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I really enjoy medical books, romance or otherwise. Not sure I could write one though...
This ended today. I did sub a chapter to them and synopsis.
Good luck! I subbed a chapter and a synopsis to receive some incredible feedback in return.
They also asked to see more.![]()
I sent one in too! I'm waiting for my reply and trying NOT to obsessively check my email.
Kill a patient or a coworkerIt's th romance part I have trouble with- I always end up killing someone![]()
I received a request for more and some suggestions on deepening the emotional conflict. I'm going for it!
Still nothing here...
I did hear back. Apparently I used secondary characters too much, and I need to fully develop the two MC's in the one chapter I submitted.
Considering the only secondary character was a nurse, a friend of the MC who barely spoke that bit leaves me confused.
In regards to the two MC's, I thought it took more than one chapter to fully develop a well rounded character. I guess I'm wrong about that. *shrugs*