had his own empire)
Panel 9
Medium shot
A scene in which Alfred in darkness stands by himself on the ruins with his cloak flutters in the air.
Comment (And Alfred becomes the general governor of the planet besides being the governor of the largest empire of them all.)
Panel 10
Medium shot
The scene shows some of the organization members and their soldiers torturing people and others kneel in front of them. (That highlights the injustice and violence of the organization)
Comment (But All of "Power" members were unjust and cruel in their ruling.)
Panel 11
Medium shot
The scene shows the bad conditions of the planet and the people who appear to be humiliated with poverty and injustice.
Comment (Consequently, the planet and its people’s conditions change to the worse under the rule of the Power Organization.)
Panel 12
Close up shot
A completely black picture with a small spotlight in the middle.
Comment (But darkness can never last forever.)
Page 3
Panel 13
Medium shot
The doctor is sitting behind his desk, gesturing to a lady in front of him to sit down. Her back is facing us. Beside the lady is a young man standing facing the doctor too
The doctor (please sit down madam)
Panel 14
Medium shot
Same picture, but the lady is sitting down and the the young man standing beside her
Panel 15
Close up shot
A small picture shows the anxiety on the lady face. She is in her forties.
The lady (please doctor, tell me exactly the condition of my son)
Panel 16
Close up shot
A close up on the doctor’s face speaking with sorrowful features, he lowered his head.
The doctor (I am so sorry madam, but our doubts are now confirmed.)
Panel 17
Close up shot
A close up on the lady’s face who is shocked.
Panel 18
Close up shot
A close up on the sad face of the doctor.
Doctor:
((Your son is suffering from an extremely rare brain malignant tumor))
Page 4
Panel 19
Close up shot
The picture shows the shocked lady and also her shocked son standing next to her. Her hand is on her mouth with huge sadness.
Panel 20
Close up shot
The picture shows the doctor with his fingers crossed on his desk.
The doctor (and am sorry to tell you that your son really in need of a special treatment which is not available in our hospital, you know the bad conditions that we suffer from and….)
The doctor stops suddenly
Panel 21
Close up shot
sfx
voice of crying
The picture shows the lady’s face, her hand on her mouth; her tears are running down her cheeks.
Panel 22
Close up shot
The picture shows a hand patting the lady’s shoulders kindly
Panel 23
Medium shot
The picture shows the son, deep sadness on his face, gently putting the palm of his hand on his crying mum’s shoulder.
The son (lower your voice mam, I am afraid my brother outside may hear you.)
Panel 24
Medium shot
A picture shows the doctor at his desk and the mother sitting in front of him, her son, putting his hand on her shoulder.
Doctor: (well done Ramy. It is so important now to make your brother feel better.)))
Page 5
Panel 25
Medium shot
The same picture, but here the mother rises from her chair and wiping her tears. Her son, Ramy, is looking at her with a worried face.
Panel 26
Close up shot
The picture shows the mother's back, she is standing at the door.
Mother: (Thank you, doctor)
Panel 27
Medium shot
The picture shows the mother as she opens the door of the room and going out and her son Ramy rushes to catch on her quicklyRamy: (Wait, mum)
Panel 28
Close up shot
The picture shows Ramy getting out of the door to catch his mother who has left. Ramy is at the door.
Ramy: (Thank you very much, doctor)
Panel 30
Medium shot
Sfx:
Lock door voice
The picture shows the doctor sitting at the desk fingers crossed, on his face signs of sadness.
The doctor whispers to himself: ((poor young man))
Panel 31
Close up shot
The picture shows the sad face of the doctor, Clasping his fingers under his chin
The doctor whispers to himself: (((I just hope his mother and brother can make him feel a bit better.. in his last days))
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Page 6
Panel 32
Close up shot
The scene shows the back of the mother's and her son Ramy's heads from behind, and the picture focuses from between their shoulders on a young man in front of them sitting in a wheelchair - slim and handsome with blue hair, on his face signs of sickness and weakness. He is looking to them with a worried face.
Panel 33
Close up shot
The picture shows the side face of the mother, she turns her sad face and eyes down away from her son's
Panel 34
Close up shot
The picture shows the young man who sits on the wheelchair, putting down his head, on his face a bitter smile full of sadness.
Panel 35
Close up shot
The picture shows the mother looks at the young man sitting on the chair and smile encouragingly but cannot hide her grief.
Panel 36
Medium shot
mother standing on a corner of the picture, Ramy fakes signs of joy and puts his both hands on the shoulders of the young man sitting on the wheelchair, who is still putting down his head in a bitter grief.
Ramy: ((O Amro , cheer up!! The doctor has told us that you will recover so soon and will be able to walk on your feet again in a few days... and that the illness will not ...)) he stops suddenly.
Page 7
Panel 37
Close up shot
The picture shows Amro who has touched Ramy's hand gently that is on his shoulder, he looks at Ramy ,with a smile full of love and sympathy
Amro ((I know, my brother ... I know…take it easy)
Panel 38
Medium shot
The picture shows a side view of Ramy , who stands straight - has put down his eyes to the ground, sadness on his face - and Amro, who was still smiling as he looks to his mother who is standing in the same place - he tries to joke
Amro : ((Come on, Mom let's go home ..Hospitals always make me hungry!
Panel 39
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of pushing the chair
Ramy shows joy on his face, holding the handles of the wheelchair of his brother and gently pushes forward... And mother behind walks slowly with a sad face. The ground is full of patients all over the place resting their backs on walls, they look poor and miserable (a sign of poverty and bad conditions of the planet)
Ramy: (wait till we go home to see what mum has prepared ...a stew that you love ... enjoy brother, that tasty love!
Panel 40
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of laughing
The same picture, Ramy and Amro laughing in a cheerful way and mother is still walking behind , her face down in sadness.
Panel 41
Close up shot
The picture shows the side face of the mother with her hair cover her eyes and tears running on her cheeks.-
Panel 42
Medium shot
Sfx:
Creak of a door opening
the picture shows the inside of a small and humble house. focus on the opened door and the mother who opens it and Amro appears behind her in his wheelchair, and Ramy pushing the wheelchair gently.
Page 8
Panel 43 (action to action)
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of the door closure
Scene inside the house shows the mother as she shuts the door. while Amro in his wheelchair turns his head to his brother with a smile saying:
Amro : ((Ramy .. take me to my room if you please .. I need to rest for a while))
Panel 44
Close up shot
Mother turns to Amr
Mother: ((Wouldn't you have something to eat ,Amro ?))
Panel 45
Medium shot
Amro turns to his mother
Amro : ((forgive me mum .. will eat when I get up .. I feel a bit tired))
Panel 46
Medium shot
the picture shows a small, humble room empty except for a bed, small wardrobe and a small single window next to the bed with a moon light enters and falls on bed .Ramy helps Amro to get up from the wheelchair and lay on the bed.
Panel 47
Close up shot
the picture focuses on the face and chest of Amr, lying on the bed
Amro : ((Thanks a lot , Ramy ))
Panel 48
Close up shot
Ramy smiles at his brother, a caring smile.
Page 9
Panel 49
Medium shot
Ramy going out of the room and Amro asleep on his bed.
Panel 50
Medium shot
the picture shows the dark room from above, completely dark but for the light of the moon, which falls on Amro's bed, he opens his eyes and looks up
Panel 51
Close up shot
the picture focuses the face and chest of Amr as he looks up, on his face features of deep sadness.
Amro talking to himself : ((forgive me mum))
Panel 52 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
The face of Amro
Amro to himself : ((I know I am going to die soon .. but that is not what make me sad ))
Panel 53 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
the picture shows part of Amro's face with flash back pictures on the background - as he retrieves memories - his mother's face appears, smiling a warm smile of love
Amro to himself
: ((What make me so sad that I could not support you in these hard days))
Page 10
Panel 54
Close up shot
Amro's hand takes out a small old photo from under his pillow.
Panel 55 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
The picture shows the photo that Amr looks at, which shows a strong well built, elegant man wearing a military uniform and showing strength and rigidity.
Amro to himself
: ((and especially after murdering my father , this military heroic commander, in the war of our global empire against Power's assaults))
Panel 56 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro's face which is now full of anger and hatred, at the same time retrieving more memories. Pictures of some people of vague shapes in the background. (Members of the "power" Organization)
Amro to himself : ((the mean "power" organization...how do I hate it ... It has destroyed my life and my entire planet))
Panel 57 (moment to moment)
Close up shot
Amro , who is holding the picture to his chest, closes his eyes
Amro to himself
: ((but it can never win till the end .. never))
Panel 58 (moment to moment)
a close up on Amro's face, who is embracing the image and the tears are running from his eyes
Amro to himself
: ((that is what my father taught me))
Panel 59
Medium shot
Sfx:
calm knocks on the door of the room
Room and Amro turn to the door, saying: yes?Panel 60 Close up shot
Ramy opens the door
Ramy : Amro .. your friend " Ramzy " came to visit you
Page 11
Panel 61
Medium shot
Amro stands on the bed, hide the image under his pillow and wipe his tears. and on the door of the room Ramy stands and Ramzy beside him. Ramzy is a handsome brown young with a kind face
Amro happily: Let him get in please, Ramy
Panel 62
Close up shot
Ramzy enters the room with cheerful face
Ramzy: How are you today my dear friend ?? I see you are much better now..
Panel 63
Close up shot
Amro lowers his sad eyes
Amro: am fine Ramzy... How are you and all of our friends?
Panel 64
Medium shot
Room with closed door and Ramzy sitting on the bed next to Amro
Ramzy: All fine. And sending you their best wishes and greetings
Panel 65
Close up shot
Ramzy puts his hand on the shoulder of Amro and spoke to him encouraging
Ramzy: Amro... We all know you will recover soon... because you are always strong
Panel 66
Close up shot
Amro reducing his eyes in grief and sadness
Amro: I hope so Ramzy.. I hope so
Panel 67
Close up shot
Ramzy smiled at encouraging
Page 12
Panel 68
Medium shot
Ramzy to Amro: I am leaving now..Take some rest and I will come to you later
Amro : OK my friend ..
Panel 69
Medium shot
Ramzy rising from the bed and heading to the door
Amro : Ramzy !
Panel 71
medium shot
Ramzy turns his face to Amro
Amro: Thanks alot for everything my dear friend
Panel 72
Close up shot
Ramzy smiled at encouraging good
Ramzy: Do not thank me Amro... You are more than a brother to me
Panel 73
Close up shot
Ramzy opens the door going out
Panel 74
Close up shot
Ramzy's Cheek with a tear running on it
Panel 75
Close up shot
Amro closes his eyes and sleeps
--------------------------------------------------
Page 13
Panel 76
Close up shot
Sfx:
Voices of strong knocking at the door
the picture shows Amro lying on his bed in his dark room suddenly opens his eyes to the sound of a strong knock
Panel 77
Close up shot
the picture shows Amr, getting up in his bed, with a worried look on his face. He crossed his eyebrow in concern looking at the door.
Voice of Ramy from outside: ((who is it? who is there?))
Panel 78
Close up shot
Sfx:
Sound of opening the door of the house
The picture focuses on the face of Amro
Amro to himself: ((Who could possibly knock on the door that way?))
Panel 79
Close up shot
Sfx:
The sound of spraying
The picture is focuses on Amro's eyes, which are now widened in shock
Ramy's voice from outside:
((Who are you? What do you want? We did not ..... Aaaaaaah))
Page 14
Panel 80
Medium shot
Sfx:
outside, Voice of a heavy object hit the ground
the picture shows crippled Amro, looking tense and nervous as he rushes trying to get up from his bed to the wheelchair which was not too near.
Mother crying outside: ((Raaamy .. son .. what did you do to him..?))
she stops suddenly.
Panel 81
Medium shot
Sfx:
The sound of something spraying again and another loud drop on the floor.
the same pictures shows Amro with more furious face trying to reach his wheelchair while shouting
((maaam.. .. Ramyy.....maaam))
Panel 82
Close up shot
Sfx:
Sound of breaking door into Amro's room roughly
the picture shows the door of the room wide open. Next to the door, a man dressed in strange astronauts-like clothes, completely black. they cover their heads with black helmet which look but elegant .. in his hand, he holds a black ball same size of an apple .. and behind this man stood two men dressed in the same clothes. Behind them on the ground the picture shows part of Ramy's body and his mother lying motionless.
Panel 83
Medium shot
the picture shows The same scene but a little farther. And the wheelchair crashes the strange man at the door violently
Panel 84
Close up shot
Sfx:
Voice of loud breathing
The picture shows Amro lying on bed breathless with stress and anger, just pushed the wheelchair towards the stranger.
Amro shouts angrily: ((you bastards ... What did you do to my mum and brother? I swear ...)) he stops suddenly
Page 15
Panel 85
Medium shot
Sfx:
The sound of spraying
The picture shows one of the strangers holding the strange black ball, pressing it and spraying something on Amro's face. Behind them appears the falling man and the third man giving him a hand to stand up again.
Amro screams in anger.
Panel 86
Close up shot
The picture shows Amro's face starting to lose consciousness and his eyes about to close, his hand in front of his head.
Amro (you bastard)
Panel 87
medium shot
The picture shows Amro's scope, blurred and decreased as he collapses. The scope tightens at the sight of his mum and brother who are lying on the ground.
Amr (mum, brother...)
Panel 88
A completely black picture as Amr loses consciousness.
------------------------------------------------------
Page 16
Panel 89
Close up shot
The picture represents Amro's view after recovering, completely black with blurred view at the center. The picture focuses on one of the attackers in his black clothes holding his arms in front of his chest without a helmet.
Amro says weakly (where am I?)
Panel 90
Close up shot
The picture shows Amro lying on a bed that looks like hospital beds. But it is more luxurious. Slowly opening his eyes, he covers them because of the strong lights
Amro( where am I? what happened?)
Panel 91
Close up shot
A close up on Amro's eyes, widened as he remembered.
Panel 92
Close up shot
the picture shows the man in black clothes standing, leaning on a table next to Amro's bed. His arms are folded across his chest. He looks handsome in a stylish pair of sunglasses covering his eyes.
The man in black clothes says
((Calm down, young man ... you will know everything soon))
Panel 93
Close up shot
Amro rises in his bed shouting in anger
((you bastards ... What did you do to my mother and brother?? I swear if you touch a single hair of them, I'll ...))
Panel 94
Close up shot
the picture shows the same scene with a closer view of the man in black
((They are fine ... Relax...))
Page 17
Panel 95
Close up shot
the same scene with a closer view of Amro, who shouts
((Where are they?? I want to ...))
Panel 96
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voices of a door opening
the automated door of the room opens
Panel 97
Medium shot
Amro turns quickly to the door, which opens. While that man in black clothes stands quickly and attentively upright.
Panel 98
Medium shot
the picture shows The door wide open. Three men appear, led by an elderly man with a white beard, wearing a white elegant gown. His features are of a serious, dignified and classy person. Next to him, a man wearing a military uniform (he is the ship's captain) next to them another man wearing the same black clothing worn by the attackers of Amr's house, but without a helmet too.
But they look strange as Their eyes have a strange blue colouring sclera instead of white with black central part
Panel 99
Close up shot
Amro, crossing his eyebrows in amazement and suspicion
Panel 100
Close up shot
the picture Focused on the strange eyes of the three men
Panel 101
Medium shot
the picture shows the three men crossing in front of Amro's bed without looking at him.
The ship's captain (talking his men without looking at Amr)
(Sarko, Myle, get him to the conference table)
---------------------------------------------------------
Page 18
Panel 102
Medium shot
the picture shows the room details, on the wall a large screen stretches across the whole wall... It shows a real picture of the vast space. There are, in front of the screen, some comfortable cozy seats around the elegant table. On the table, there is a small cube. The picture also shows the two men ,who were dressed in black, carrying Amro to seat him on one of those seats and opposite him the ship's captain and the man with a white beard sit.
Panel 103
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro's face full of anger and impatience.
Amro: ((I want to know what you did to my mother and my brother?? And why did you bring me here? Where are we, exactly?))
Panel 104
Close up shot
the picture shows the man with a white beard speaking: ((take it easy young man.. your mother and brother are in your house ... They are fine ... I had to drug them for some time until we can get you here quietly))
Panel 105
Medium shot
the picture shows the Commander of the ship next to the honorable man with the white beard. He is looking at his very modern watch.
Commander of the ship: ((I think they have regained consciousness by now))
Panel 106
Medium shot
Picture of the sitting room, Amro is sitting in front of the ship's captain and the other man with the white beard
Amro in anger : ((you have not answered all of my questions yet. Where are we? Why did you bring me here??))
Panel 107
Close up shot
the picture shows the Ship's captain, strictly speaking: ((you will know everything now))
Page 19
Panel 108
Close up shot
the picture shows the man with a white beard talking seriously: ((At the beginning I would like to introduce us... I am Vice "Sellar" , one of the Vice Governing Council of our Empire))
Panel 109
Close up shot
the picture Focused on the ship's captain
Gross: ((This is the commander Hashimr Zi .. commander of this space ship))
Panel 110
Close up shot
Amro 's eyes widen in a surprise and crosses his eyebrows
Amro: ((the Governing Council? You are affiliated with the "power" organization?))
Panel 111
Close up shot
Commander Hashimr smiles: ((No, We do not follow Power Organization. We came from the great empire of Moro))
Panel 112
Close up shot
Amro looks confused.
Amro: ((I have never heard of it. Also the whole planet is under the control of this damned organization))
Panel 113
Close up shot
Gross: ((We're not from your Planet in the first place .. we came from Moro Empire in Huyak planet))
Panel 114
Close up shot
Amro looks shocked and surprised.
Page 20
Panel 115
Close up shot
Gross: ((you will understand everything now ... Hashimr))
Panel 116
Close up shot
Hashimr: ((yes, sir))
Panel 117
Medium shot
the picture shows Amro in front of Gross and next to Hashimr. Hashmir presses the top of the small cube which is on the table in front of him.
Panel 118
Close up shot
The cube uncovers a circular hole on its surface out of which comes light that has a shape of an inverted pyramid.
Panel 119
Medium shot
the picture shows a straight metal face which appears in the middle of the pyramidal light.(a high tech computer)
Amro widens his eyes in disbelief of this highly developed technology. Hashimr is relaxed in his seat resting one leg on the other while Gross is sitting attentively crossing his fingers under his chin.
Metallic computer voice: Hello, captain Hashmir
Panel 120
Close up shot
Hashimr in his relaxed manners: (("ALPHA" Operation))
Page 21
Panel 121
Medium shot
the metal face disappears, then the screen shows the picture of a planet in its solar system.
Computer: ((... Huyak planet, that planet which is governed by the most powerful well-known empires, The Moro Empire and Sifry Empire))
Panel 122
Close up shot
the pyramidal light shows a picture split into two. The first of a respectable old man with a white beard who looks like Gross but older and greater. His garment is of a white color carefully embroidered. The other picture shows another man similar in respect, age and greatness but His garment is grey..and both have eyes are of a blue color just like Gross and Hashimr.
The computer talks((Both Emperors, Rolen, the emperor of Moro Empire, and Seden, the emperor of Sifry Empire, have always sought spreading peace and friendship between both empires. That is why the entire planet experienced its brightest era.))
Panel 123
Close up shot
the picture showed on the pyramidal light changes. Now the light shows a picture of a young handsome evil man dressed in a luxurious gown. He looks intelligent and cruel.
The computer talks(( until Emperor Serbo came to power, after the death of his dad, Emperor Seden, the ex. emperor of Sifry Empire))
Panel 124
Medium shot
Amro crosses his eyebrows attentive and surprised.
Panel 125
Medium shot
Sfx:
Sound of bombs, rockets, war.
Highly sophisticated military equipments are launching attacks on cities. Amro looks annoyed condemning the scenes. Gross and Hashmir are looking at him.
Computer: ((Emperor Serbo has ordered his armies to invade the empire of Moro seeking more land, resources and power))
Panel 126
Medium shot
the light shows similar military equipment defending themselves against the attacks of Serbo's army.
Computer: ((Emperor Rolen had nothing to do but sending his valiant armies to stop these brutal attacks. And They were able to defend their Empire and break the invaders.))
Page 22
Panel 127
Medium shot
the light now shows wounded and dead people and the ruins of cities.
Computer: ((The war continued for many long months .. and the whole planet became in an appalling state))
Panel 128
Close up shot
the light shows a picture of a handsome young man showing signs of intelligence and cruelty.
Computer: ((Until the sadist senior scientist of Sifry Empire (Dr. Baron) has announced his new theory: the "Theory of the Gates", then his invention which is entirely based upon it))
Panel 135
Close up shot
Amro 's eyes widen in surprise and shock.
Amro to himself: ((Power organization!!?))
Panel 136
Close up shot
the light shows a dark vague picture for the members of the Organization of Power led by one.
Computer: ((Hence, appeared the terrible Organization of Power, named after that device.))
Panel 137
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro with anger and hatred on his face.
Page 24
Panel 139
Close up shot
the computer light shows some of the members of the Power organization standing on the ruins.
Computer: ((and by the help of the Power organization, Sifry empire had the upper hand in its war against the Moro Empire. But on the other hand, most of the planet became destroyed))
Panel 140
Medium shot
Computer displays a complete picture of the planet Huyak, with smoke and destruction showed and severe damage.
Computer: ((mass destruction on the planet Huyak threatens everybody on it .. and here comes the proposal of the sadistic scientist Baron to search for another planet to occupy in order to destroy the entire planet of Huyak and win the war in one shoot))
Panel 141
Close up shot
Computer displays a photo of the beautiful planet of Zark
Computer: ((Here, their choice was planet Zark, which the long years of peace and security have managed to keep its resources. Thus The Power Organization was sent to pave the way for them to move to it.))
Panel 142
Medium shot
Computer displays a photo of a huge spacecraft up to which many civilians are ascending, carrying their belongings while soldiers are standing at the doors.
Computer: ((the last preparations for their departure are begun. And unless we are doing our best to delaying them by our attacks, that would not take them more than few weeks))
Panel 143
Medium shot
the metal face appears again in the pyramidal light. the scene shows the sitting room and Amro looks frustrated while Gross and Hamshir are looking at him in silence.
Panel 144
Close up shot
Amro: ((it is now clear, gentlemen. However, till now I did not understand my role in all of this))
Page 25
Panel 145
Close up shot
Hashimr relaxed: ((We've managed by one of our spies to get the Power device.. .. Not only that, but we also got the combination of (Baron)'s drug.))
Panel 146
Close up shot
Amro's face shows wondering
Amro: ((baron's drug??!))
Panel 147
Medium shot
Amro, Hashimr and Gross are sitting together
Hashimr: ((Baron, from his own experiments on the power organization members, has discovered that if he extract some blood of any one of them and inject it with some other certain additions
in an ordinary person, Consequently, there will be a special type of connection between the injected person and the blood donor.))
Panel 148
Close up shot
Amro is wondering
Amro: ((and that means?))
Panel 150
Close up shot
Amro seems confused
Hashimr: ((on the other, those five people will be useful for him in opening more gates too ))
Page 26
Panel 151
Medium shot
the picture shows Gross, Hashimr and Amro
Gross: ((You will understand this point later))
Panel 152
Close up shot
Amro: ((where would that lead us anyway?? Did not the report mention that the device has now expired?
Panel 153
Close up shot
Gross, sitting firmly: ((We also have great scientists. They have carried out many developments that may get the device to work again))
Panel 154
Close up shot
Amro wondering: ((may?))
Panel 155
Medium shot
Gross and beside Hashimr
Gross: ((We have not had enough time to test the device and be sure yet))
Panel 156
Close up shot
Amro: ((and you want to experiment the device on me so I may be able to fight back the Power Organization and save your planet from destruction .. do not you?))
Panel 157
Close up shot
Gross: ((and save your Planet against occupation and destruction as well))
Page 27
Panel 158
Close up shot
Amro hesitantly says: ((Is ... Is that means that I have that rare malignant tumor in the brain??))
Panel 159
Close up shot
Hashimr: ((you are in the final stages of this illness as well. Did not you know this??))
Panel 160
Close up shot
Amro puts down his head and smiles sadly.
Amro, to himself: ((mother and Ramy did not tell me that..))
Panel 161
Medium shot
Gross, Hashimr and Amro in and their sittings
Amro: ((but I am paralyzed now .. I can not even move))Panel 162
Close up shot
Gross: ((Once the experience succeed, your brain will have the ability to control that tumor completely and you will be able to move))
Page 28
Panel 163
Close up shot
Gross: ((the problem is that we do not have a lot of time ... because the armies of the Sifry Empire are fiercely perusing us to get the device back. That is because Baron has not finished testing it yet.))
Panel 164
Close up shot
Hashimr firmly: ((so we want to know your decision now ...Will you go through the experiment or will you return home?? And the decision is yours, knowing that we cannot guarantee the results of this experiment and all possibilities are ...))
Panel 165
Close up shot
Amro decisively: ((I agree, of course))
Panel 166
Medium shot
Gross and Hashimr looking at each other in wondering
Panel 167
Medium shot
Amro speaks, in front of Gross and Hashimr
Amro: ((if there is a chance, even one in a million, to be able to take revenge on that damned organization and set my planet free, it does not need any kind of thinking.))
Panel 168
Medium shot
Gross is standing and Hashimr is rising from a chair and Amro is looking at them.
Gross: ((So let us do it, we have no time to lose))
Page 29
Panel 169
Medium shot
the picture shows another small hall. One of its walls has a large screen above a lot of buttons. Next to the screen, there is a bed coming out of the wall. There is a helmet with a small screen, attached to many wires that connect to the wall itself above the bed beside the screen. Sarko and Myle help Amro to lie on the bed, Hashimr and Gross are standing next to him, in attention. At the helmet stands a handsome man in his middle age, his face shows goodness and concern. He is wearing white overcoat (as a doctor ) and a pair of elegant glasses.
Panel 170
Medium shot
Hashimr talking to Amro, pointing by his hand to the man in the white coat: ((Amro, let me introduce you to the prime responsible for modifying device Power, Dr. Hayer and He will tell you the details of the experiment you will go through.))
Panel 171
Close up shot
Amro, who is lying on the bed: ((it is my honor))
Panel 172
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer , without speaking, looks at Amro in deep sorrow and sadness.
Panel 173
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer, Amro on the bed and Gross and Hashimr standing.
Dr.Hayer talking to Amro: ((you should know first, son, we have not tested the device yet, and we don't know exactly what may ....))
Panel 174
Close up shot
Hashimr firmly: ((we have already told him so, Dr. Hayer ... we shall proceed to the details of the experiment directly, we have no time to lose))
Panel 175
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer looks at Hashimr with an angry, challenging look.
Page 30
Panel 176
Amro looks astonished.
Panel 177
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer looks away from Hashimr
Dr. Hayer: ((you will wear this helmet on your head .. and then you will be totally anesthetized))
Panel 178
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer points to a large button below the big screen
Dr. Hayer: ((the experiment will start as soon as I click on this button))
Panel 179
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer: ((the experiment itself will not take more than half an hour .. you will Wake up from anesthesia after some time to know the exact results of the experiment))
Panel 180
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer talking to Amro: ((with the device, we will be planting a highly-intelligent program in your brain that will help you a lot, if the test succeeds, in opening the power gates.))
Page 31
Panel 181
Close up shot
Hayer's face: ((many things we can not know certainly till you go through the experiment. Then if the experiment success ,we will put you in a hard training ,if we can)
Panel 182
Close up shot
Amro wondering: ((if you can?))
Panel 183
Close up shot
Gross: ((Sifry Empire is fiercely chasing us as we have told you .. so we may have to interrupt your training period and send you back to your Planet if things get worse .. and then it will all up to you ))
Panel 184
Close up shot
Hashimr leaning on the bed, on which Amro is lying and looking away from him, whispering: ((that is if the experiment success in the first place.))
Panel 185
Medium shot
Silence dominated the room and all of them are still
Panel 186
Close up shot
Amro and his features reflect resolve and determination: ((Let's start .. we have no time to waste.))
Page 32
Panel 187
Medium shot
Hashimr, Hayer and Gross are standing attentively looking at Amro
Gross: ((You are right .. Go ahead, Dr. Hayer))
Panel 188
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer holds a helmet and fixes it on Amro's head.
Panel 189
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer at the big screen, which is covering the wall, pressing some buttons under it. on the screen appears an image of Amro's brain and the large tumor which has a darker color.
Panel 190
Close up shot
the picture Focuses on the tumor
Panel 191
Close up shot
the picture shows Dr. Hayer who held his eyebrows in concentration.
Panel 192
Medium shot
Dr. Hayer picks up a small circular patch from his pocket. It looks like wound patches and raises it in front of his face
Hayer: ((as soon as I fix this patch on your forehead. You will immediately be in a complete anesthesia. And then we will begin our experiment. Are you ready?))
Page 33
Panel 193
Close up shot
Amro in a deciding tone, Lying on the bed and a helmet on his head: ((yes))
Panel 194
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer's hesitant sad face.
Panel 195
Medium shot
Gross, Hashimr and Hayer surrounding Amro's bed.
Gross: ((Come on Doctor .. we do not have time))
Panel 196
Close up shot
Amro's Face and Hayer's hand placing the patch on his forehead gently.
Panel 197
Close up shot
Amro closes his eyes weakly while Hayer withdraws his hand.
Panel 198
Medium shot
Hayer looks at Gross and Hashmir who strictly looks back at him.
Panel 199
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer lowers his head and eyes in sadness
Page 34
Panel 200
Close up shot
Dr. Hayer's hand presses the red button at the bottom of the big screen
Panel 201
Close up shot
the Screen at the top of the Amro's helmet is now flashing brightly.
Panel 201
Medium shot
Amro's body is shaking strongly while he is anesthetized , and the helmet screen's light is flashing more brightly. Innumerable data is flowing on the screen that covers the wall. Gross and Hashmir are nervously watching Amro. Hayer continues pressing buttons.
Panel 202
Medium shot
red alarm light is flashing inside the room. Gross, Hashimr and Hayer , in panic, are all looking up at the ceiling where the alarm amplifiers go. Amro is still shaking on the bed undergoing the experiment.
Panel 203
Close up shot
the picture focuses on Hashimr looking at the Amplifiers and screaming seriously: ((what happens?!))
Panel 204
Close up shot
The big screen on the wall shows many military spacecraft surrounding the ship
Voice over loudspeaker: ((sir .. spacecraft with Empire Sifry flag are surrounding us everywhere.))
Page 35
Panel 205
Close up shot
Three small panels show the faces of: Gross (a front picture ) and Hashimr (while looking up at the amplifiers) and Hayer (a side profile) their eyes are widely open in horror.
Panel 206
Close up shot
Gross's appalled face, he says: (how? How did they find us?)
Panel 206
Medium shot
as panel 202 but now Gross is leaning to the wall falling apart. Hayer is looking at Amro with the shock on his face. Hashimr is talking to the Amplifiers: ((carry out the escape plan immediately))
Panel 207
Medium shot
Sfx:
Sound of an explosion
The same panel , but here the ship is shaking. Gross, Hashimr and Hayer are lurching.
Voice over amplifier: ((we cannot, sir .. we are completely surrounded))
Panel 208
Medium shot
The same panel but here Hashimr is running towards the door
Hashimr: ((I'm coming immediately to the control room))
Panel 209
Close up shot
Gross, kneeling on his knees and his hands, in defeat and sadness
Gross: ((we have lost everything .. We have lost the last hope))
Panel 210
Close up shot
Hayer's appalled shocked face
Page 36
Panel 211
Close up shot
Hayer's face is now decisive.
Panel 212
Medium shot
Hayer runs towards the buttons and press them fast. On the screen, an image of innumerable data, while Gross is looking at him in wonder.
Panel 213
Close up shot
Gross: ((What are you doing? It's over))
Panel 214
Medium shot
Hayer turns and runs quickly towards Amro, whose body began to relax and the light on the helmet's screen began to fade and the big screen on the wall is still full of data
Hayer yells: ((I'll try to save him))
Panel 215
Close up shot
Hayer's face as he screaming: ((he is the last hope we have))
Panel 216
Close up shot
Amro's face, and a light shines in the entire picture
-------------------
Page 37
Panel 217
Close up shot
Amro's face that suddenly opens his eyes. He was lying on his bed at home
Panel 218
Medium shot
Amro sits up on the bed and looks through the window to the night and the moon. On his face appear questioning and wondering looks. beside the bed was his wheelchair
Panel 219
Close up shot
Amro held his eyebrows in wonder
Amro, to himself: ((A dream?!))
Panel 220
Close up shot
Amro looks at his feet
Panel 221
Close up shot
the picture shows Amro's feet. (he is trying to move it , but it doesn't)
Panel 222
Close up shot
he sets his head back on the pillow and closes his eyes, holding his head with his hand in confusion
Amro: ((What a strange dream))
Page 38
Panel 223
Close up shot
Sfx:
the sounds of harsh knocks (outside the room on the home main door)
Amro turns towards his room closed door, he held his eyebrows in astonishment and concern
Panel 224
Medium shot
Picture showing the closed door of the room and Amro gets up on the bed
Ramy's confused and frightened voice from behind the door: ((who is it? Who is at the door?))
Husky voice answers: ((police ... Open the door))
Panel 225
Close up shot
Amro's eyes widen in panic and nervousness
Panel 226
Medium shot
Sfx:
Voice of the knocks grows louder
The same Picture as panel 224
Ramy whispers: ((mum, hide in Amro's room ... Hurry Up))
Panel 227
Close up shot
Mother opens the door of Amro's room and entering without looking at Amro's bed.
Panel 228
Close up shot
the mother stands at the closed door looking at Amro and her face reflects astonishment
Amro: ((mom?))
Panel 229
Close up shot
the mother's tears are shed in joy and deep affection
Mother: ((Amro ... you are back my son!!))
Page 39
Panel 230
Close up shot
Ramy from outside the room: ((Well ...I'll get the door now))
Amro talks to himself in a surprise: ((back?!))
Amro to his mother: ((What is going on mom?))
Panel 231
Medium shot
Mother is embracing Amro , crying, and Amro looks astonished
Panel 232
Close up shot
Mother with her tears running down her cheeks: ((three full days, Amro ... Where have you been, son?? I was about to die of worries))
Panel 233
Close up shot
Amro whispers to himself in a surprise: ((three days?!))
Panel 234
Medium shot
a picture of the door, which is opened by force, Ramy pushed through it to fall under Amro's bed. A string of blood spilled on his lips. At the door, two evil and huge policemen appear. They are armed with two modern big rifles.
One of the policemen: ((Why were you late getting the door, you idiot?))
Panel 235
Close up shot
Amro shows anger on his face and in his eyes
Page 40
Panel 236
Close up shot
Ramy, who was on the ground, looks up to Amro, he says weakly: ((Amro .. you are back my brother at last!))
Panel 236
Close up shot
Two police officers entering the room and one of them says: ((will teach you a hard lesson for that))
Panel 237
Close up shot
Amro screams in anger: ((What do we want? We didn't do anything wrong ))
Panel 238
Close up shot
Mother holds Ramy who is placed on the ground and cries: ((please do not harm my sons.))
Panel 239
Close up shot
the two policemen smile at each other ironically.
One of the policemen: you didn't do anything wrong???
Panel 240
Close up shot
One of the officers: Do you ever dare do wrong, you bugs?? .. This is a usual inspection.
Page 41
Panel 241
Medium shot
one of the policemen harshly pushing the mother next to Amro on the bed. Ramy tries to get up.
Ramy: please do not hurt my mother and brother.
Panel 242
Close up shot
Police, by his strong hand, raises Ramy high from his shirt collar and Ramy appears frail and weak
Police: ((shut up you moron .. No one tells us what to do))
Panel 243
Medium shot
Policeman throws Ramy harshly to hit the wall
Panel 243
Close up shot
Ramy falls unconscious
Panel 244
Close up shot
Amro screams strongly in anger: ((you bastards))
Panel 245
Close up shot
The policeman turned to Amro and says sarcastically: ((What's this? Who is that brave who wants to die now?))
Page 42
Panel 246
Medium shot
Mother falls down on her knees at the policeman's feet begging him: ((Please forgive him ... Please do not harm him ... He is paralyzed))
Panel 247
Close up shotPolice hold mother by the hair in a cruel way. On the mother's face appears Pain.
Police: ((paralyzed?! And speak in such insolence! You did not bring him up right!))
Panel 248
Close up shot
Police slapped mother firmly. He throws her to the ground under the other policeman's feet.
Panel 249
Close up shot
The policeman who hit the mother turned to Amro said: ((Now to see this little punk….))
Panel 250
Close up shot
Police stops his words suddenly and his eyes widens in amazement.
Page 43
Panel 251
Close up shot
The other officer holds the mother by her neck and gets her up. Mother in suffocating pain trying to remove the officer's hand hopelessly
The officer: ((so you must be punished for your son's misbehavior))
Panel 252
Close up shot
Police raises the rifle determining to hit the mother in the head with the end of the rifle.
Panel 253
Close up shot
Mother in suffocating pain trying to remove the officer's hand hopelessly
Panel 254
Close up shot
a strong hand with one electric current around holds the policeman's hand in the air before it reaches the mother.
Panel 255
Close up shot
Police looks at him with a surprise.
Page 44
Panel 256
Medium shot
Amro stands on his feet holding strongly the policeman's hand and holding, with the other hand, the neck of the other police officer who tries to free his neck in vain. The picture shows limited electric currents around Amro's body. His eyes are lit brightly. His blue hair is now a bit longer to reach his shoulders .and his body appearance is a bit stronger . Amro appears angry and very aggressive... And on his forehead appeared the mark of the gates brightly red.
<img height="64" width="65">
Panel 257
Close up shot
Sfx:
Sound of bones breaking
Amro's hand pressing the policeman arm hardly. He breaks it and the rifle drops down from his hand.
Panel 258
Close up shot
Policeman screams in pain
Panel 259
Close up shot
Amro's face, screaming in anger and gates marks on his forehead, shines more and more brightly.
Panel 260
Medium shot
the picture shows Amro from the back standing alone in a dark room, in front of a far huge closed gate.
Hayer's voice echoes inside the room: ((Welcome Amro))