So, my inciting incident, one of my MCs is 11. Main bulk of the story is later (I'm thinking she's about 18 or so)
Now, I want/need for someone from the inciting incident to recognise her, even though he hasn't seen her inbetween. I don't mean straight away, but he sees how she is with a certain other person, hears her name and looks closer and OMG it's her! Shit! Plop hits fan.
Believable? Or should I make her slightly older at inciting incident time? (I could bump it up to about 13, but not much more as in this culture, she'd be married off by then)
Now, I want/need for someone from the inciting incident to recognise her, even though he hasn't seen her inbetween. I don't mean straight away, but he sees how she is with a certain other person, hears her name and looks closer and OMG it's her! Shit! Plop hits fan.
Believable? Or should I make her slightly older at inciting incident time? (I could bump it up to about 13, but not much more as in this culture, she'd be married off by then)
