A Thrilling Dilemma

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Hi, everyone...

I have an issue and I'm hoping to get a little advice. I've been in the query process for agents for a while now and have been very fortunate. There has been a great deal of interest in my book. So, I have a number of fulls and partials presently sitting on some great agents' desks. One of those agents offered rep today (hooray!). That's not the problem, of course.

I know the drill of reaching out to all other agents with fulls and making them aware of the offer. I did this today and am waiting to hear back.

However, one particular agent...let's call him "super bad-ass agent"...expressed great interest in my query/sample pages and requested a full. However, he only accepts exclusive submissions (I did not know this until AFTER I queried; it's not mentioned in his sub requirements). When he requested, I already had fulls out, so I informed him of this. He said "No problem. If they pass, send it over. No need to re-query. I really like this concept." Keep in mind, this guy is one of the top dogs (if not THE top dog) in my genre.

What do I do with him given my current circumstance? Let's say all other agents with fulls respond quickly and either say "no thanks" or "I want to offer too". Do I then reach out to super bad-ass agent and say "Hey, man. You've got a few days to decide whether or not you want to rep this." Do I keep putting off the offers until he makes up his mind (and potentially says "no")?; I know this option is a stupid one, just throwing it out there.

Furthermore, with offers on the table, will he even consider the MS because at that point is it really "exclusive"? Do I just move on and look at whatever offers are on the table when the dust settles; never having given him the chance to look?

As you can probably tell, I'm conflicted because while the offer I received today is incredibly flattering, I don't want to always wonder what would have happened if I didn't reach out to super bad-ass agent one last time.

Would the simplest thing to do just be to shoot him an email and ask how he would like to proceed (if it all)? What is the proper etiquette here?

I'd appreciate your take on this situation as I couldn't find a similar scenario in previously existing threads. Forgive me if I missed something.

By the way, the success I've had so far is in no small part thanks to this wonderful forum. I really should post more but I read here daily. You have all helped me tremendously. I wouldn't have these sorts of questions were it not for AW! Thank you for that!
 

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I think this is a "what have you got to lose?" situation. Honestly, I'm pretty sure most agents who read only with exclusive do so because they don't want to compete. But so what- you'll never know until you ask, right?

Were it me, I'd prepare myself for a decline, but send an email anyway, letting Mr. Bad-Ass know that I'd been very excited by his interest in my book, that I'd just received an offer, and then inquire whether he was interested in taking an look.

What's he going to do? Not read it even more than he's already not reading it? You never know.

Congrats and good luck!
 

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First question you need to ask yourself: How do you feel about the agent who offered rep? If you like them, work well with them, and they are a good, respectable agent--you may just want to go in that direction. If you really, really, really like Mr. Bad Ass, and think that NOT ONLY is he cool, but that he's better for your project, you can work with him better, and you would be much happier with him, then you may decline and keep trying.

You could e-mail him explaining the situation, but since he doesn't do non-exclusives, I'm not sure how productive that would be. Go with your gut. Good luck!
 

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Excellent advice.

If you really, really, really like Mr. Bad Ass, and think that NOT ONLY is he cool, but that he's better for your project, you can work with him better, and you would be much happier with him, then you may decline and keep trying
Thanks, Ryan. Great point. Just because he is "the man" when it comes to my genre doesn't mean that he is the right agent for MY project. It would be "cool" to call him my agent (sure, it would look great on the website; pretty impressive) but if he can't sell it/isn't passionate about it...who gives a shit? Obviously, I don't know this yet - the guy hasn't had a chance to read it. The agent offering today may not OWN the genre - but he DOES have impressive sales, A-list writers, a track record.

What's he going to do? Not read it even more than he's already not reading it?
And I laughed! Thanks, GB! So true. You rule.

I'm going to take the advice here and reach out to him tomorrow and ask if he wants to see it regardless. I'll report back with the response.

More thoughts? Keep 'em comin'!

Thanks, everyone!
 

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Approach super-bad-ass agent, and tell him that you have an offer of representation but want to give him the opportunity to have a few days to read your novel before responding to it.

The offer alone will make him sit up and take notice - he only won't read the novel if he wasn't that interested anyway, or if his schedule's too busy to fit it in.

You can't lose, anyway.